[Crossover] Blade Bro, Please Spare Me!

The water is real water. It feels like a spoken bedtime story. A sentence should not be too long, there is no need for foreshadowing, there are scenes with many modifiers, descriptions of the environment, one line connecting the other, and no other structures (I have a deep understanding of this format after telling bedtime stories for more than three years)

Automatic replacement of Hanamaru op in the brain

So this is about watching the protagonist open a hotel???

!! I thought qwqq was updated

Emmmm Guawazi has no chance to appear qwqq

I'm saying something, the real title is Brother Knife, but the content of Brother Knife basically has no sense of existence, so when I started looking for the protagonist, it felt a bit factory-made.

I really can't help but want to say it. The subject matter is very good and very attractive, but the writing is not good. The whole first-rate hydrology, the system settings are unclear, and there are a lot of foreshadowings but nothing is written. Why the protagonist traveled through time is not mentioned, and the identity of the protagonist's parents is not mentioned. There is no follow-up to Toki no Kyoto. Shinichi Kudo is not easy to write, so don't add him. There are several pairs of cps for no reason. In addition, what is the meaning of the historical figures who were rescued through time and space? There are only a few sentences about the rescue, and there is no difference or solution for the various liaisons. The method is that the protagonist is bored and has no choice but to stay. The protagonist has no flesh and blood. He is just a paper character. There is no foreshadowing set up at the beginning and there is no explanation. It is better to travel directly with the game system. The subject matter is really good. You really get into hydrology later. Really, even if you carefully set up the hot spring villa, it is just water. In the sky, you can link multiple planes and receive people from multiple worlds. Setting up such a place, not to mention making a magic road to quickly reach the destination, at least has something like a transfer array. Several pictures show the boss leading the way. It takes a long time and a long way, which deepens the suspicion of other anime characters. There is no description of the room where you live. There are so many themed rooms. You can learn from it. There is a golden finger with such a good system and such a bad use. I really can't say, in addition, this game is really good. It's useless. What's the use of writing this except for writing? Besides, you have too many characters. Just writing the names is probably enough for two pictures. In the later stage, they disappeared directly and a group of paper people. To be honest, this is the second time I have read it. I am really disappointed. I really like this setting, but the author wrote it. Alas, I am just saying it because this is the second time that I have been fooled by the copywriting. I really can't help it, but I really hope that the author can take a good look at it and not waste your good ideas. I hope the author writes better and better.

... Tsk... Kudo Shinichi's imagination is really speechless.

It's a bit watery, and it's like reading an essay, it's written in a special format.

There are quite a lot of foreshadowings, but they don't connect and are confusing; and the characters are too thin.