Little Trouble

I don't understand, my mother is a very discerning person, isn't she? Then I thought she had some last resort reason, but what happened??? And from the previous article, I thought she had never seen much of the world. Her family had been unhappy since she was a child, the person she married was not very good, and she didn't have the ability to live her own life. What happened??? So why did she suddenly get married, and why did she choose a good-for-nothing man? Her life after marriage was amazing, but she didn't notice anything before the marriage? Her parents have no objection? Did you just make do with it after you found out after you got married? Her daughter was in such a miserable state, and she never thought of talking to her husband? Or have we just talked about it and let it go? And then they gave birth to a son? Putting all this aside, as a college student, she can't work for her daughter? My daughter was going to be married to an old man, or to an old man whose wives had died several times, and she didn't resist? Where are the children's grandparents? They seem to have disappeared. They don't feel sorry for their granddaughter or their daughter. And what is the job of the heroine's father? He drinks every day, can't even get hundreds of thousands of dollars out, sells his daughter, and then disappears when it's time to disappear? On a business trip??? And it is reasonable to suspect that he may engage in domestic violence. Since he is not very good at the children (I feel that his younger brother should have no objection), his mother does not love him, he does not make much money, his health is not good, he has a bad temper, and his mother has the ability to survive, so why not get a divorce and make herself so miserable. Don't talk about mommy. It took years of hard work to become true love? She has a best friend who graduated from college like her, is young, beautiful and has no shortage of money. Wouldn't she think it could be better? And her mother, why would she rather marry her daughter casually? From the previous article, she doesn't look like that kind of parent. Why is she urging her so hard that her daughter is still happy to marry such a person? When going on a blind date, you have to choose a good one. At any rate, you have to be able to match your three views and be able to talk to each other. Mom is not the kind of person who can't get married. Isn't there a lot of people chasing her? Isn't it just like this? Another best friend discovered that her mother's life after marriage was like this. Her daughter had to take out a loan, and she looked haggard. She didn't look like her peers anymore, and she wasn't angry or unhappy. It was as if she didn't see anything. She just sighed, "She will always be the most beautiful in my heart." I??? To be honest, I really like this article. I just don't understand this mother's situation!!! Also, the previous make-up lesson was no longer mentioned, and the roommate who left because of something had completely disappeared. (To be honest, I always thought that the roommate who talked less was like an old vampire, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha) And the one who had the abortion at the beginning, I thought she still had a role to play, but in the end we saw each other forever. Wow, but I still like this article very much. I love you so much. I hope you can fill in the pit next time (ˊ?ˋ*)?

Aunt Zhuang and Li Qiu Ming are really upset. I feel so sad.

[I would like to make some serious suggestions without any malice. I hope you can take a look at them] Generally speaking, this book looks very comfortable, cute and warm. But there are a few things I want to tell the author [Because it's rare to encounter someone whose writing style is so comfortable, so I hope the author can do better, right?] ① There are many things that read like foreshadowing and are not explained clearly. The sense of déjà vu is very serious and the reading is anticlimactic. ② Because many things were not explained clearly, it seemed that the process of shaping the character had stopped abruptly. It was not full and the character seemed to have collapsed. The obvious ones are the several characters surrounding the father who values ​​boys over girls and has a bad temper. The most obvious thing is the creation of the character of mother. She is not shaped like a specific person, but just a tool to promote the desired plot. Wherever the plot progresses, what kind of character she will be. For example, when my mother was a child, she would take the blame for her aunt's failure to hand in her homework. Although it was a small matter, at least she was not someone who just accepted things and had no decisiveness. It's understandable that she chose to get married. After all, the aunt didn't confess her love. It can be said that because my mother didn't love anyone, it wasn't too bad to get married casually. However, in the plot, the mother seems to love Gu Yin very much, and she is a gentle person who will accept even if Gu Yin likes a girl. However, if you look carefully, you will find that the mother has never done anything really good for Gu Yin. For example, even the aunt knew that it was difficult for Gu Yin to find the money for college, so she chose to give Gu Yin money. But her mother only verbally expressed her care and love. Could it be that Gu Yin had to ask her for money before she would give it to him? And over the years, has she ever been angry at Gu Wangtian's shameful behavior towards her daughter? Ever had an argument? Why not divorce? Even to the point where my daughter might not even be able to go to college and would be married off to an old man, she has never had any quarrels or anger. Is it reasonable? Without reading the subsequent plot, I would only classify my mother as a cowardly, submissive, silent accomplice, or even one of the obstacles for the heroine to come out. Too bad. There was no mention of the family plot. I thought there would be a plot where my mother suddenly called Gu Yin and said that your dad and I were separated, which could provide foreshadowing and complete the characters, but unfortunately there was no such plot. Then I looked through the comments and found that you originally planned to write this emotional line as "be", so I can probably understand why, but this is really wrong. There are many directions for this pair of be, and this kind of direction of character collapse is the strangest. Maybe you just don't want to go through the divorce plot, and it would be difficult to be completely divorced, but because there is no quarrel about divorce, the whole character of the mother is very thin and weak. It is even impossible to imagine that the aunt will continue to like such a mother. This affection will seem too deliberate. The problem that feels very wrong is, don't be for the sake of be, because the plot will be like this, and the characters must choose to do this at this time. But the character's personality is like this, so she will choose to do this when the road forks. Unfortunately, after stepping out like this, it will lead to a sad ending. This kind of development is more logical. In summary, the main shortcomings of this book are that the foreshadowing is not explained clearly, and the ending is hasty without writing what should be written. When encountering the plot, the characters are easily dominated by the plot, and the characters appear to be unfulfilled, thin and even conflicting. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh between through and through is actually very good, so I hope that in the next book or subsequent books, H. K. A. Will write better

The pre-collection of "She's Finally Mine [Rebirth]" is in the archives. If you like it, you can save one for me ~ Chirmi-3- When Morning and Night fell into the bar and saw Bo Muyan, the woman was being dragged by her short, lame husband to toast a middle-aged man in the booth. The woman's eyes were dull and the man scolded her, but she suffered humbly and cowardly. The deliberate smile on her face was flattering and ugly, but it could not hide her stunning beauty. This was the first encounter between Chao Xiluo and her, a startling glimpse, and then they met again, always at night. The second time we met was at a busy intersection. Sitting in the car morning and evening, I accidentally glanced at the woman and her ugly husband who were being watched by everyone. The woman was slapped by her husband in public, and the makeup fell off, revealing the scars that were so red and swollen that it was almost impossible to hide them under her beautiful face. Zhao Xiluo asked the driver to stop the car, and when he went to look for her, the woman had already been taken away by her husband, leaving nothing but gossip and idle remarks from the spectators. The third time, Chao Xiluo took the initiative to find the door. That was a day that had gone back ten years. After crossing half of the country day and night, I finally found the person I had no time to save in my previous life in front of a dilapidated hut full of mud. The stars in the girl's eyes have dimmed, and they are so gray that they are so suffocated that no light can shine through. But fortunately, this time, I was finally able to take her home. *Shan is reborn, salvation literature, under the age of 3, with an age difference of three years. *Sweet article.

By the way, what is the situation of so-and-so as a tutor...

It feels like the few small holes buried in the front have not been filled in, and the tone difference between the front part and the back part is a bit big, but it still looks good.

In the house in the previous article, the two of them had not yet met their parents, and they did not say anything about the thoughts of her straight male cancer father who favored boys over girls. The whole article gave me the impression that it was a narrative, very bland, and this narrative gave me the feeling that it was only half-written. At the beginning, the heroine lived in a family that favored boys over girls. During the process, she worked and chased her girlfriend. At the end, the two of them got together without telling her brother or father. Putting the younger brother aside, the father is the main one (the head of the family, no one dares to resist). There is still a lot of room for development in the future, but it is suddenly over??? What if her father disagrees and her mother rises up to resist, and she and Aunt Zhuang live happily ever after? What if her father, who likes money, agrees? All in all, it felt like a very bland narrative to me, and it was not finished yet. The whole article has no ups and downs, it is very dull, emmmm... No matter how you put it, it feels like a narrative article. The above is purely a personal opinion, but congratulations on the completion and spread the flowers!??ヽ(°▽°)ノ? Throw one to express my love for you, just like the surging river, and like the Yellow River flooding out of control!

Why does Bai Hewen say that he is her boyfriend? Dbq is incapable of accepting it.

Why did the first kiss take place in a toilet stall??!!

Lin Yi only said sorry but did not say the reason for the rejection. Was it because he wanted Gu Yin to discover Xiaotu's confession voice on his own? Then why did Lin Yi confess his love in the dormitory again? I don't understand the change here.