A Drizzle Paints My Hometown
一簑烟雨画故里
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 97k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
32Chapters
23Favorites
423Clicks per chapter
2Comments
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一簑烟雨画故里
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Obviously there is a lot to say. The emotional line is too short. The previous road to getting rich takes up more than half of the article. There is no sign of this attack at all, and there is the emperor. . . . . . In fact, I think the writing is okay, but the ending comes too quickly and the rest is too sloppy. It feels a bit unfinished.
I've read the first and last chapters. The writing is pretty good, but no one has read it. The ending is a bit rushed. I'll take a look when I have time. Big cheers to the author (???_??)?!