[Hunter X Hunter] The Colorless One

First, congratulations on the completion. Thank you to the author for writing the article with great care and shaping the heroine. This is really rare in the JJ fandom area. The overall feeling after watching it is that it is a pity and a bit anticlimactic.,,, But in the later stages, it became a bit erratic, and the plot turned very suddenly. Usually, the conflict events described as the climax were only briefly mentioned in the memory, but this is not a big problem. What affected the audience the most was the ending, where the heroine was too miserable. I obviously knew that there was a problem between the vice-president and my brother since I entered the association, and I had been on guard against it. As a result, I was played in the heart of the applause from the beginning to the end. After so many years of experience and knowing so many people, it turned out to be useless. The attitude of the vice president is also quite erratic. He seems to want to control the heroine and use her as a tool, but his behavior is very unpredictable. One moment he is confident that he can control the heroine, another moment he wants to kill the heroine, and sometimes he wants to destroy the heroine. The turning point in the middle is just black material on the Internet. This part is due to a lack of description, which leads to the impression of "that's it?" Then comes the most important ending. The heroine was on guard but it turned out to be of no use. She was imprisoned in a research institute and given various drugs, and in the end she became addicted to drugs. . . This is really too tragic. Addiction to drugs is no joke. It completely destroyed her. In the end, the heroine had already wanted to die and was about to be in a rhythm. However, the corresponding vice president paid a lot. With only a light sentence in the extra chapter, after being hunted for several years, the heroine lightly let go of her hatred for freedom. . . It doesn't mean that you have to remember hatred and seek revenge, but the question is, you have been harmed like this, don't you want your enemy to deserve what he deserves? At least let him pay some price, but this part was all brushed aside. Indeed, it has been emphasized in the later period that the heroine longs for freedom and does not want to be restrained. Hatred is indeed a kind of restraint, and judging from the heroine's performance all the time, she is also the type who will be angry for others but not very angry for herself. However, she can let go of the big hatred of drug addiction so much that she doesn't love herself. Even after she was finally rescued, didn't so many of her relatives and friends react to this? Although the hunter is not interested in revenge or anything like that, there is nothing. As a reader, I feel really uncomfortable about the ending. The core problem is that the degree of persecution of the heroine and the price paid by the villain are not equal. After reading it, I feel like, wow, the vice president is the biggest winner in the whole story! He can control everyone in the palm of his hand and do whatever he wants. He only needs to pay a small price, but in the end he can still be free and comfortable, making a lot of money. So overall it feels like a shame. The early part is very well written, one of the rare hunter stories. The later part is a bit mediocre but that's fine. However, the ending is downgraded because there's too much left unexplained and it's not handled well, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

This is one of the top five articles I have read among Xiaoyi's fanfics. Although I didn't see it being very uncomfortable to beat Pariston up, there may be a lot of things to consider in reality. The author is great! Thank you very much for bringing us such an excellent work!

The author is really jumping wildly between be and he

The protagonist who cannot be defined, the mysterious identity, the magnificent but gradually growing life. I remembered a sentence: For some people, just being alive is wonderful enough.

0.0 Free article, really generating electricity for love

Everyone is complaining about Midori, and feel that the person who caused her harm should not be treated like this, because we feel sorry for her, and even feel that she is miserable. I thought the same when I saw the ending, but after Midori came back, she was undoubtedly happy, and she should have obtained the 'freedom' she had been pursuing. Due to her personality, she gradually didn't care about the people who caused her harm, maybe because she felt it was unnecessary. At this point, I suddenly felt that this was Green's own choice. In her eyes, my righteous indignation was probably unreasonable, and maybe a bit troublesome? So I was relieved, this is good, Green should not be bound by hatred, she is free.

This fanfic is very good to me, and it can be ranked in the top ten in my heart, but why do I feel so empty after reading it?

After reading this book, I want Pari to eat

The last ten chapters are really well written! In my opinion, the feeling of this article is similar to that of the original comic, which is world line A, and the world in the article is world line B. Some characters are indeed a lot gentler than the original ones, but they are real and feasible. It's great, great, and I have no education and can only win praise!!!

After reading so many hunter stories, if the heroine was abused at the beginning, I would simply stop reading it. However, in this article, the heroine was abused later, and I felt that it would be worse than the heroine committing suicide. As a time traveler and a flower grower, I should have an attitude towards DP that I can kill without humiliation. This kind of mess makes me really angry, just like being informed about a day off, buying a lot of delicious food, having many good plans, packing my things and getting ready to go home, only to be informed that the holiday is cancelled. Do you understand, the author is so big [crying]