The Lazy Great Shaman Transmigrates to Another World

Finished with flowers~ Let me tell you my personal feelings, don't criticize your opinions. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: It can be seen that the author is trying his best to make the layout as large as possible, but it is indeed a bit small. For example, there are only two places in the entire continent that have natural resources and treasures. For example, the entire human race has only one empire. For example, when the town was developing, attacks and explorations from all parties were blocked by bugs. All of them have been briefly mentioned, but they can actually be studied in depth. With such a large human race, such a large angel race, and such a large continent, not all races can only have two types: arrogance, crazy delivery of food, and direct summation of self-knowledge. There will definitely be dimensionality reduction attacks when they first develop. Another example is the development bug. The teachers at the Great Witch College in the small town have only studied for a short time, right? The students have only been studying for a short time, right? Are you going to be successful so soon? So soon we can directly benchmark the childhood education of nobles? And when the town expanded to the territory, Earl Purcell was defeated alone, and the entire territory was exhausted? Conspiracy? Infighting? Where did it go? Even the most common, simplest, most logical and most bloody kidnapping plot is not included. Although it is nothing like that, it is too simplistic to simplify it to say that Count Purcell alone defeated the whole country and the whole country was at a loss. There is also a bug in the protagonist's strength. I remember at the beginning of the article it was said that the heroine would be afraid of the Grand Magister. He said that the Magister was a cat and the Grand Magister was a tiger. Later, he punched each of the Grand Magisters. Moreover, there is no description of the protagonist's strength growth throughout the whole process. He only says that the experiment has yielded results, but there is no mention of the setting that knowledge equals strength? Including the development of the town, the confrontation of forces, the revolution of the seminary, the power struggle in the temple, the development of power within the Witch God Cult (Erica and Flynn, the human race, the beast race and other races), the war between the Church of Light and the Angel Race, or the plague in the imperial capital. There are many places that can be written in depth, but too many places are simplified. It could be a very good subject matter, which is a pity. Maybe it's because Western fantasy novels are ranked by gmzz. Although it's not perfect, it's still great among online novels. I can't help but benchmark. Maybe I can understand the space limit (after all, the full text of gmzz, which is full of details, is 180 pieces), but I can always choose some of the same kind and write them in more depth? For example, if you want to write about a war, you can write about the war with the Seer Territory, the expansion of territory and the battles between various races, the temple, and the angel race. Or if you want to write about human nature, you can write about the rights of the imperial capital, plague, temples, and the Witch God Cult in detail. This text had the potential to become a long and high-quality article, but now it is simplified and looks like an outline article. Advantages. Probably because the author is not completely stupid, for example, he has the courage to arrange the plot of Flynn being provoked, such as the gradual alienation between Erica and her sister. It would be better if there are more details and foreshadowing. There are also several main supporting characters, who are actually well portrayed and not too facial. There are both conflicts and excitement, and the rhythm is quite reasonable. That's about it. It's very good for a novice writing writer. Click on it.

This change of Serena is really realistic. Some people are saying that women cannot be housewives because they will lose the right to choose in life, but Serena is the kind of person who takes the initiative to become a housewife. Of course, women can choose to become housewives, but when this trend becomes advocated by the authorities, the harm to women as a whole is what Erica hates or fears. Erica and Serena are like the two parties quarreling now.

This was the case for people in the Western Middle Ages. They believed in so-called gods and were completely reduced to lambs of the church. They were extremely ignorant. Rather than saying that these people were human beings, we could say that they were just a group of tools without self-awareness. Ancient China has always believed in pragmatism, and I only believe in things that are beneficial to me. I bow to my son when he is on the list, and bow to his daughter when she marries a good family. Whenever something goes wrong, I will scold you, "You thief, God is blind!"

Oh, I'm sorry. Who makes you the most patient?

Hahahahahahahahaha I'm sorry, who makes you the most patient?

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Ah, Michelle is so handsome!

Ah, you are so awesome. The part describing Ji Longyue as just a human made me laugh hhhh

In fact, it was also the time when the epidemic was at its worst. It was quite interesting to put aside personal emotions and observe the extreme evil and good of human beings from the perspective of an unintentional bystander (good talk in 2333).

Carl is really disgusting, and there are people upstairs or hahahahahaha