I'm Actually a Big Shot

I cried. God knows how much I loved this article, but it ended up being unfinished. Many things were not explained clearly, and the characters were not three-dimensional enough. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I was really into it from the beginning, but the last few chapters ended up being unfinished? ! It ended badly! ! It's really heartbreaking. Oh my god, I really like the first part of this book, but I personally feel that the ending is a bit too rushed. If the characters' emotions were more full of emotions and the plot was filled in more, it would definitely be a great book. 5555555

Suddenly I saw this article. The name is very interesting. I'm not familiar with it. The writing is okay. I'm not familiar with it. I read the comments again. It seems that the article is good. I plan to read it. . . When I clicked on the catalog, I actually ordered them all, (-???-???-???-???-???___-???-???-???-???-???) And swiped through it again~~

After reading it, I would like to make a brief comment. I personally felt that the previous part about the guide was quite good. After the Ghost Town Conference started, it became more and more strange. It was that kind of story. The story was too independent, and the final part to the human world was really inexplicable and rushed. In fact, there are many places that can be improved and continue to fill in the holes. Regarding the protagonist's life experience, he is locked in the tower. For the reason, the emotional line between the two parties is really a bit difficult to sort out, and the hole has not been filled. It is too difficult. If you can fill the hole, wrap up the events of the conference and then unravel the mystery, write some things in the conference well, and intersperse some clues. It will be better. Some clues about Yanling are really hasty and abrupt, but the front is really attractive?, Please give it a try, the author.

It's so well written in big letters, I can't get tired of it, it's great (?????)

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! When I first read it, I didn't notice that it was written two years ago! ! But this article is indeed a good article, but Cammy can pay more attention to the emotional drama of the protagonist. I personally think that the final promotion of the relationship between the two is too abrupt, and then the ending is a bit hasty. I hope that I will have a different feeling when I read the next wife's article.

I had guessed before that it might be Qing Xing Deng, but what is there about this race that has been left unsaid? ! ! !

Is it a bad ending? It's so uncomfortable.

Really like this article. . I kept waiting for Qing Xing to reveal his wife's identity and ended up dying in the end?

After reading it, the writing is okay. The ending is so abrupt, and many places are just mentioned in a rush, which is a bit uncomfortable.