War South of the City
战城南
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The heroine is so difficult, pathetic
The heroine is so difficult, pathetic
The description and setting are quite satisfying, but I heard that the ending is a bit regretful and I still have no motivation to continue reading. . . In fact, I really like the fearless and dedicated character of the martyr, but the true martyrdom of the martyr means that he has burned himself but still failed to fulfill his full merits. If the martyr can put himself to death and survive, it will be a very passionate story. Otherwise, I feel that it is more desolate. Although most of the stories are like this in reality, I still dare not watch it.
I read the first few chapters first and then read it to the end. I cried while reading it. It's such a good article that it's worth reading from the beginning.
I felt like I was overexerting myself. Although I really liked the setting and subject matter, I couldn't watch it several times.
After reading it, the concept is good and the sublimation of the main plot is also good, but the writing is too rough! It's not a problem with the writing style, the plot setting is too flat, it's not that the plot is mediocre, it's that the plot description has no sense of ups and downs. Except for the conflicting atmosphere in the last few pictures, the first few pictures are too confusing, and except for the plot of the sick plum, the rest is just passed by. In addition, the main tone of the writing style is not clear enough. The first part is often mixed with white text, and the second part is modern, and the sense of substitution is very abrupt. However, the ending is majestic and deserves praise.
The plot is too fast-paced, like a horse race. Some people write novels with a lot of background and environment descriptions. This one is better. There is no foreshadowing at all. It starts with dialogue between characters, and symbols are used indiscriminately. In a very serious and sad atmosphere, the sudden love between children is very entertaining.
The story of Yue Cheng is in "It's Hard to Get Beyond the City". The manuscript has been saved and will be published after about 30,000 to 40,000 words, so stay tuned!
Ahhhh, no, Li Bei died like this
Martyr???? Is this article a tragedy?