The young county princess Huo Changge married the Third Prince Xie Zhaoning, a man of extraordinary status, through a scheme to avenge her father. On the day her revenge was finally complete, Xie Zhaoning was implicated and thrown into prison.
The imperial family said that if Xie Zhaoning was willing to divorce her, they would spare his life out of consideration for their family ties.
But no one expected him to choose to die alongside his wife.
Only as she lay dying did Huo Changge realize how guilty she felt. She swallowed a cup of poisoned wine, and when she opened her eyes again, she had been reborn to a time when her father was still alive!
In this life, Huo Changge swore to treat Xie Zhaoning well. Once she won his heart, she would spoil him, love him, and respect him. But when they met again, she once more became the one being pursued.
Fine. She might not be able to beat him at pursuing, but she absolutely refused to lose when it came to spoiling him!
In the end, she couldn't beat him at that, either.
He was still the same Third Prince who had been willing to give his life for her.
*PS: Entirely fictional, all settings are my own. The dynasties are a complete hodgepodge~
*CP: Gentle, refined moonlight x charming, clever little ray of sunshine
*This work is exclusively published on Jinjiang Literature City with authorization. Reposting is prohibited. Thank you for supporting the official release~
Please add my column story, "Accidentally Provoking a Miaojiang Boy," to your collection:
When Qin Wan was fifteen, she was riding home when she happened upon a boy from Miaojiang.
At the time, the boy was badly wounded and close to death. Amid the howling wind and driving snow, he leaned against a tree and looked up at her. He was hauntingly beautiful, with an almost demonic charm and a dazzling smile.
Perhaps Qin Wan had been bewitched by him, or perhaps she only pretended to be. That very night, she brought the boy back to the General's Residence in Liangzhou and had him settled in a separate courtyard, where she arranged for him to be carefully treated.
To Qin Wan, people from other lands were like venomous snakes accustomed to lying dormant through the winter months, only to bare their fangs when spring came.
So she kept the boy like a rare exotic creature with broken wings, amusing herself by teasing and bantering with him, but never trusting him.
A year later, on the day of Jingzhe, Liangzhou fell.
Qin Wan was trapped alone behind enemy lines. Just as she fought until she was utterly exhausted, the Miaojiang boy came riding in, playing his flute and commanding snakes.
The boy bent down, picked up Qin Wan's fallen saber, and handed it to her. Scales of light shimmered between his pale fingers as he smiled with wicked tenderness. "I'll help you kill them all, all right?"
Qin Wan was prepared to die and still didn't trust him. She wiped the blood from the corner of her mouth and gave him a disingenuous reply. "Couldn't be better!"
Who could have guessed they would win a great victory...
Afterward, Qin Wan was the one confined to bed to recover.
Every night, the boy kept watch beside her bed and settled old scores. "Miss Qin, how exactly did you treat me before?"
Qin Wan eyed the little snake flicking its tongue around his wrist, tense and covered in cold sweat. Then she saw him slowly lean down, inch by inch, until his body pressed against hers. The silver ornaments dangling from his hair brushed her cheeks, cool and ticklish.
"You even tricked me into calling you big sister..."
"Big sister." The boy pinned her firmly beneath the covers, his smile full of meaning. "Do you remember?"
CP: Clearheaded, easygoing heroine who seems cool but is secretly kind x patient, scheming, devoted puppy-like hero who seems kind but is secretly ruthless
Note: Complete, happy ending
Theme: A raging fire spreads across the plains
After reading it last night, I thought about it for a long time and still thought I should write something. I am not a very expressive person, and I have never written such a long comment. I just wrote whatever came to my mind. Please forgive me if there are any imperfections.
First of all, the deepest feeling is regret, regret for Xie Zhaoning in his previous life. He is so good that I don't know what words to use to describe how good he is. In his previous life, Xie Zhaoning walked forward in the darkness with shackles on his back, but he still tried his best to light a lamp for Chang Ge. He hoped that she would live even if she hated him, but she would not end well in the end. Even if Changge is reborn and the two of them have a happy ending, it is still a pity for me. Changge is still the same Changge, but when Changge is reborn and takes Xie Zhaoning to break through the shackles, he will definitely not become the Xie Zhaoning who walked alone in the previous life. Xie Zhaoning in the previous life will still be alone after all. Maybe I separated my past life from this life too much. I always feel that if I have different experiences in my past life and this life, I am no longer exactly the same person. What I owe in my past life is what I owe after all. Even if I try to make up for it in this life, I am not the one who should make up for it. Of course, I am very happy that we are together in this life, but there is still a little bit of sadness that I can't get over.
Then, the characters in this article are well-developed and three-dimensional, such as Lian Xun. I originally thought that he was as vicious and selfish as his father, and he ignored blood relatives for the sake of imperial power, but he still cared about and protected his biological brother. Another example is Nan Yan. I really didn't expect that she would be the one who killed Lian Fengju in the end. I didn't know how he felt when he died in the hands of someone who was like an ant in his eyes. There are also the Queen, He Yuerong, Lian Zhen, Su Mei, etc. I won't go into details one by one. Everyone is flesh and blood. The only thing is that, in my personal opinion, Huo Xuan's role is a bit less. Except for the beginning, there is only a side description in the later period. In other words, there are fewer scenes in Northern Xinjiang. Of course, the main plot is still between the male and female protagonists in Zhongdu, but I think we can add a little bit about the Northern Xinjiang side. After all, the heroine is trying to break the deadlock in Northern Xinjiang, and the Northern Xinjiang side can't just explain everything, right?
What's more, the author's writing style is really good. The big scenes he wrote made me heart-wrenching and excited. I have some confidence in myself.
This seat is quite suitable for Lian Zhang. He thought the fifth prince was just a yandere, but he didn't expect him to be a pervert. Bah.
How long will it take? It's really annoying to keep putting it off. I feel like I really have no confidence in the author anymore.
I remember the first time I saw this novel was during the epidemic. I was locked at home and taking online classes. When I was reading it, I discovered that this book that attracted me seemed to be the work of a new writer. I also told my friends that I felt that I had discovered a treasure. It would definitely become popular in the future. I looked forward to the update every day. One day, the author fell ill and was very anxious. I hoped to get well soon. Later, I was even more sad when the update was discontinued. I came every day to see if Yijiu Da was back. Half a year has passed. The college entrance examination is over and I have been re-reading for a year. I waited too long and gradually forgot about it. Last night, I happened to see the heroine of a recent new drama is a female general. It suddenly occurred to me that I was amazed by a novel that was also a female general a few years ago. I thought about the name for a long time before I found the name of Changge Baby again. I stayed up all night for 10 hours to read it. I don't know what Yijiu has experienced in the past few years that caused the update to be not smooth. But now this book did not disappoint me and is still very attractive to me now! Still like it very much! ! ! So I hope Yijiu will continue to write, and I will definitely write more and more good works in the future!
Although, I still feel sorry for Xie Zhaoning in the previous life.
I would like to express my personal opinion. The author is really very strict with himself. At the beginning, I also felt that the heroine would have to go through a lot of time before the plot could get on the right track when she was young (I don't really like to read about childhood life, it can be short or long). This time the author changed the ages of the male and female protagonists, which is good, and the author's own interpretation is very good. I don't have enough brain, which is equivalent to the Chinese language annotation! I think the writing is really good, too.
Did I write the last two chapters incorrectly? Not good-looking either? Why do I feel more and more boring the more I write?
You have no comments anymore...
Can anyone tell me what the last two chapters were like?
The original plot in these two chapters was not logical enough and I readjusted it, but now after readjusting it, I feel that the plot seems a bit bland...
I burst into tears on the spot. Jpg
When you were about thirty or forty chapters in, you wanted to comment, so I posted my first comment on Jinjiang here.
I'm very happy that you are still continuing to write this article. During the two years when you were crazy about revising it, I and countless friends recommended this article. Unfortunately, one unfinished article is all the rage. I also evolved from waiting quietly at the beginning to making crazy complaints. The author, you know, I will open Jinjiang at a specific time every month to see if you have updated. Even I changed my account to continue this "tradition". Fortunately, you are back.
I originally planned to watch it after it was finished, but I couldn't help myself and finished it today. It's still the same as in my impression, but many of my favorite plots are gone, which is a bit regretful. The passion that can arouse my inner joy and joy is gone, but I still like it very much. The logic is much clearer and more reasonable. The most important thing is that I have never been able to accept the heroine being renamed Huo Fuguang, Fuguang Zhe, Yaoyang, which is a good name, but I still like Changge and the title "Longge Xie Zhaoning". Thank you for everything, you can finally update normally.
Hmm... I'm asking for an Easter egg. I still want to see those passionate scenes that were deleted by you in the original version. I really like it.
Also, please don't revise the version again. Don't worry too much. It's already fine now. Finally, I hope Changge and Xie Zhaoning have a good ending.
They are all good girls, and there is nothing wrong with simply liking someone. But whether in TV dramas or novels, everyone is very malicious towards women who like male protagonists, and on the contrary, they are infinitely beautifying men who like female protagonists.
Chapter comments and content are misaligned, so I'll post comments at the end, and I haven't read all the chapters.
The final scene in the temple and the scene on the way home are so well written. The big event is over and I feel empty. There is only life everywhere here.
Old friends cannot see each other now, and the living have to part ways now. Some go away and some stay behind. We can never go back to the way we were before. We can't go back.
The time and space situation changed, so Xie Zhaoning disappeared later. It was so sad. What he encountered could not be healed by just saying "I regret it", and he expected more than "I like you too". This was the first regret. Lian Zhang finally stayed alone in the imperial city and could not see his relatives and friends all the time. This was the second regret. Good people have a bad life, and innocent people are tortured and do not live long. This is the third regret.
Finally, watching the fight, I feel that it is great to have such vitality in the bitter cold borderland.
After reading it last night, I thought about it for a long time and still thought I should write something. I am not a very expressive person, and I have never written such a long comment. I just wrote whatever came to my mind. Please forgive me if there are any imperfections. First of all, the deepest feeling is regret, regret for Xie Zhaoning in his previous life. He is so good that I don't know what words to use to describe how good he is. In his previous life, Xie Zhaoning walked forward in the darkness with shackles on his back, but he still tried his best to light a lamp for Chang Ge. He hoped that she would live even if she hated him, but she would not end well in the end. Even if Changge is reborn and the two of them have a happy ending, it is still a pity for me. Changge is still the same Changge, but when Changge is reborn and takes Xie Zhaoning to break through the shackles, he will definitely not become the Xie Zhaoning who walked alone in the previous life. Xie Zhaoning in the previous life will still be alone after all. Maybe I separated my past life from this life too much. I always feel that if I have different experiences in my past life and this life, I am no longer exactly the same person. What I owe in my past life is what I owe after all. Even if I try to make up for it in this life, I am not the one who should make up for it. Of course, I am very happy that we are together in this life, but there is still a little bit of sadness that I can't get over. Then, the characters in this article are well-developed and three-dimensional, such as Lian Xun. I originally thought that he was as vicious and selfish as his father, and he ignored blood relatives for the sake of imperial power, but he still cared about and protected his biological brother. Another example is Nan Yan. I really didn't expect that she would be the one who killed Lian Fengju in the end. I didn't know how he felt when he died in the hands of someone who was like an ant in his eyes. There are also the Queen, He Yuerong, Lian Zhen, Su Mei, etc. I won't go into details one by one. Everyone is flesh and blood. The only thing is that, in my personal opinion, Huo Xuan's role is a bit less. Except for the beginning, there is only a side description in the later period. In other words, there are fewer scenes in Northern Xinjiang. Of course, the main plot is still between the male and female protagonists in Zhongdu, but I think we can add a little bit about the Northern Xinjiang side. After all, the heroine is trying to break the deadlock in Northern Xinjiang, and the Northern Xinjiang side can't just explain everything, right? What's more, the author's writing style is really good. The big scenes he wrote made me heart-wrenching and excited. I have some confidence in myself.
This seat is quite suitable for Lian Zhang. He thought the fifth prince was just a yandere, but he didn't expect him to be a pervert. Bah.
How long will it take? It's really annoying to keep putting it off. I feel like I really have no confidence in the author anymore.
I remember the first time I saw this novel was during the epidemic. I was locked at home and taking online classes. When I was reading it, I discovered that this book that attracted me seemed to be the work of a new writer. I also told my friends that I felt that I had discovered a treasure. It would definitely become popular in the future. I looked forward to the update every day. One day, the author fell ill and was very anxious. I hoped to get well soon. Later, I was even more sad when the update was discontinued. I came every day to see if Yijiu Da was back. Half a year has passed. The college entrance examination is over and I have been re-reading for a year. I waited too long and gradually forgot about it. Last night, I happened to see the heroine of a recent new drama is a female general. It suddenly occurred to me that I was amazed by a novel that was also a female general a few years ago. I thought about the name for a long time before I found the name of Changge Baby again. I stayed up all night for 10 hours to read it. I don't know what Yijiu has experienced in the past few years that caused the update to be not smooth. But now this book did not disappoint me and is still very attractive to me now! Still like it very much! ! ! So I hope Yijiu will continue to write, and I will definitely write more and more good works in the future!
Although, I still feel sorry for Xie Zhaoning in the previous life.
I would like to express my personal opinion. The author is really very strict with himself. At the beginning, I also felt that the heroine would have to go through a lot of time before the plot could get on the right track when she was young (I don't really like to read about childhood life, it can be short or long). This time the author changed the ages of the male and female protagonists, which is good, and the author's own interpretation is very good. I don't have enough brain, which is equivalent to the Chinese language annotation! I think the writing is really good, too.
Did I write the last two chapters incorrectly? Not good-looking either? Why do I feel more and more boring the more I write? You have no comments anymore... Can anyone tell me what the last two chapters were like? The original plot in these two chapters was not logical enough and I readjusted it, but now after readjusting it, I feel that the plot seems a bit bland... I burst into tears on the spot. Jpg
When you were about thirty or forty chapters in, you wanted to comment, so I posted my first comment on Jinjiang here. I'm very happy that you are still continuing to write this article. During the two years when you were crazy about revising it, I and countless friends recommended this article. Unfortunately, one unfinished article is all the rage. I also evolved from waiting quietly at the beginning to making crazy complaints. The author, you know, I will open Jinjiang at a specific time every month to see if you have updated. Even I changed my account to continue this "tradition". Fortunately, you are back. I originally planned to watch it after it was finished, but I couldn't help myself and finished it today. It's still the same as in my impression, but many of my favorite plots are gone, which is a bit regretful. The passion that can arouse my inner joy and joy is gone, but I still like it very much. The logic is much clearer and more reasonable. The most important thing is that I have never been able to accept the heroine being renamed Huo Fuguang, Fuguang Zhe, Yaoyang, which is a good name, but I still like Changge and the title "Longge Xie Zhaoning". Thank you for everything, you can finally update normally. Hmm... I'm asking for an Easter egg. I still want to see those passionate scenes that were deleted by you in the original version. I really like it. Also, please don't revise the version again. Don't worry too much. It's already fine now. Finally, I hope Changge and Xie Zhaoning have a good ending.
They are all good girls, and there is nothing wrong with simply liking someone. But whether in TV dramas or novels, everyone is very malicious towards women who like male protagonists, and on the contrary, they are infinitely beautifying men who like female protagonists.
Chapter comments and content are misaligned, so I'll post comments at the end, and I haven't read all the chapters. The final scene in the temple and the scene on the way home are so well written. The big event is over and I feel empty. There is only life everywhere here. Old friends cannot see each other now, and the living have to part ways now. Some go away and some stay behind. We can never go back to the way we were before. We can't go back. The time and space situation changed, so Xie Zhaoning disappeared later. It was so sad. What he encountered could not be healed by just saying "I regret it", and he expected more than "I like you too". This was the first regret. Lian Zhang finally stayed alone in the imperial city and could not see his relatives and friends all the time. This was the second regret. Good people have a bad life, and innocent people are tortured and do not live long. This is the third regret. Finally, watching the fight, I feel that it is great to have such vitality in the bitter cold borderland.