Shikamaru

The author's writing style is great and the story is quite complete. It is a high-quality Naruto fanfic ^O^ But... I was quite depressed watching it. Maybe it's because I love the character Shikamaru. I couldn't bear to imagine him having to pay the price of giving up his own happiness. The post-war reconstruction of two countries does not necessarily require two young people to make a black-and-white choice between the righteousness of their country and their personal emotions. In fact, the reality is that there are many ways to reconcile the big self and the small self. If it must be like this in the article, it is really cruel... I am glad that although Kishimoto continued to forcibly sublimate the theme of Naruto in the later period, and the ending has been criticized, after all, it is still a shounen manga, and he did not arrange a hidden ending that makes everyone feel dark. Shikamaru and Temari, one of the few well-established characters in the original work, shouldn't have to face such an ending. It doesn't mean that they can just let go of everything and face each other face to face. In the missing more than twenty years, all the content of their lives that may appear is a lifetime regret that can never be made up for later... It's not the author, you wrote it really well, it is a very complete and intentional story. Many plots between Shikamaru and his adopted son also made me think that this is something Shikamaru would do. I am just expressing some of my opinions as a reader. After all, I was hurt after reading the full text and felt a bit heavy. It is really heartbreaking to imagine it in depth T^T

To be fair, not bad. It's just that this is not the Shikamaru in my mind~ But compared to other serious OOC stories, you have already controlled it very well. Maybe it's because I think the writing is good, so the requirements are too high without realizing it. Don't mind it~

The plot is very smooth and the writing is beautiful. It's very good. Come on!