There Is a Fox

It was too hasty and Chi Fengqing did not explain clearly.

So can the author tell me how Chi Fengqing became like that? It feels like some of the stories are not finished yet. It's a pity that they ended without watching enough and without extra chapters!

I finished reading it all night. I finally understand how Yuzuyu feels... I really like the setting of this article... I really told a good story at the beginning... But as I go to the end, it becomes more and more wrong... Whether it is the plot or the emotional line, it feels like I am rushing to reincarnate... I have to explain everything in a hasty manner... Especially the emotional line is very serious It is not an exaggeration to say that it is unfinished... This kind of sadomasochistic love that has been waiting for hundreds of years could have been expressed more excitingly and movingly... But what was actually written was just like an outline... Which greatly reduced the quality of the entire novel... I can understand everyone's resentment... I am also very, very dissatisfied now... I think the author can definitely write better, but I don't know why he feels more anxious towards the end... I suggest that the next time the author writes, don't rush to the end even if you get stuck. After all, this is the character you created... It's really a pity... I wish you to reach a higher level soon!

It can be seen that the story was still being told well at the beginning, but the pace suddenly accelerated at the end, and it became more and more like reading an outline. It was just a detailed outline, and there were many things that the author's wife simply gave up treatment and did not want to write. Although she can comfort herself by saying "leaving blank spaces to leave room for imagination and long aftertaste", we do not read novels to guess riddles. There is really a huge difference between leaving blank spaces and unfinished stories. In fact, I really recommend that the author's wife save the entire manuscript, because I found that there are already several articles, not just this one. I feel that when my wife is writing and realizes that the article is not very popular, she will become anxious and it will easily end. The most obvious one is the earlier "Tiger Wife", the outline and the article are different. Although full-time authors are definitely more concerned about whether it can be popular, I think that after an article is written, even if it is not popular at the time of serialization, when it is finished, everyone who follows the article will think it is wonderful and then go to Amway one after another. It is better than everyone who follows the article and feels that it is unfinished and embarrassed to recommend it to others. The same goes for those who are attracted by the author's other articles and come to make up for the old article. It is better to make up for the old article and find that a good article has been missed than to find out that the author's old article is still not good and cannot be read. Having said all this, I really feel that the author's wife can write better, because I can see that you have this ability, and I can also see that you are brave enough to try new themes and are very good at writing various jokes. I hope that when I read your articles in the future, I will be able to say "so satisfied, I want to read it again" at the end, and no longer have any regrets. I hope that the author's wife will write better and better, and become more and more popular~

I suggest you write more extras

It's a bit unfinished. I can write more about the past and present life and emotional development later.

I think it looks very good, and the angles and themes are very good. It's just that the portrayal of attack is a bit vague and unclear. It's still a very interesting story, especially eye-catching at the beginning. Like it!

Alas, I think Recovering Memory is too sketchy. No matter it's over, let's scatter flowers

The writing is really similar, a bit anticlimactic, and the pace is too fast... But it's really beautiful!!!! It can be much better, don't worry!

The story is quite interesting, but the emotional line is too weak. The ending is only together.