Snow Knocks at the Heavy Gate

I seriously suspect that the author was attacked by fellow trolls. In my opinion, this article is well written. Every character has flesh and blood. Except for Chen Jinru and Mr. Xi Da, no one else is really good or bad. There is no so-called mistress. If you evaluate the ancient sayings based on modern people's concepts, I am afraid that your brain is full of water. The only flaw is that the ending is a bit hasty and the extra chapters are too few and incomplete.

That's too much! Why not write acknowledgment! That's too much! Cry

It looks neither salty nor bland, so it's a pity that it's gone. There is a chapter that is well written, with subtle twists and turns, and trivial matters that are ups and downs, plain and true. But I thought it was the starting point but didn't expect it to be the peak. The ending was too hasty. There are some parts in the middle that are not handled well enough. I feel like I am not very good at setting up the big scenes. I can't keep my appetite up, and I am also very stiff when filling in the holes. I feel like there is a better way but I haven't written it out. The charlatan single-handedly breaks the defense, which is a bit fake.

It was indeed a bit rushed. If possible, you can update it again.

Why was the extra episode so perfunctory and ended abruptly?

Extras like this make me feel like I'm being perfunctory! ! ! Damn, do you still want your dog head?

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The ending was a little rushed, but overall it was OK.

It ended too quickly. I want to see Persimmon and Zhen Zhen.

Ah, why did it end? I didn't see enough, haha