
[Harry Potter Fanfic] Welcome Back
[HP同人]欢迎回来
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[HP同人]欢迎回来
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It's true that they were little bastards when they were young... But wasn't the professor even more annoying when he was a child? Except for Remus, none of these pro-age boys are likable, right? In addition, the setting of the heroine is a bit unpleasant, mainly because there is no need for her to target Harry for everything. She also has to criticize Peter for his efforts? There is no need to cast a spell on Ron. Underage people cannot use magic outside of school. Ron can say a few words without affecting the battle. Besides, Sirius Remus Snape and the heroine are the Aurors here. The location is specially cast. In such a safe situation, casting spells on Ron and criticizing Harry are completely unnecessary... A godmother who doesn't like Harry... This is actually the biggest reason why Sirius can't fall in love with her. To be honest, it would be the biggest OOC if the heroine was more important than Harry when he was a prostitute.
It's been three years, welcome back.
Now that Lupine knows the truth, doesn't he take measures to deal with Peter at this time? ? ? When the trio said this, Peter must have known that Sirius and Remus had communicated... This time Scabbers was even harder to catch... In the original work, he only avoided Sirius, but now he needs to hide from many people. And wouldn't Peter suspect that Harry already knew the truth? Peter should just run away this time, right? Although it is based on the original work, the setting of Sirius's release from prison from the beginning cannot be completely based on the original work. Now it seems that whether he is released from prison early or still follows the original work, it has become a bug, and these plot and logic bugs lead to OOC characters.
Hahahahahahaha female version of the professor, please update (∩???∩)
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There is a question, I can't remember clearly and I'm not sure. In the original work, when Dumbledore was the principal, no students should have died accidentally at Hogwarts, right? Dumbledore was not the Headmaster when Myrtle died. In addition, Bella's original work did not use a death curse on Sirius. Sirius died after falling into the curtain.
I want to say, is it a typo? Draco called Snape, Godfather? Maybe the professor became the godfather? If it weren't for a typo... In the original work, Snape and Lucius had a normal relationship, and he was not Draco's godfather. This was part of the setup of White Snake Academy. Also, it is useless for the heroine to believe in Sirius. If there is no proof that Peter is alive, Dumbledore, Snape and Lupin will not let Sirius be released from prison and stay with the heroine. It can be seen from the original work that Lupine is very entangled. On the one hand, he concealed Sirius's Animagus because he subconsciously believed in Sirius. On the other hand, it was settled that there was no evidence, and Peter was also their good friend. So if Lupine was in this situation, and Sirius never explained that he had given up on himself and stayed in Azkaban because he felt that he had killed James and Lily, how could he make Dumbledore and Snape believe it? The copy says it is based on the original work, but if these logical issues are not clarified, it will be completely different from the characters and settings of the original work.
I want to say, is it a typo? Draco called Snape, Godfather? Maybe the professor became the godfather? If it weren't for a typo... In the original work, Snape and Lucius had a normal relationship, and he was not Draco's godfather. This was part of the setup of White Snake Academy. Also, it is useless for the heroine to believe in Sirius. If there is no proof that Peter is alive, Dumbledore, Snape and Lupin will not let Sirius be released from prison and stay with the heroine. It can be seen from the original work that Lupine is very entangled. On the one hand, he concealed Sirius's Animagus because he subconsciously believed in Sirius. On the other hand, it was settled that there was no evidence, and Peter was also their good friend. So if Lupine was in this situation, and Sirius never explained that he had given up on himself and stayed in Azkaban because he felt that he had killed James and Lily, how could he make Dumbledore and Snape believe it? The copy says it is based on the original work, but if these logical issues are not clarified, it will be completely different from the characters and settings of the original work.
It's too difficult, it's too difficult, it's too difficult
Elsa, little angel, it's so harmful