The Fortune-Telling Days for Dragons

The ending is a bit rushed, and the villain has some ideas about the tool man.

Even with the ending, this article is still very sad. It's just a rare attack on the body, like skinning and cramping all day long.

Wen likes it very much. But I would like to make a small suggestion: Compared with Yutu, the structure of "Pan Bi" feels a lot looser, and some of the turns are very abrupt, like the grass ghost woman. The characters are foreshadowed in the front, but the marriage part is very strange. I hope there will be more foreshadowing to make the story more coherent. Comparison^O^ ps. Do you want to change your name? The word after "xie" is too difficult to type. It's hard to call me "big brother", otherwise I can only call you "Lao Xie". . .

The sweet article that was promised suddenly became a whole article, woo woo woo

I really don't understand why Ning Qing left Xuanlong at that time...

It's such a mess that I didn't understand the end

I read it over three days. At first I thought it was a popcorn story, but then I realized it was a bit interesting. It wasn't until I finished reading that I realized it was a serious drama wrapped in a sweet story. I like the idea of ​​the story very much. Although the rhythm is a bit messy at the end, the flaws are not hidden. After all, there is no perfect story. I hope to see the author's more advanced writing style next time.

I've finished reading it, thank you to the author for the limited exemption! Although I really want to scold the author, "Sweet sister, you are torturing me to death." But considering that the author worked so hard to write such a heart-warming article, forget it. The author's writing is great, keep up the good work!

Recommend. It's a bit long-winded in the early stages, but hang in there and you'll get it. Recommended

It's cruel and sweet. It's very beautiful. Thanks for the limited [refill].