The follow-up article "There is a Glow in His Eyes", the love story of the hero's brother Jian Tuo, can be collected in my author column.
"Stars in His Eyes" has been published and can be purchased directly from Taobao, Tmall, JD. Com and major bookstores~~
Copywriting 1:
Lu Fanxing, who was obsessed with starting a business and making money, wanted to open a studio.
Beauty economy is popular these days.
She wants to lure all the handsome boys in the school into her studio and serve as male models for her fans. The biggest difficulty facing her now is:
How can she convince the most handsome man in the school, her ex-boyfriend Jian Zhen, who is cruel to her to the end, to willingly take off his shirt in front of her crush?
Copywriting 2:
After becoming Jian Zhen's girlfriend, Lu Fanxing waited and expected to be dumped by him every day.
One day she finally got her wish.
I thought my life would be peaceful, but my ex-boyfriend was jumping around even more.
She has her female companion hanging in front of her all day long,
When he saw her having dinner with a man, he sneered,
What does this mean?
Jian Zhen: "This shows that I feel regretful after the breakup.
Continuing from the original article "There's a Glow in His Eyes", it's the story of the sinister brother Jian Tuo.
Copywriting one:
Ye Liuguang, a college girl who works as a part-time student, has been corresponding with her sponsor.
She called him "Daddy-Long-Legs."
Daddy-long-legs seems to be a serious and conservative middle-aged man. In every letter, he advises her to learn not to fall in love prematurely.
One day, Liuguang learned that Daddy-Long-Legs had been in a car accident.
Out of repayment, she applied to become his personal caregiver.
The first time they got together, the words he said made her want to faint.
"The first seven nurses left their jobs because of my manipulation. Children, do you want to be the eighth one? "
The streamer spends his days battling wits and courage with the handsome, long-legged uncle who is a bit unorthodox.
She thought that as a medical student, she was immune to all the handsome guys.
Until he took off his shirt.
"Kid, how can you clean my wound with your eyes closed? "
"The cotton swab touched my lips, what, do you want to kiss me? "
Copywriting two:
Jian Tuo's greatest pleasure while recuperating was to hit the little nurse next to him.
"Mr. Jane, have you ever thought about what Mrs. Jane will look like in the future? "
"Beautiful, tall, good figure, high IQ, good family background, high education. Jian Tuo glanced at the little nurse and added, "Anyway, she has everything you don't have." "
Later, the little nurse was scolded by him and left.
And later.
Mr. Jian, who drove to the nurse's university as soon as he got off work to ask for a chance encounter, probably didn't expect that one day he would become a licking dog with no self-esteem.
Jian Tuo: Xiao Guangguang, what do you want from your future boyfriend?
Ye Liuguang: It's quite low. It doesn't matter if it's Mr. Jian.
Jian Tuo: I thought she was a fleeting light in my life, but I didn't know that I really longed for her to shine on me forever.
Uncle VS girl, ten years age difference, secret love in the early stage, chasing his wife in the crematorium later, "Stars in His Eyes" series, the protagonist is the handsome man forcing his brother Jian Tuo.
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Reader comments
Madam, it's been five years.
Why is no one saying anything in the comment area? I feel like the heroine and either of these two men are wronged [bursts crying] one is worse than the other.
Seriously, this is the best fic I've ever seen, and I really hope to watch it until the end.
Just like that, my heart was broken.
In the style of jump shounen manga, you fight monsters and upgrade the daily life of love and friendship. The writing style is extremely natural! The everyday dialogue doesn't feel artificial at all, it feels like the characters have a life of their own and they should say or act this way. There are no uncomfortable sentences to read, the language is so good orz
Madam is very free and easy, describing various emotions, events and love over and over again, and discussing religion, theology and philosophy, but it does not make people feel ostentatious or exaggerated. At the same time, in such a long page, it is inevitable that there will be some descriptions that appear many times, such as the appearance and eyes of the characters, but there is no sense of repetition when reading through it. Madam's writing is really strong, like a precise scalpel. It feels like there is nothing you can't express, and she is divine.
In fact, it is a very positive and warm story. It feels like it is shrouded in orange sunshine from beginning to end. Love is warm, family affection is also warm, and friendship is also warm. After tying the knot, when I think back to the beginning, I still think of the chapter where Iros told Chrollo the Old Testament story in the church. Everyone has grown up a lot along the way. Iros has changed from an independent strong man to an excellent leader. She has achieved both love and career, and she is still moving forward on the road. At present, I can't give up any of the three most important stocks. Each line has its own wonderful flavor. I hope these three men can solve it by themselves, and then the four of them can live together happily. The female goose can take whichever one she wants (what?
Then I would like to make some small comments. I feel that for those who have not read the original work, there will be some lag in reading the article. For example, for you and readers who have read the original work, the new characters will be like old friends appearing, and everyone will smile knowingly. I will try a little harder to remember his name. Of course, it's because of you that I know that Hunter fandom is such a huge circle, and the creative abilities of all of you ladies are really too strong.
I am a person with poor logic and can only write some superficial opinions on characters, love and emotions. I don't understand the setting of the original work (but because of this article, I will definitely make up for it when I have time). I followed my wife's ideas for all the plots. I may not understand some metaphors and plots well, but I hope Haihan~
Damn, can't you solve chapter 137? [Crying]
Gu Xunqiu is such a pitiful man
Madam, happy Lantern Festival! [Rose][Cat's Claw]
Teacher, please update. Readers can do anything [crying]
What happened? I have something to do, I'm busy, I'm not in a good state, or I don't want to write, can I send a notification or something like that? [Hands together]
The author's writing style is a little childish, but it can be seen that he really wrote it with intention!
So come on, come on!
Hahahahaha Wen Yiyi is so cute
I want to turn into an evil sword fairy in the author's comment area
The plot is really exciting. When I watch it, I feel like I'm reading a detailed outline_(:з)∠)_ A lot of it is brushed off. The setting is interesting, but it's really jumpy. The relationship between the characters and the development of the plot are not coherent at all.
Too bad, Brother Mengmeng, a partner of justice, the author will come back soon for an update.
What did the author write in Chapter 127? I've been locked up and want to read it [Star Eyes]
Dear author, come on, it seems that the two articles you wrote are very good. ~
I feel like I haven't seen it. . . .
After reading it, some of the heroine's actions were really selfish and rude. I was very angry after watching it. There were also a lot of bugs. But the plot is okay. The male protagonist is not perfect but not bad. Putting aside the shortcomings, the ups and downs of the relationship between the two are quite fascinating. However, the ending is too hasty. There are many things left unexplained for the male and female partners, and it feels like it has stopped suddenly. . .
This Dazai is the leader, so how sad would it be for him to know that the world he managed to protect was destroyed by time travellers?
Treasure video, I personally feel that the last paragraph is a bit difficult to connect.
Ma'am, don't give up, it's beautiful.
"The richest man heard the lady in his arms" gave the author a big bug~
Meng Huaizhong
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I confessed! Nioh, you are so awesome
Madam, it's been five years.
Why is no one saying anything in the comment area? I feel like the heroine and either of these two men are wronged [bursts crying] one is worse than the other.
Seriously, this is the best fic I've ever seen, and I really hope to watch it until the end.
Just like that, my heart was broken. In the style of jump shounen manga, you fight monsters and upgrade the daily life of love and friendship. The writing style is extremely natural! The everyday dialogue doesn't feel artificial at all, it feels like the characters have a life of their own and they should say or act this way. There are no uncomfortable sentences to read, the language is so good orz Madam is very free and easy, describing various emotions, events and love over and over again, and discussing religion, theology and philosophy, but it does not make people feel ostentatious or exaggerated. At the same time, in such a long page, it is inevitable that there will be some descriptions that appear many times, such as the appearance and eyes of the characters, but there is no sense of repetition when reading through it. Madam's writing is really strong, like a precise scalpel. It feels like there is nothing you can't express, and she is divine. In fact, it is a very positive and warm story. It feels like it is shrouded in orange sunshine from beginning to end. Love is warm, family affection is also warm, and friendship is also warm. After tying the knot, when I think back to the beginning, I still think of the chapter where Iros told Chrollo the Old Testament story in the church. Everyone has grown up a lot along the way. Iros has changed from an independent strong man to an excellent leader. She has achieved both love and career, and she is still moving forward on the road. At present, I can't give up any of the three most important stocks. Each line has its own wonderful flavor. I hope these three men can solve it by themselves, and then the four of them can live together happily. The female goose can take whichever one she wants (what? Then I would like to make some small comments. I feel that for those who have not read the original work, there will be some lag in reading the article. For example, for you and readers who have read the original work, the new characters will be like old friends appearing, and everyone will smile knowingly. I will try a little harder to remember his name. Of course, it's because of you that I know that Hunter fandom is such a huge circle, and the creative abilities of all of you ladies are really too strong. I am a person with poor logic and can only write some superficial opinions on characters, love and emotions. I don't understand the setting of the original work (but because of this article, I will definitely make up for it when I have time). I followed my wife's ideas for all the plots. I may not understand some metaphors and plots well, but I hope Haihan~
Damn, can't you solve chapter 137? [Crying]
Gu Xunqiu is such a pitiful man
Madam, happy Lantern Festival! [Rose][Cat's Claw]
Teacher, please update. Readers can do anything [crying]
What happened? I have something to do, I'm busy, I'm not in a good state, or I don't want to write, can I send a notification or something like that? [Hands together]
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.,()……
The author's writing style is a little childish, but it can be seen that he really wrote it with intention! So come on, come on!
Hahahahaha Wen Yiyi is so cute
I want to turn into an evil sword fairy in the author's comment area
The plot is really exciting. When I watch it, I feel like I'm reading a detailed outline_(:з)∠)_ A lot of it is brushed off. The setting is interesting, but it's really jumpy. The relationship between the characters and the development of the plot are not coherent at all.
Too bad, Brother Mengmeng, a partner of justice, the author will come back soon for an update.
What did the author write in Chapter 127? I've been locked up and want to read it [Star Eyes]
Dear author, come on, it seems that the two articles you wrote are very good. ~
I feel like I haven't seen it. . . .
After reading it, some of the heroine's actions were really selfish and rude. I was very angry after watching it. There were also a lot of bugs. But the plot is okay. The male protagonist is not perfect but not bad. Putting aside the shortcomings, the ups and downs of the relationship between the two are quite fascinating. However, the ending is too hasty. There are many things left unexplained for the male and female partners, and it feels like it has stopped suddenly. . .
This Dazai is the leader, so how sad would it be for him to know that the world he managed to protect was destroyed by time travellers?
Treasure video, I personally feel that the last paragraph is a bit difficult to connect.
Ma'am, don't give up, it's beautiful.
"The richest man heard the lady in his arms" gave the author a big bug~ Meng Huaizhong
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I confessed! Nioh, you are so awesome