I Went Bald After Marrying the Richest Man

After watching it, I can say that it is an early work after all, and there are still many advantages. What I like most is the design of the play within the play. It is quite attentive and has many amazing descriptions. The characters from the clown to the military counselor are all very convincing, making the heroine's career line very convincing. However, there are really many shortcomings, not only the emotional line mentioned in the copy is not written well, but also the early description is extremely messy. If the wife does not plan to revise the article, new readers will have to endure it until they get into v (and there is still a big gap between the part when they first enter v and the later period) , is very discouraging, especially when describing netizens' reactions to media reactions and other situations, the order of words is messed up, and the subject is often missing, which greatly affects the understanding of the plot; secondly, the plot line is really terrible if it excludes the part of the play within the play. The Qin family line has been full of bugs since childhood. Why did my stepbrother do it when he was a child? She lives with her step-sister when her mother is not around. Why does the successful heroine want to live in the Qin family even though she knows that the Qin family is a den of tigers and wolves? Power, especially Chen Yufei; Shuang Xie's emotional turn at the end was passed over without any foreshadowing, and the whole story was spent on them, but at the end there was a sentence of "tried it but it didn't fit" so they broke up; since the things about the original male and female protagonists have not changed, why can the male protagonist's car accident be treated as if nothing happened? Too many foreshadowing subplots were confiscated or ended hastily, and the last two chapters were really poorly handled. The author himself knows that the emotional line is not well written. There are indeed many flaws, including the problem of setting up the male and female protagonists, how the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist came about, why the female protagonist can live in the male protagonist's house, what happened to the contract that the male protagonist cheated on her, and how the female protagonist could forget the car accident. There are too many logic bugs. Finally, the existence of the system is too low, and the belief value setting is basically useless at the end. Since it is a time-traveling book, is it scientific that the original heroine, the chosen daughter, has basically not collided with the heroine in her career? I feel that my wife's subsequent works have indeed improved a lot. Although she is still not good at emotional lines, at least she has used her strengths to avoid her weaknesses. I have a seal so I can't rate it, but if I could rate it, I would give five stars to the movie and three stars to other parts... I hope my wife will continue to work hard.

So the double thank you and the car accident are just left unfinished...

It's unacceptable that my mother is sick. Although I still haven't written a letter of apology, my attitude is so ambiguous. Some people do something wrong and don't deserve forgiveness.

Why can't I get a score?

It looks good, but it's a bit short. Please give me more extras.

One by one (?ō?ō)

Why does it hurt? Isn't the locked chapter the first time? Didn't I finish it to the end?

Hahahahahaha pigs are so miserable

Finished watching it. It's great!!!

I re-opened this article and found that there is no extra chapter.