Love Beast

[Let me Kangkang] [Let me Kangkang] [Let me Kangkang] Did Lance really learn how to have a romantic relationship from Baozi? It's so cute. I feel that Baozi continues to be obsessed with it.

Taking the time to sort out the plot of chapters one to thirty-five, please allow me to briefly summarize the three important clues of this article using the analysis method I am more accustomed to: The main plot line of this article is the grudge between Jingyun Sect and the Demon Sect. The main emotional lines should be between Qingyun and Bai Junting. Based on this, the character's growth line should be Qingyun's transformation from a melon-eater to a virtuous wife, and Bai Junting's transformation from a forbearing elder brother to a great hero who eradicates the demon sect. (If Fox has other default CP, please update to clarify) I like Fox's writing style very much, but without me having to say more, Fox can also tell that the pace of this article is very slow, not only the updates are slow, but also the plot advancement is slow. Everyone understands the reasons for slowness differently. My humble opinion is intended to attract others and encourage updates by the way. First, there are too many descriptive narrations and memories, which disrupts the forward rhythm of the plot. Qingjun's character is close to the narrator. After the little leader clamored to kick the club in the wedge, it was already the seventh chapter when it was online again. In addition, the update cycle is long, and my memory is bad. I have to turn to the front to remember who the little leader is and what he is here for. Second, the supporting characters are all excellent, and the protagonist is a bit bleak in comparison. For example, as soon as Cen Ge appeared, I forgot about Bai Junting, and started to guess who Cen Ge's CP was; as soon as the little leader appeared, how did the good baby grow up, and it felt like there was an expert to protect him from the wind and rain; whether the beauty Feng Qiyao knew martial arts, was it really good to waste youth at home every day? I'm sorry, I blame them for being too good. Qingjun - the bride who was coerced - the bride whose leg was injured - the bride who was poisoned and faked her death. She ate a lot of melons and committed a lot of bad crimes. When she met Bai Junting, in addition to being used, there were memories, watching Bai Junting fall asleep again... There was too little interaction. On the contrary, when I am with Tan Lang, I feel like a sister doting on her younger brother. Bai Junting and Cen Ge, Bai Junting and Yin Ye are not like CP, but they have interaction. This interaction refers to knowing the basics and having a tacit understanding. Of course, the most dramatic CPs are Xiang Lan and Xiao Yao. One is a big fan of the senior brother, and the other is a black eye of the senior brother. Their attributes complement each other. Yes, they are all cute, so where does the protagonist fit in? Third, the villain did not exert his due power. Promoting the rhythm of the story and triggering tension, the villain plays an important role. But at present, all the villain's methods seem to be scratching the surface, their methods are not ruthless enough, and their actions are not fast enough. Hall Master Song has not completely betrayed the enemy, and the fox has also let two new characters appear... There is no problem for the new characters to appear, but if they appear at a non-critical moment, if they appear too early, it will feel like everyone is getting together to drink tea and chat, and there will be no sense of crisis to advance the plot. Although Qingyun was injured, poisoned and even faked his death, Bai Junting also caught a cold due to his efforts, but... Jingyunmen currently does not know what Bai Junting did. Bai Junting concealed it again and again, and Mr. Lu used public relations to save people. This world seems to be very harmonious. The villain did not scare the protagonist and did not let this world be subverted. Therefore, everything Bai Junting did seemed to be gentle and gentle, without any sense of tension. I seriously suspect that Fox did not write a detailed outline. In addition, he did not have enough writing time, so most of the articles were temporarily updated and the rhythm was not well controlled. The above analysis is not to add trouble to Fox, but to briefly summarize the thoughts that I have currently considered. Although I have written a brief introduction to the chapter content, it is too long, so I only intercepted the final analysis part for Fox's reference only. If there is anything wrong, please don't mind. If you need the full version, I can send it to Fox's email. Come on Fox, waiting for your update?(?^O^?)?

The male protagonist is a bit... Um... Look down, I'll take another look

Can you please change the platform and continue writing? I really like it (I burst into tears)

I feel like I am being banned from writing this book and crying.

I'm curious who the person who sent the love letter was, and who the Alipay person was later. They couldn't be the same person, right?

Tian Yan should be their former sect leader

Urgent update! ! ! ! When will Madam update?

There's a bit of a lag, the update will be delayed [crying]

Cute! Easy! Like! !

It's so good, so good, I just finished watching it during the holiday [bad laugh]

How should I put it, for a novel with love as the main line, I feel that even if it ends when the relationship is officially confirmed, it will not be unfinished, because the author just did not write it out, and the people in the story are still continuing to live. (Of course it would be nice to have more sweet romances.) The story is created by the author, so just write it according to your own wishes. The romance part is also well written. Don't be too caught up in other people's thoughts and evaluations.

"Jian Yue" really caught the author's eye~

Well, after reading it, I feel like it has the tone of a gray-blue prose. If you want to describe it, it feels like the low-saturation hand-painted style of the old movie version of Digimon. The final ending is a bit rushed, and it feels like the original story is suddenly dragged back to the original work, because if you want to forcefully go back to the original work, many endings such as Hui and Wild Rose are not explained. Overall the text flows very smoothly, at least it tells the story to the end. The reason for the lack of traffic is probably because of the writing style, which is more bluesy. This style of writing is actually not popular in hot-blooded series, because there is no "refreshing feeling" or climax, and the narrative is too straightforward. Come on, I look forward to sweet extras and follow-up to add points to the article. (I'm here to surf the Internet, not to hang myself. Jpg

Master Juan, who has been busy all day, finally finished writing this extra chapter and is about to start a new busy one [Gotou]