
The Invisible Childhood Sweetheart
看不见的小竹马
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 219k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
58Chapters
732Favorites
8.0Score
548Nutrient gifts
3.9kClicks per chapter
449Comments
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Reader comments 41
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Ah? Where is the extra?
I feel like I'm holding fire in my heart. Is the heroine trying to fight like this? But he was defeated without even a single meeting. Could it be that there was some foreshadowing behind it?
Thank you for the big red envelope. Momojiu
Didn't expect this to be the case. ˊ_>ˋ Was shocked. I think the setting is very good, including the mood changes in the previous details, which are very realistic. I also felt that the male and female protagonists' official rivalry scenes were very good, but in the later stages and in the last few chapters, the plot and emotional lines were not handled well. Some of the male protagonist's attitudes were not very clear. Good or bad is not that simple. Good people can sometimes be full of bad intentions, so how to calculate it. At the beginning, I felt that the two of them had grown up, but at the end, I felt that it was still the daily life of two children growing up in love. Some of the foreshadowing was not developed, which made people feel quite uncomfortable. Suddenly, I felt that the heroine actually has a pleasing personality, but in fact, the only people she really bothers to like are her grandma and the male protagonist, who have a relatively high status. The development of the story about the squad leader's scumbag was not satisfactory (?) Is this really a punishment? ˊ_>ˋWhy do I watch cheating the most every year? The twist of the male protagonist creating conditions for the female protagonist was good, but it ended too quickly. _(:з∠)_In the later stage, I didn't like the heroine very much, but I liked the brother. And why did grandma dress up and attend the family dinner that day? Did she know about the divorce?
Why is the scumbag talking so much... I was a little annoyed by the plot line of Steel Needle.
The heroine is really _(:з∠)_... Too angry and sweet to watch. After all, the heroine can only be tolerant. After all, no one is perfect
I completely understand the boss~ I don't have the energy to try and be impulsive anymore. _(:з∠)_ Still immersed in the feelings of fighting against the scumbag
ˊ_>ˋI really wonder if the heroine is a college student, she is really well protected. I just naively believe that everyone is a good person. I think there is no contradiction between being a good person and being a good person. But it feels a bit too much to insist on breaking away from the good guys and going to fight? The innocence is so powerful... Or it was specially made to highlight the heroine's weakness...
ˊ_>ˋIt's just that the heroine is a bit naive. Should this kind of thing be clearly clarified? Of course, it's impossible to catch evidence that the squad leader is just spreading bad news. The monitor can quibble.
The extra points are more due to what the squad leader said. The female protagonist is too slow, so she has no defense against others. I feel that a boy asking you to match him and use this to bribe him has a different color. It would feel different if I gave something to Chen Nuo and some delicious food to the heroine. But the heroine can be seen as a person with a bit of a dumpling and a good-natured and gentle personality.