The Unofficial History of Hongguang

This kind of serious drama is rare in Jinjiang, and it seems to be quite rare in □ Internet articles. The first few lines of official spoilers set the tone. I thought the rebirth after the combination was a story about empress routines, but surprisingly it turned out not to be the case. It was a serious story of struggle that didn't ask for men or men. Although he became emperor in the end, it felt very real, as if the history of an emperor's rise to power should be like this. There are many characters in this book, the protagonists each have their own characteristics, and the supporting characters can also be distinguished by their personalities. It is not the kind of story where a few people are arranged and combined to support the whole story. There are new characters when it's time to appear, and they are clean and tidy when it's time to leave. There are also many online characters with IQs who have only been mentioned in a single episode. It is really rare to see characters with similar backgrounds leading to different endings due to different choices. Many struggle stories go back and forth between just a few characters and a few powers, which makes people feel like they are having a family dinner. The map is also organized, including family residences, capitals, frontiers, palaces, and the founding of the country. The 700,000 words clearly describe the history of the merchant girl to the emperor. The author is indeed very attentive. In addition to good brains, perseverance and rebirth, the protagonist should only be given one "cannot die". (Laughs) The protagonist did not have a smooth life. Basically, she earned everything herself. She really suffered a lot. It was not abuse for the sake of abuse. The experience was in line with her character and fate, and she was likely to encounter it according to her choices. Although this may not be a cool article, it is really fun to read: encountering hardships, struggling to survive, and seeing a glimmer of light in the midst of hard work is a great pleasure in itself. I think the second best thing is to be subtle and stop at the point. For example, the male protagonist's experience is only mentioned briefly when the female protagonist is working hard. When writing about characters, sometimes only a few details are included, but this will give people more room for imagination. The so-called subtle beauty! I hope to continue my efforts and master this technique better. Implicitness is a virtue, especially in dramas: since it is a drama, let readers use their brains more. It is good to explain every character clearly in every detail. It is also good not to mention it clearly like in this article. Except for the protagonist, it is also good to mention a few words from time to time. And maybe even better. It is difficult, unnecessary and unrealistic to describe all the characters in detail. In the final analysis, everyone's story can be written into a masterpiece, so just focusing on one person in a book is enough for an online article. Of course, don't be subtle for the sake of being subtle, as it would be boring if it turned into a detective novel. Looking through the reviews, some people think that the main character, Our Lady, is okay, but I think it's okay? It feels more like disdain and shamelessness to me. Doing good to others is also done willingly, not just trying to get in touch with them. Just don't ask for anything in return. Are you looking after flowers to gain something? It drives beautifully, I just like it. Everything else is good, but I really can't understand the emotional line... Why do you like the male protagonist and stay in love for so long? Except for a face, all other conditions are completely inconsistent with the general standards for choosing a mate, right? Later, when we were struggling, we didn't see each other for a long time. Why did we still like him so much? Since you were a child, you should have seen a lot of beautiful men, right? I must have seen quite a few outstanding men throughout my travels, but none of them can surpass them? Do you really like people instead of giving yourself a sustenance? In other aspects, it is very realistic and intelligent, but the emotional line (singlely with the male protagonist) is really hard to understand. The conflicts in the plot line can also be taken one step further. There are basically only two parties competing on one thing, and there is basically only one thing for a period of time. Can you try to write three things about one thing, or mix several things together? That's not to say that the current version doesn't work, but I think I can try it further. There are also some minor flaws. The writing style is adequate but there is still room for improvement: it would be better to remove the parentheses completely - if you really want to use them, you can use dashes, but not too many. Comments that are too out-of-the-box can be directly expressed by the author. Reduce connectives such as "but" etc. Speak the sentences in one sentence without using too many commas. The dialogue can be deleted if it doesn't include "he said" and "she is xx authentic". The amount of information in the article is enough, but it still seems a bit confusing. Can you think about how to express it better? There is no need for long paragraphs of exquisite descriptions, this one just needs a little improvement. I don't know where the feeling of running down the accounts comes from. Maybe sometimes there is too much of a God's perspective in argumentative words. I would like to write more about what they did and said? I feel like there is still a lot of room for deletions and changes in this book. Also, there are a lot of typos and names, which almost affects reading... Other books are just fine. This book seems to be the one with the most care and thought. I don't know why but there are a lot of typos (?д?)つ But if it is improved well, it will definitely reach a higher level. I feel that if it is improved, it will be possible to become a god. The characters, the number of characters, the richness of the plot, the logic, and the online IQ, made me feel like I was watching a large-scale TV series - don't get me wrong, it's made in the United States, not domestically. It would be great if it could be adapted into a TV series. The author must have read a lot of books, such as history books? I would rank this as the best Empress novel I have ever read. (But to be honest, I haven't read much and may not have enough opinions.) If the author is willing to overhaul it, it can even be listed as one of the best in ancient or Chinese literature. (Of course, in terms of power and strategy alone, I'm afraid it cannot be compared with some officialdom articles on men's videos. But this female perspective is very rare and scarce. There are many things that men's videos cannot see. This book has its own strengths) All in all, this is an excellent book, the kind I would recommend to others when I ask for tweets! Come on, madam! Looking forward to seeing other full-length dramas! It's okay if it's not a serious drama! Come on, keep writing and you will definitely get better works! Ps: Is your wife interested in writing a fairy tale or a spiritual novel, the kind that takes thousands and tens of thousands of years? I'm very curious as to what this subject matter will look like in my wife's hands. Just ignore this if you are not interested ;)

Are you sure this is the Empress' text? The finale was also very speechless Also, the male protagonist is quite disgusting...

Is this the male protagonist? Feels like swallowing a fly

There is a mystery to the fact that one died and the other abdicated in the same year. Xi Huixian took that step to save Xie Xuan, right?

So far, this ending is quite good and subtle.

Therefore, Zhao Cheng is a normal man

I was heartbroken after reading it. . It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

Let's write about Xie Xuan and Xi Hui in the extra chapter! Haven't seen enough!

Still haven't been able to break through yourself? It's been like this for a lifetime! Feeling a little sorry.

This chapter is more enjoyable than torturing Xi Hui. It expresses my inner feelings. Song Bo is an honest person when Xie Xuan is an honest person. He should have attacked her like this a long time ago.