Omega Rebellion (Interstellar)

The writing is really good and the characters are great, but I'm really sad www. Kreli, I feel so sad. If Duyote and Xiao Moqin are too familiar with Lu Lu to fall in love, the king insect is because of different races, and Kreli is because he is too restrained, then why is Nerval? Www I really can't feel his feelings for Lu Lu, most of them are just the desire to conquer, just the turmoil that I can't get. He didn't accompany Lu Lu through the trough, didn't understand Lu Lu, and didn't even extend a helping hand. I really can't be sweet. Www, is it just because Lu Lu likes his type? Just because he shows love first? I didn't even feel that he could give in to love or suffer, he was just the kind of person who never took Lu Lu seriously. After Lu Lu succeeded, he looked at Lu Lu with equal eyes. I can understand that he was finally convinced by Lu Lu, but why did Lu Lu like him? Just because he was equal, right? Even a well-matched couple with no emotional foundation is better than a long-term companionship? It's so sweet. Www. Wouldn't it be nice to fall in love and kill each other and take the Xiao Moqin line? I feel so uncomfortable. The lonely response of the king insect, the simple and firm loyalty of Duyote and Cleary, and Xiao Moqin's willingness to be convinced. Which one is better than finally seeing you in the eyes, someone who is a good match, and powerful enough to make the other party look at you. But I really can't find anything to complain about, especially Compared with others, either Lu Lu yearned for him and was wrong with him, or he didn't write that feeling and didn't express Lu Lu Lu's pursuit of him. So Nerval's life in Lu Lu seemed to have no profound impact on him. Why did Lu Lu Lu suddenly have a deep love for him? To sum up, I really like Da Da's novels, with their sense of reason and inference. I have always been chasing Da Da Da who express a normal world view in their articles instead of being vague and only focusing on the love line. However, in the later stage, it may be that the plot is really difficult to write or the time span is too long. I only saw Lu Lu Lu's repeated entanglements and indecisiveness, and the anger in the last second. I don't even see the role of this angry plot when I am angry for a second, and I don't even have the personality charm of the prison period. It is normal to hesitate repeatedly, but if Lu Lu wants to be the king, this is abnormal. He cannot be just an ordinary person. As I said before, the emotional line lacks some detailed description and prominence of the final partner. Chinese people are always afraid of being proud and concealing their advantages and emphasizing their shortcomings. I inevitably said similar things, but what I want to express in the end is love and encouragement (emphasis added). Thank you so much for bringing this article. Thank you for your hard work. I look forward to your next article!

It's a bit weird, my family, aren't you the main writer? Why didn't the protagonist write how he attacked, or how he suffered? The first part is great, but the ending is too sloppy.

I read it a long time ago, so let's revisit it before chapter 180. To be honest, the anti-ABO theme is really attractive, and the protagonist is also very strong in the early stage. It's just a bit abrupt to impose bad luck when the inhibitor falls, and it's also... Unpleasant to let subordinates plot from time to time in the later stage. Due to gender A, I didn't see much of the emotional drama. First, he lost his memory and forgot about Gong, and then Jing and Gong confronted each other. I really don't see the feeling of being in love, but quite often I feel like I want to possess and control my opponent. Finally, the reason why I didn't do attack and shou is too far-fetched. Is it because I'm afraid that the protagonist is an O and shou will overwhelm the protagonist? It's not like a main story, but like a main story where the protagonist is unwilling to be suppressed, but will eventually be suppressed and lose himself. It's really unpleasant to watch. It's better to have the protagonist and O... Have neither ability nor courage. It's really unpleasant.

The passage in prison is probably the author's peak.

I have a lot of imagination. In fact, I like to read the articles marked with o, and I have some impressions of this article, so I turned it out and read it again, and then I found that the writing was quite bad. I was already doubting that it was not this article that I read a few years ago??? Back to this article, maybe the author's mind was wide open as he wrote, and his thoughts flew to nowhere. In fact, the writing is quite smooth, but it has a completely different feeling from the main idea. I have already imagined the situation when the author wrote the article when he was a student, but the topic went off-topic, haha???

There are very few authors who write about this kind of subject, and the setting is pretty good. But this article has too many flaws and red herrings, which makes me unhappy. Let's just think of it as a way to clear the air for the little angels. (I haven't ordered all of the novel, but I've read enough to make a statement) 1: Label problem The big label is sweet article/pleasant article. I don't know where it is sweet and where it is refreshing. Isn't it sweet that the protagonist can't help but be coveted by all kinds of people around him all the time? The force value has never been at its peak, and it's because O's physiological structure has always lost the ability to resist. Is this cool? Two: style issues The overall style is light-hearted, so forgive me for always being worried about the protagonist's virginity. Three: Personality The unlucky guy with high IQ occasionally attacks the beauty: IQ is not very visible, but the emotional intelligence is worrying; the first half of the article focuses on describing the protagonist's unlucky physique (this should be a reasonable preparation for the various close contacts between the protagonist and the accessories); the character of the beauty is throughout the whole text, but it is not reflected at the end of the novel. The cold, arrogant and narcissistic Emperor Shou: When Shou met Gong for the first time, he was like a candy. I couldn't tell where he was cold and arrogant. The narcissism of Emperor Shou was not noticeable either. After all, Shou's appearance rate is too low. He always appeared at the same time as the supporting characters. He was just a high-level soy sauce. Four: Others At first I was attracted by the big label, but the text didn't fit the topic and it made me really uncomfortable. All the supporting characters who have a certain amount of space have thoughts about the protagonist. If you have thoughts, forget it, we can guard them silently, but the protagonist and the supporting characters have some physical close contact in a very bloody way. When I watched it, it really disgusted me. I really can't accept this kind of cuteness. If it were not confirmed that it was 1V1, and there was no actual relationship between the protagonist and the supporting characters, I would have thought that I was reading about the general attack (attack or weak attack) on a certain website. I don't want to talk about Shou's appearance rate, and the emotional line is also inexplicable. There are 196 chapters in total. In the first 194 chapters, I didn't care about attacking Shou. In chapter 195, they met each other inexplicably. In chapter 196, it was just a side story. What's nonsense is that Gongshou meets three times a year and spends a few days at a time. It's a proper long-distance relationship. There is also the existence of the King Insect. If I understand correctly, apart from the few days when I was with Shou, I would have been sleeping with the King Insect the rest of the time. With this ending, I just want to laugh. I suggest you add the protagonist's heartthrob attributes and the Shura field. Then you can clear the mines for the little angels. I was completely blown away.

Spread the flowers ~ I really like the prison part at the beginning, but I feel a little disappointed at the end. I feel like I could write a few more volumes, such as how to unify the interstellar world, etc. I love to read the career line, hahaha. I feel that there is too little space for the relationship line. It would be better if there was more interaction between the two. I wanted to see the two together (is this allowed to be said, hahaha), and wanted to see them together, but now it has become an exotic relationship. It's so miserable, haha. What makes me even more resentful is that throughout the whole story, I didn't seem to even see a kiss between the attacker and the enemy. The kiss was given to King Chong and the temporary mark was given to Xiao Moqin. The more I think about it, the worse it gets, hahaha.

The ending was so rushed, and I felt like many pitfalls were left unfinished. . The previous article was clearly written very well, I thought I had found a life novel

I want to read a complete story about O Gong and A Shou, and it's a strong O, woo woo XX this article, woo woo X

The setting is very interesting, but the protagonist is really too passive. All his decisions are pushed, and his achievements basically come from Xiao.