Everyday Life in 1970S Hong Kong

A lot of it has not been written. The mother in the previous life can write a side story, why did she cross over, and the father has not been released from prison. Lina and her mother have not been written. She likes the second male lead. I feel that the author is embarrassed to write this emotional scene. The ending of the parents in this life is not written. What does the male protagonist like the female protagonist? I feel that the relationship between them is inexplicable.

What a waste of characters and backgrounds. The foreshadowing was good in the beginning, but it was terrible after the emotional scenes. According to the national conditions of mainland China at that time, wouldn't the male protagonist mind that the female protagonist was not a virgin? It's hard to imagine how time has passed. . Cheng Sheng is too miserable. It's okay if he doesn't get it. But if he gets it, he loses it because of his kindness. Do you want to destroy him personally? It's better to delete all the emotional scenes

Oh my god, that sucks. Think about it before you open a new book. Worrying quality. After the heroine and the male lead slept together once, they didn't stay together for long, and they didn't write a few chapters. What kind of feelings could they have? It's embarrassing for readers to say that they are affectionate. The heroine and the hero didn't have the hatred they had imposed before they slept together. After sleeping together once, they didn't feel the heroine's feelings for the hero until the end. They were stuck together. It's illogical. Is it that I have used someone else's manuscript in the first place and then continued to do it? It's a waste of my feelings that I haven't given up on following this article. Either I am unable to make up for it later, or I wrote it like this on purpose.

This is not about the heroine being a playboy. In the face of life, she chooses a good suitor and falls in love with him. If Cheng Sheng hadn't thought too simply, maybe they would be a model couple. After all, the heroine is good-looking and talented. Men will like her as long as they are not blind. Later, she was drugged, became pregnant, and was forced to get married due to circumstances. We are all adults. In a city as open as Hong Kong, it is common for people to be self-indulgent like the heroine's sister. It is even more modern, and the heroine does not interfere with others and destroy other people's feelings. I don't understand why some people are spraying something

Ah, maybe we can continue writing the ending.

Since the rice is turned outward, bad review

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Bad writing (full order, supplementary points)

The author asked the second male lead to be the male lead from the beginning. However, everyone wanted Cheng Lai to be the male lead, so he changed the male lead to Cheng midway. When I knew about the author's decision, I gave up. I just saw this book and bought the finale chapter to read. I didn't expect such an ending. So when writing articles, many authors will state: "I won't change the male lead. The cp is set. Don't like it." It's really easy to disrupt your own rhythm by changing the male lead midway because of the reader's preference.

What a rubbish article. . . . . .