The Tale of Chenxing/GL

I almost gave up as soon as I saw Morning Star. But the storyline is really good. Sigh.

Could you keep it brief? It's a bit long-winded!

Last time I almost didn't finish what I was saying. After your explanation, I felt unsure how to proceed; my words failed me. But since I've already written it, I'll post it anyway. You can decide what to do next. 1. This relates to the technological and cultivation aspects mentioned earlier. This relationship will inevitably permeate every aspect of daily life.

First of all, my opinion represents only my personal viewpoint. Perhaps because I don't read this type of writing style very often, please read my opinions selectively. I'm not providing writing guidance, just suggestions! When I say things like "must" or "maybe it would be better to write it this way," please automatically replace them with "maybe it would be better to write it this way."

When will the sequel be made??♀?...

I want to see how those two bricklayers are doing now...

Where is the yandere girl, Xiao Jiang?! She hasn't even made her dazzling debut yet!

Wow, that's amazing! It's so long, could it go on for thousands of chapters?

It shouldn't have been deleted, right? This is my sixth comment today. It seems so. If it was deleted, let me know and I'll repost it (actually, I was just trying to get points).

I thought about it again, and I feel that many plot points, like the carriage scene, weren't well-balanced. Initially, your setting for cultivation wasn't particularly advanced (I think that's right, considering you said it wasn't true cultivation at the beginning). At that point, the fusion of cultivation and technology was problematic.