If you fall, I'll fall with you.
If you turn dark, I'll help you destroy the world.
If you're cold-blooded and ruthless, I'll become a demon who kills without blinking right alongside you.
A person with depression fell in love with someone with schizophrenia, loving them so much they couldn't let go.
A person with schizophrenia fell in love with someone with depression. They saved the other person, but lost themselves in the process.
Yuxi once said, "Ding Ziyan, I will never abandon you."
[Reading Guide]
1. This story is plot-driven.
2. The story takes place over a short period, and the pacing is a little fast.
3. Angsty at first, sweet afterward.
4. Thanks for reading. Please support the official version and reject pirated copies.
Theme:
There are so many pitfalls in Dada... I'm so crazy about this and I'm cheering for Dada! Follow Da Da all the way... Fill in the holes, haha.
It's a little bit cruel, but the setting is very good, please give it a try
Ding Yifen, hahahahahahaha, you win, you win, hahahahaha!
I am Ai Jiang, the poster from the forum. Because I have also written a short story about schizophrenia, I am very fond of your writing~ Come on! I have silently collected you~
The writing is very delicate, it would have been nice if the descriptions were more specific.
Great writing in big letters, keep up the good work
Great, this is from the forum. The big title is consistent with the style of the writing, divorce and sadness. Frankly speaking, I don't dislike sadistic writing, but I rarely look for it myself recently. I'm quite looking forward to the setting of depression and schizophrenia. However, describing it from the perspective of a mental patient is really a test of skill. Too much seems artificial, too little seems ordinary. I have only read two chapters and will not comment on this part. However, the reading experience given by these two chapters is not very smooth to be honest.
Let's talk about two points below
1. I once couldn't figure out whether the male and female protagonists were in a relationship, in an affair, or in the process of breaking up. The male protagonist used it in the first chapter. He felt that as soon as he let go of the other party, he would break up with him. However, they should not be in a relationship, right? In this case, even if the heroine refuses... Well, it's a bit like the hero forcing affection, which is not very comfortable. Then in the second chapter, it seems that the male protagonist is also monitoring the female protagonist... Which is quite uncomfortable, orz
2. The timeline is not very clear. The first chapter was okay, from the heroine being immersed to the hero appearing to the hero being beaten and vomiting blood. But in the second chapter, it started to feel magical, such as this paragraph
'He Du described the imagined scene in his mind with an intoxicated look on his face.
Yu Xi likes Ding Ziyan, but because she is a girl and a little shy, she chooses to send her loved one to the hospital to express her deepest love. Once the other person is injured, she hides in the house and feels heartbroken...' In fact, I didn't understand the part that He Du described with intoxication at all, whether it was the end of the conversation above or Yu Xi's paragraph below. Then, as if I was in a daze, and I didn't know whether the male protagonist was discharged from the hospital or not, the male protagonist was beaten up in the bar... Then I gave up the article orz.
The above two points are my personal reading experience and are for your reference only. The theme and type of this article are difficult to write, and it is still a mainstream and unflattering article. Come on, I wish you write better and better.
I'm Tsuji Han, this is the trumpet. !
I guess Ziyan will definitely appear when racing in the next chapter
Come on, wait for the update. The copywriting is very interesting
There are so many pitfalls in Dada... I'm so crazy about this and I'm cheering for Dada! Follow Da Da all the way... Fill in the holes, haha.
It's a little bit cruel, but the setting is very good, please give it a try
Ding Yifen, hahahahahahaha, you win, you win, hahahahaha!
I am Ai Jiang, the poster from the forum. Because I have also written a short story about schizophrenia, I am very fond of your writing~ Come on! I have silently collected you~
The writing is very delicate, it would have been nice if the descriptions were more specific.
Great writing in big letters, keep up the good work
Great, this is from the forum. The big title is consistent with the style of the writing, divorce and sadness. Frankly speaking, I don't dislike sadistic writing, but I rarely look for it myself recently. I'm quite looking forward to the setting of depression and schizophrenia. However, describing it from the perspective of a mental patient is really a test of skill. Too much seems artificial, too little seems ordinary. I have only read two chapters and will not comment on this part. However, the reading experience given by these two chapters is not very smooth to be honest. Let's talk about two points below 1. I once couldn't figure out whether the male and female protagonists were in a relationship, in an affair, or in the process of breaking up. The male protagonist used it in the first chapter. He felt that as soon as he let go of the other party, he would break up with him. However, they should not be in a relationship, right? In this case, even if the heroine refuses... Well, it's a bit like the hero forcing affection, which is not very comfortable. Then in the second chapter, it seems that the male protagonist is also monitoring the female protagonist... Which is quite uncomfortable, orz 2. The timeline is not very clear. The first chapter was okay, from the heroine being immersed to the hero appearing to the hero being beaten and vomiting blood. But in the second chapter, it started to feel magical, such as this paragraph 'He Du described the imagined scene in his mind with an intoxicated look on his face. Yu Xi likes Ding Ziyan, but because she is a girl and a little shy, she chooses to send her loved one to the hospital to express her deepest love. Once the other person is injured, she hides in the house and feels heartbroken...' In fact, I didn't understand the part that He Du described with intoxication at all, whether it was the end of the conversation above or Yu Xi's paragraph below. Then, as if I was in a daze, and I didn't know whether the male protagonist was discharged from the hospital or not, the male protagonist was beaten up in the bar... Then I gave up the article orz. The above two points are my personal reading experience and are for your reference only. The theme and type of this article are difficult to write, and it is still a mainstream and unflattering article. Come on, I wish you write better and better.
I'm Tsuji Han, this is the trumpet. !
I guess Ziyan will definitely appear when racing in the next chapter
Come on, wait for the update. The copywriting is very interesting