Q: The tickets to scenic attractions are too expensive, and I want to sneak in for free. What should I do? A: Turn into a zombie! Let's see who dares stop you! Q: People always cut in line. What should I do? A: Turn into a zombie! Bite the bastards! Q: Whenever I see beautiful scenery, I can't help screaming, but I'm worried my husband will think I'm too noisy. What should I do? A: Turn into a zombie! If he loves you, he'll only feel sorry for you!
That's right, after turning into a zombie, I not only fulfilled my dream of traveling around the world, but also had a handsome guy accompany me the whole way! A resourceful dog-walking top × a grudge-holding zombie top. That's right, it's a strong-and-strong pairing with both of them taking charge~ Updates begin January 1. The whole story is finished and will update at five every afternoon~ Follow my Weibo, "Chigua D," to help with your reading :)
Next story: "After Being Reborn, I Realized the World Apparently Doesn't Need Me to Save It"
Jian Yang carries the hopes of the entire world as he travels back in time in a time machine. This lone hero endures countless hardships and destroys the source of the world's destruction. But the superior who gave him the order arrests him, on the grounds that he maliciously sabotaged a major Alliance-level research project. His lover of ten years pulls away from him.
"Who are you? I don't know you!"
As the guards drag him away, Jian Yang reaches out in disbelief: "Wait! This isn't how being reborn was supposed to go!"
A serious story, from the bottom's perspective. You can't just pick up where a past relationship left off because you want to!
Theme: Exploring the causes behind the phenomenon of "Narita breakup" and ways to resolve it.
This protagonist's character is tragic no matter how you look at it. Nothing like this is possible in the drama (; 1_1) Fortunately, he has the halo of the protagonist.
Sorry for being late, here comes the final comment. The setting is very catchy. It's the kind of setting that makes me want to see it as soon as I read the copy. It can be said that I won at the starting line. There are often sentences that are eye-catching in the article, and the rhythm is not draggy. Here is a special mention for commending the semi-serious and semi-funny language at the end, hugging my wife mua. It is recommended that you write longer and use a few more ideas to support the article, which means opening a few more copies. After all, most readers nowadays are willing to read slightly longer articles, and short and medium stories are not very popular. Also, the character design is not very full. You can see a little bit of human entanglement in Xiao Wang, but Xiao Yu's image is a bit flat. It can be seen that he wanted to write a more complex character, but he failed to pull it off. The character is dull and not very likable. Essentially, the plot is not intense enough and the characters are not reflected. This can be corrected slowly. It is recommended that you write some short essays to practice your writing. Now that we are talking about the plot, let me mention it again. Some plots did not meet the expectations of readers (at least me), which is the so-called "digging holes but not filling them". Although this problem is not very obvious because the text is not long, it is quite uncomfortable to watch. For example, Xiao Wang likes to take pictures. This matter is mentioned repeatedly in the article, but the opportunity (or inducement) does not feel very sufficient. I have not seen an analysis of this matter or anything similar. It feels like there is something hanging in the air. There is also the goose. In fact, this goose does not play a unique role in promoting the development of the plot. There is no book without coincidence. What an excellent novel needs is that this "coincidence" happens and the reader is barely aware of it. At least there must be a coincidence (it can also be said to be bloody). I feel that the addition of this big goose will not be of much help to the plot and will be cumbersome. The author can design a "highlight moment" unique to this goose, which will be much better. Ah, sorry for one more thing. The article didn't quite fit the text, and I thought it was a full text promoting the plot in Happy Travel, but in fact it seems that Xiao Wang and Xiao Yu only went shopping at the beginning, and the travel accounted for too little, which made people feel empty (?). The problem is that the author failed to put the main line and the result that the author wanted to achieve well together. For example, it's like I want to go to the United States. As a sailing enthusiast, I want to take the water route, but I feel that a sailboat can't travel that far, so I run to the Bering Strait, sail a sailboat from there to Canada, and then go to the United States. But the truth is, I could totally take a boat. For example, the two protagonists went to Akihabara to touch a figure and were beaten by zombies. Then Xiao Wang hammered the man and Xiao Yu discovered the shocking secret like this (laughing). In this article, it is the Colosseum, an excellent place to promote the plot. Why change the original version_(:::з∠)_The setting is really good, I look forward to the extra chapter. Generally speaking, the author's control over the text is very good. I have saved the column and hope to see great improvement. PS. Don't give up your efforts. I have seen many good authors give up because there are not many people who supported them in the early stage. It's such a pity. I specially wrote a long review.
It makes me want to give up. It's Wang who has been tolerant all this time. When did someone want to kill Wang, but he didn't let him kill him. Holy mother, I feel sick.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha a group of infected people twisting and turning forward, it's so hilarious
Porridge's transformation is still a bit abrupt, and I feel like there wasn't enough foreshadowing before, and with this twist, it ends directly. I always feel that his character is not fully developed, and there are not many highlight moments of Porridge... But the story is generally interesting, even though it is just a glimpse of the apocalyptic world~ Looking forward to the extras!
Xiao Yu is so innocent. Do you know that Wang Bo across from you has been craving for your body for a long time? If you don't act quickly, it will be Xiao Yu who gets eaten for the first time.
Beautiful! Although this aspect of Our Lady is really uncomfortable, overall it feels like watching a fairy tale. The adventure is really fun.
Wow! I almost thought it was going to be, so great!
I like it, it's very interesting. It's really hard to find articles about each other in the apocalypse.
So cute hahahahaha