The Treacherous Minister Bows His Head

I liked this article very much in the first 1/3, but the more I read it, the more... The author's writing is not bad, but the story has too many bugs. The plot direction and character behavior are unconvincing, inconsistent, and unclear. The more I look at it, the more I think... What is all this? Why is this person doing this? How could things develop like this here? It makes no sense... There are a lot of such questions... In fact, in the middle of the game, someone was complaining in the comment area, saying that the character logic and plot development were unbearable. Although I feel sorry for the author when I say this, I bought it with money, and I don't mean to criticize it, so I can honestly say my feelings after reading it. I struggled to read it in the end and was quite disappointed. Why. I hope the author will practice more and continue to improve.

After reading, check in! The author wrote the plot very well, and the emotions of the protagonist were also very good. However, the length of the supporting characters was too much for me, which made me very annoyed and I particularly disliked the supporting characters. Also, I have CP and I couldn't accept it when I was forced to kiss. Apart from the emotions of the protagonist, the whole book was not very enjoyable. The plot made me very angry and aggrieved throughout the whole process. Except for the protagonist's previous relationship, the plot is a bit high-end and low-end.

I really like some of the author's descriptions of scenery and environments that are interspersed from time to time, such as two people sitting on the porch watching the rain pouring and osmanthus falling, but the plot is really too frustrating...

I watched it on MP4 at school. Although it wasn't particularly good, I could still watch it. But when I came back to find the author, I found that he hadn't written it for several years, which was a bit of a pity.

It's pretty good to watch, but some of the plot is a bit messy. But I mainly watched the two protagonists, so I mainly thought the ending was too rushed. There could be more extras, hahaha.

The writing is okay, the first part is very good, but the more you read later, the more confusing it becomes, and the storyline and logic are a bit unreasonable.

There can't be more later. This ending is too hasty

I feel the same way, I hope the author can write better and better

I've read them all and checked in. Why do I feel like the author has so many holes that he didn't have to fill in?

Tuhao Tuhao, did you drop this?