The Face-Slapping Backfires

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Finished with flowers. Awesome

I still liked this joke at the beginning, but after starting from the beginning, the plot style is too different from the previous one; in terms of character creation and plot arrangement, the author has a certain degree of personal control, and the author's freedom is to use it however he wants. I think this is natural (after all, I am too). As a reader, this article has almost no corresponding exciting points, and occasionally it is skipped, which is one; if it focuses on the love between two people, it is too common to sprinkle sugar in the later stage, such as the plot of two-way secret love in the forum, which is the second; if it is a logic article that focuses on solving puzzles, the darkening of the sister's friend, the misunderstanding and tolerance of the two male protagonists, as well as the final explanation and encore, it seems thin. After the evaluation, let me first conclude by saying that the author is great? Come on! Then I will give you some small suggestions, after all, there is so much nonsense before. The first and last parts of this article can be considered two articles, or the latter part is a long extra chapter. So what I was trying to do was that after the initial outline, the author failed to write the expected feeling of attaining righteousness in three lives and three lives as he wanted to write. There should be no cheating in the article that exceeds expectations. Although there will always be a sense of fatigue in the middle and late stages of writing, this method will appear particularly abrupt. There is no hidden clue in the front but a huge turning point, such as the identity of the minor attacker. There are also different memes used in different places, and the same memes are used by different people, but they are all different. In comparison, the author is better at writing sadistic memes, and sweet memes are a bit funny. Well, this is my understanding of what follows. Moreover, the secret love misunderstanding between the brother-student couple and the protagonist's pair are too similar, so it is a mistake to appear in similar places in the same article. Okay, a bunch of flowers are given to the person who wrote this story to comfort my lonely heart, thank you!

It looks great. Come on (???_??)?

Very nice! Congratulations on the completion! Throw flowers!

Lin Yan (after confession): Why do I sleep in the study room?

Agree with the following, spread flowers

Um?!?! Why is it over? Has your sister stopped causing trouble?

Very beautiful! Like~

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