Heartbreak (Complete, Send Me Your Criticism)

When reading a story, be sure not to insert yourself into it. Encourage the author's writing style.

Life is a process of finding love. Only after experiencing love and being loved can you find the one that suits you best. If you love her, you have to see if she is happy. That's all right, right?

It's still a very good article~~ It's really wrong to string together each story~~ If you ask for bricks, I will give you flowers.

The style is like Baby Annie... Bitter... Astringent...

It's ugly, why are your words still so embarrassing! How could the author be so boring? Moreover, even if it is written by the author, you cannot criticize it, because after all, people have numb hearts, so don't do this again~

I like to describe it as a bystander. Come on~

If you have any questions, please ask Master Chu Chu directly. I believe you will get a satisfactory answer!

Did Mr. Chu Chu's comment come from me? If the author posted it under Chu Chu's name to defraud scores, his behavior can be said to be shameless.

Taking advice, should be called

Regarding your short article, I think it is quite good, very true and very close to life. But I still have to tell you that your writing does not have its own unique style. In other words, if you don't tell me that you wrote those articles, I won't be able to tell that they are your writing style. Variety of styles is actually not a bad thing, but it would be a pity if it is incomprehensible. From your deliberate description in "Rain's Love Affair", to the exaggerated rendering in "The Beauty of the World", and now the plain and thin "Fireworks Season", I don't see your Yi Chenyue's style. It seems to have been in a state of exploration, and the writing style is not yet mature, but there is room for development. Regarding this short article, I think there is no big problem with the writing style. The characters and narrative are much clearer and more concise than the previous two long stories. :) Maybe it's because I've only read one of your novels before, so my review is a bit one-sided. I apologize in advance However. . . . . I find that you are not very strong in story conception. You have inspiration, the urge to write, and some ideas, but you are weak in the overall structure. Sometimes you even feel weak when narrating. It seems that I am focusing on one thing and not the other. I am in a hurry to write something but I forget to write the complete storyline first. This is a common mistake many authors make. Let me give you a few examples. First of all, you did not explain the identities of these women. Why do they live together? Study? Renting a house together? Or some other reason? There is no explanation in your article In addition, using fireworks to describe women is actually inappropriate. Of course, in some cases, it is a very good and excellent metaphor. However, using "two women as beautiful as fireworks" at the beginning seems a bit abrupt. Fireworks are gorgeous and short-lived. It is very appropriate to describe the miserable life of a beautiful woman, but it is not easy to use it to describe her appearance. . . . . . . This kind of article is suitable for such adjectives, but it is not suitable at all times. Beautiful words should be used in the right place, and in the right place~~:) The novel is divided into several chapters, one chapter tells the story of a woman, and the one I dislike the most is the story of Ye Zi~~ (Hey, the author is beating me up~) Love can be very strong or very fragile, but no matter how strong love is, it cannot last forever with this woman's joking attitude. I have heard a very classic taboo about love: you can joke about anything with him, but remember not to joke about breaking up. I don't think anyone would like their lover to take the serious matter of breaking up as a joke. This is contempt for each other's love and contempt for themselves. When your lover finally gets tired of living on tenterhooks, the real breakup is not far away. I don't want to say that this woman deserved it, but she brought it upon herself. The author easily used the words of Ye Zi's friend to excuse her behavior: "To be realistic, Pisces, he must have moved on and fallen in love with someone else. There are many men in society who have the opportunity to have an affair, and most of them are just excuses!" This is too rash and irresponsible. If a woman is hurt after a breakup, is it all the man's fault? She may be unintentional, or she may really think it's no big deal, but love is not only about loving, but also about understanding the other person's feelings. People who only focus on excusing themselves will not get love~~~:) She complained that her boyfriend would not formally introduce her identity to her family, but thinking about it from this man's perspective, her girlfriend always joked about breaking up. Without a sense of security, could he risk everything? Modern people know how to protect themselves better than ever! Well. . . . . . The cruel reality~~ What should I say about the girl who jumped into the sea after her first love failed? I think the portrayal of the boy she likes is a bit lacking. It was mentioned earlier that they even eloped to resist the obstruction from the outside world, but later they easily explained the breakup as because he had never really loved this girl. Isn't this a bit far-fetched? Even though the boy's mind is indeed changeable, it is impossible for him to elope for a girl he really doesn't love, right? Such a thing requires not only courage, but also intense psychological struggle and repeated thinking. If he didn't have strong feelings for the girl, this boy would never have resolutely run away from her while suppressing his inner guilt for his parents and fear for the future. Of course, later reality hit the two little flowers in the greenhouse, and he gave in and decided to break up. I think it is more accurate and more poignant to explain everything as the beautiful dream in the ivory tower being shattered after encountering reality. At the end, he suddenly denied everything before and just said lightly that he never really loved her. It was really confusing and not true. After many years, they may forget this innocent feeling, but at least they loved it. No matter how fickle the young man's mind is, he has one greatest advantage - love is the most sincere and free of impurities. Are you right? (If you feel you disagree, please don't mind the author~~~This is purely my one-sided opinion~~~~) Finally, let's talk about the name of this novel, "Fireworks Season". The author wants to refer to the period of youth~it is indeed beautiful, brilliant and short-lived. However, it seems to have a tragic tone, which seems to be a bit inconsistent with the youthful and lively look. What's more, the author still arranges a promising future for each woman at the end. Using fireworks as a metaphor does not seem very appropriate. That that. . . . Fireworks are something whose beauty disappears completely in an instant. Generally speaking, they don't seem to be used to describe a girl's youth, right??? Although it is also gone forever. . . . . . But why do I always feel that something is wrong~~~ (Someone scratches his head...) If they were a tragedy, the walking dead who were still alive without any hope at the end, then there would be nothing wrong with their names, but the author didn't seem to write it like this, right?? It seemed to give a little hope. . . .