A Forbidden Love in the World of Cultivation

It's written like that, but I still have expectations. It's so annoying and a waste of time.

Ah, what a pity The previous memory-killing emotional scene was quite well written. This ending is stuck here and is a bit inconsistent. In addition, there is no extra story, well, it would be great if there were extra stories

I prefer articles about cultivating immortals, but this article really hits the mark. When cultivating immortal literature, you must cultivate the great path and cultivate your heart. Anyone with amazing talent and beauty must have something special about them. Extraordinary talent and extraordinary character are still the most basic. But the two heroines have nothing but their destined qualifications. Indecisive, thousands of people die at every turn for love. The blood feud and the sect's gratitude seemed to be unimportant. There is neither the freedom and ease of pursuing the way of heaven, nor the entanglement of life and death for love. They didn't see what each other did for love. After all, Lian Ruyan left the school for Feng Wujue. What did Feng Wujue do for Lian Ruyan? Why can you put on an affectionate look? One Body, Two Souls feels like looking at two people without any sense of connection.

This is so good, I even cried TT????

It's obviously very interesting to write! The author doesn't have to make romance the main storyline! The plot is the main theme, and romance as a supplement is also great! After all, it's okay to give a side story!! I feel so uncomfortable when I'm stuck here!!

This is over, I can't stand it, big brother

It's like this, the setting is very interesting, but some of the writing is broken emmm If you want to show that Wujue is very dark, you shouldn't let her complain in all kinds of ways, so that the reader will not feel anything at all. You want to write about cultivating immortals, but the focus of this article is not on cultivating immortals at all. It feels like the combat power setting is just a decoration. There are cheats everywhere on the protagonist, and I can't even feel that any enemy is threatening. Also, I think the story of cultivating immortals should be based on plot and supplemented by love. The author thinks about the love between two people for most of the article, so of course it will collapse.

I'm so angry. I feel like I can write another two hundred chapters!! But cut it off because you are not satisfied? I think it's pretty good-looking! At least you have a past life left behind. Please explain it clearly in the extra chapter! Two extra extras will explain this clearly, great! (The Wannianbu comment genre jumped out of the water)

Although I haven't written the future story, this is a good book and I like it very much.

The ending was so sudden and unprepared!