Miniature People

Although it feels like a forced ending, I can understand it and feel relieved. After all, people have a process of growth. It is worth encouraging the author to try to write some "big" works, but please don't be deterred by temporary failure. Keep practicing.

Alas, I was actually a little disappointed after reading it. Although the author said that he felt that the writing was not good after reading it later, but in my personal opinion, the best part of the whole book is the beginning. Because the layout of the first volume is not big, it may be easier for the author to control it. The relationship between Yuze and Kai is also more three-dimensional. The game between mini humans and giants also creates a lot of suspense, which makes people want to read on. The second volume was actually okay. The role of the brother was handled better than I expected. This is why I disliked the setting of Lin Xiao's character after reading the whole book, and I was also curious about why the author set up such a character. The third volume is the worst written in my opinion, but it is also normal. The writing characteristics of this type of article are similar to those of horror movies. The final puzzle-solving step is often when the picture is exhausted. It is completely excusable for the author to write poorly. Not only the original author, but also mainstream science fiction novels often show many shortcomings in this link. The author also said that it was his first time to try such a large-scale theme. I think this has advantages and disadvantages. I see that many novel authors now like to construct large-scale structures, and they often elevate concepts to main gods, humans, dimensions, etc., But they are basically unable to control them well, because these concepts are too empty. Many authors directly learn some superficial concepts from other novels and use them, and second-hand becomes third-hand and then fourth-hand. There is a high-level concept but cannot fill its content. It can be seen that a small pattern is not a bad thing, and a large pattern is not necessarily a good thing. If you want to create a large background or even a complete world view, you need to put in a lot of effort. The most important thing is that any shaping is inseparable from reality. Draw materials from real life rather than just from novels. Another reason why I personally like the first volume is that I feel that the relationship between the characters is relatively rich, because there is not much conspiracy involved in the first volume, so the author spends a lot of time describing "people". I personally think that the core of the work is always on "people". People's feelings, relationships, personalities, and desires, if these are established, the work will not be too bad. The layout is just the icing on the cake, but if the "people" are not handled well, no matter how much ink is spent describing the conspiracy struggle, it will be empty and unsustainable. So my disappointment with this book lies in the back. The relationship between the characters is too messy, including the character Shen Yuze created at the beginning. By the end, I no longer feel his independence. It is more like a mess wrapped in a container. It is difficult to write a novel that involves memory. Not to mention that the author writes about the fusion and transmission of various memories in the subsequent plots, but the characters in the novel do not give corresponding feedback. Ghost in the Shell babbled about the relationship between memory and the body in a series without making it clear, but when it comes to this topic in the next volume, it is basically mentioned in one stroke. In fact, we also see the two brothers thinking about this issue in the first and second volumes, but in the second volume, Shen Yuze has the memories of three people stored in his body. Shen Yuze is just like a normal person. I am really speechless when I see this. I don't know what the author thinks about the relationship between these three people. In Before the next volume, I still felt that Lin Xiao, my elder brother, and my younger brother were three independent individuals. By the second volume, I felt that the three of them were in a mess, and their extended interpersonal relationships were also in a mess. The same was true for Kai and Zou Rui. Zou in the memory and Kai in the present tense also seemed like two people. The author should spend some time to clarify these things in the later period, but basically the shaping of character relationships has given way to the "puzzle solving" part. I still remember that the reason why Shen Yuze accepted Lin Xiao's memory was also for the truth of the year and to get more information from his memory. This plot has passed. I don't know how the author thinks. Personally, I think it is very instrumental. As a result, the character Shen Yuze completely lost his charm in the second volume, including the conversation with Shen Yuze after the memories of Kai and Zou Rui merged. It feels like the ambiguity accumulated in the first volume disappeared instantly. When I was writing this comment, I suddenly thought of the real Sakuraro and the fake Sakuraro in Tsubasa Chronicles, so I thought about whether Shen Kai and Shen Kai could be handled independently at that time. The past events can be there, but there is no need for the two to merge with Lin Zou's memory. I still feel that they are different. This may also be related to the reader's perspective. The details of Shen Kai's acquaintance were presented to me, but the love at first sight between Lin Zou and Lin Zou in my memory did not have enough foreshadowing for me to have feelings. And to be honest, I was afraid of seeing Lin Xiao like this when reading the novel. The character is too perfect and too superficial, without any attraction. His romance with Zou is just like his character, hanging in the air. It's hard to convince me. Of course it's love at first sight, but Zou's paranoid behavior later has no basis. Comparatively speaking, the two Shen brothers spent more pen and ink and displayed more emotions. They are definitely more fleshed-out than Lin Xiao in shaping. The elder brother himself said that he is an independent individual, but in the end the feeling presented is that he is worthy of being a clone. The two brothers still feel like they have become tool men. Actually speaking of this, I would like to mention the author's novel about what to do if the straight guy next door likes you. I really like the character creation of Shou and the emotional relationship between Gongshou and Gongshou in that book, so I think it's better not to put the cart before the horse.

It is indeed a very large and complicated article. Although it is a bit difficult to explain in a few words when filling in the pits, it is still very good when it is finished.

It's really grand. I'm glad that I just discovered the author of this article hh carefully.

Looking back after three years, I found that it is finished, the flaws are not hidden, and it is still very good!

I skipped the chapter and read it, and my mood finally calmed down. Looking at this article now in 2023, the first part is still very exciting, but the rest is very difficult to describe. The character design of the elder brother is terrible, the younger brother is directly invisible, the supporting characters are not even tool men and are more like walk-ons, and the mixing of body swapping and memory later only makes the readers uncomfortable, and there is no need at all. The author just wants to write about everything, scribbles a little bit about everything, and writes nothing well. The perfunctory ending shows how poorly the article was handled later on.

The first part is still the best

In fact, this is the most satisfying novel I have ever read. I hope I can rewrite it in the future. A novel with this format will definitely become a classic, and I also hope that I can become a witness to the classic.

This is the first time I have rewarded so much. I haven't read such a large-scale article in a long time. Combined with the current epidemic situation, I can feel the author's thinking about society and human nature, and his determination to never fail. The first volume feels like a Danmei novel about hunting games, but the rest of the story is higher than the Danmei style. On the emotional line, the two male protagonists have experienced so much that they no longer know which personality is in love with which personality. The setting of multiple personalities and memory transfer limits the protagonists' love brains. If they are ruthless and replace love with bonds later, the level of thinking can probably be improved to a higher level. What attracts me the most in this article is not the love line between Yuze and Kai, but the bond between the twin brothers. Even the emotional undercurrent between Han Shouqi and his brother is more attractive than the protagonist. Maybe Xiao Gong's personality portrayal is relatively weak. I am an old aunt and I also prefer tolerant love??? Torpedo encourages authors to exploit ideas when they have ideas. Readers not only want interesting characters and love, but also want to feel the author's interesting soul??

Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~