[Crossover] The Making of a Peaceful Honmaru

I've finished watching it~ I stayed up late last night and watched it for a long time Among all the sword fanfics I have read, this article is quite good. I think the biggest advantage of this article is its rigorous logic and complete plot. The violations revealed by Yoshikawa Yuki every time he appears make people feel heart-wrenching and super exciting, especially when the truth has not yet been revealed. Incidents one after another make people guess the truth by following the clues given by the author. Once they look at it, they can't stop at all. Although there are occasionally one or two chapters of daily life, the main events are still so dense that it makes people breathless. It makes people feel that the entire government of the time is shrouded in a shadow. Even in daily life, you are frightened and worried whether something will happen at the next moment. And the clues given by the author are all in the same direction, paving the way for the final conspiracy. You can probably guess the general situation after watching half of it, because really, all the clues are for this truth, and the direction is too clear. I personally think this is actually a small problem with the author's writing. The clues are too obvious. The author is even afraid that we won't notice, and will remind us, such as the description of smelling the fragrance of flowers for the first time. One consequence of this is that the readers guess the truth before the heroine (after all, the author reminds her from God's perspective), and they will be more anxious when they see that the heroine is one step away from the truth every time. In the early stage, readers and the heroine received a lot of information, but it was all scattered. The heroine almost came into contact with the truth many times, but was delayed due to some accidents. The article described in many places that the heroine seemed to have some inspiration, but was interrupted. It was all a routine (°ー°). I think the best thing in the whole article is the author's move. However, there are some clues that I think the heroine should have noticed but did not, such as the heroine's teacher when she was a child and the traitor in the palace. It was written in the article that he sneaked into the knife hiding room, and happened to be seen by the heroine when he was a child. Here the heroine regained her memory, and there were so many fusangshen watching. I don't think they could not notice that there was something wrong with this man, especially the fusangshen who were also curious about why it was so important. The knife-hiding room will be open to so many children. They guessed that it was most likely because of the royal heir. There was a small chance that the barrier was destroyed, but they had seen the heroine's teacher enter this place before, but he did not have royal blood, so there must be something wrong with the teacher. There is also the Huahua of Swordsman Fusangshen. Whenever the sword spirits have negative emotions, they will get hot, and then the negative emotions will disappear, as if they use negative emotions as nourishment. Isn't this exactly the same as the Huahua of that weird tree? There is also the issue of the rhythm of this article. My personal opinion is that it is a little too tense at the beginning and a little loose at the end, especially the memory section. Although memories are a very important part of the character of the aunt, there are a lot of scenes involving the fusangshen inserted in the middle. This also involves my last idea about the shortcomings of this article, which is that the emotional line between the knife and the aunts is a bit out of control. Maybe it's because this article has a lot of plot and it's Aunt All, so everyone doesn't have too many scenes. The swordsmen's admiration for their aunt is a bit abrupt. For example, Tsurugi Koumaru is understandable, but I don't know why for Lazy Cancer. There are others who are moved by the close contact with their aunts, but swords are swords. I think it's hard to distinguish between their love and loyalty to their aunt without a special incident or a broken sword. It's clear. I even think they lack knowledge and are vague about the opposite sex. They may get close to the owner and feel possessive, but this feeling is not necessarily love. They don't even know what love is. A knife with experience is better. A newly forged knife is like a newborn baby. Therefore, the knife has developed love for the owner without special experience (the heroine has not been in the job for a long time). I don't understand. But this is my personal opinion. After all, many sword and sword fanfics have many plots in which sword spirits fall in love with their aunts. But the article is a little biased, and it's normal for such a plot-oriented fanfic to have few emotional scenes. Overall, this article is great. It's very to my liking. It's really great that the first article is written like this. I believe the author will get better and better as he writes~

Click your paw! Congratulations on the completion! Just finished (*/ω\*)

I have been saving for a long time, congratulations on the completion.

This crane is really awesome! Charming Max! My soul instantly penetrated Yuli (crying loudly)

So sweet, is it someone else's side story?

I'm back, congratulations on the completion~(≧▽≦)/~

I also want a Tsurumaru extra! ! (From He Chu's last stubbornness

Very heartwarming ending, I really like this article.

I want a sweet side story from Crane Ball! Tsurumaru is so--so good! Handsome and reliable, sunny and fun!

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