[Crossover] Jasmine Becomes the Queen Bee

Scatter flowers It's a pity that I didn't write until adulthood

Damn it, is this the end? I was caught off guard. I was ready to read a hundred more pictures. I was not satisfied!!! So well written

I really, really like this article. The last long review has fully expressed my love, so this article just wants to talk about the flaws that I feel after re-reading it. I feel that the author should know the United States very well. Yes, there is no typo, I meant America. Because this article has a strong American feel... I only had a vague feeling before, because when I subconsciously imagined the scene, I always instinctively put the sunny California in the background instead of the rainy British island country. Now that I have figured out a few details, I roughly understand why I can't figure out the UK. Maybe the author focused more on the plot and character creation when writing, and ignored the creation of the overall atmosphere. The UK is famous for its rainy weather, but I didn't feel this when reading the article. On the contrary, I remember that when Sherlock judged that Jessica wore short skirts all year round, he once judged based on the difference in skin color on her legs that she had been wearing short skirts and shorts for almost three years. Let's not talk about whether short skirts and shorts are suitable in the cold UK. After all, these days, girls who don't care about the temperature are working very hard for style. There are people walking outside in stockings when the temperature is minus ten degrees... As long as you have a car or pay attention to go indoors to warm up from time to time, the feasibility is not low. So this doesn't prove anything. The key is, the key is, I remember that in the original play, Sherlock often judged whether someone had gone on vacation abroad based on whether the other person's skin was tanned - so the question is, he would judge this way, the subtext seems to be "it is impossible to tan if you stay in the UK"... On the one hand, this proves from the side how little sunshine the UK has. On the other hand, it also shows that a British girl like Jessica, who is born and raised and rarely goes abroad for vacation, may not be able to judge whether she is wearing short skirts on a whim or a long-term habit based on the difference in skin color on her legs. I think the author must live in a sunny place, so the scenes he writes also have a bright and scorching flavor. Various small details make it difficult for people to feel that the story takes place in a cold and cold area. Of course, the new novel will not have this problem, because it takes place directly in the United States, and the author's understanding of the United States will become a complete advantage. As for the differences between British schools and British teenagers and American teenagers in American schools... I have never been to the UK, so I can't compare. Anyway, teenagers all over the world are little monsters when they are in adolescence. When the British are crazy, they will not be gentler than Americans. At most... I think there may be some introversion and sultryness brought by the culture? While I was reading the article, I always felt like I was watching an American school drama. I felt that the emotional expressions of the characters (except for the Sherlock Holmes family and Jasmine) were all quite wild and outspoken, and it reminded me of the United States. But because I don't know what British schools and British teenagers are like, I can't give any good advice. The above is all about the sense of America, and the next step is character analysis. I said before that this is the least OOC Shenxia fanfic I have ever read, and I still retain this sentence, because I really haven't seen anyone restore Jasmine better. All in all, you did a very good job, but when I re-read it, I still realized that there were some slight deviations between the impression of Jasmine in the article and my mind - I found that Jasmine was a little too afraid of being seen through by Sherlock, so that she often felt a little psychologically weak when facing him. But in the original show, this relationship is actually reversed. Because in the original play, it was Jasmine who had a crush on Sherlock, but Sherlock basically treated her like nothing at first. You don't understand air because you think you already know the components of air. It's so simple that you don't need to understand it at all. Just breathe as usual and get the oxygen your body needs. But you get to know your crush. His every move and thought, whether he was happy or hurt, whether he was in a good or bad mood today, his various little habits... This was actually a very unequal observation relationship, because Sherlock completely ignored Jasmine, while Jasmine was observing Sherlock all the time. I daresay she knows him better than he knows her. Even with Sherlock's expressionless face, she knew if there was something going on in his mind. Sherlock is a very arrogant person. He thinks he knows Jasmine. He feels that Jasmine is like a glass of water, and he can see the bottom of it at a glance - and then he was slapped in the face by reality in the second season: the whole world did not see his plan to fake his death, and only Jasmine saw that he was as sad as if he knew he was going to die. The actor who plays Jasmine said that Sherlock has been integrated into Jasmine's blood. Because of this tragically hopeless yet committed unrequited relationship, she was probably the person who knew him best in the world. Even Watson approved of this: when he wanted to find someone who could see through all Sherlock's tricks to deal with him, the first thing he thought of was Jasmine. In the original play, Sherlock is always seen through by Jasmine, but Jasmine is not afraid of being seen through by Sherlock. She can be said to be confident when facing him, because Sherlock's biggest intimidating weapon, deduction, does not work on her - Watson may still have some things about his girlfriend that he doesn't want Sherlock to tell openly. What about Jasmine? She has nothing to fear. She was mocked in front of Sherlock in the Christmas episode, which was embarrassing enough. She has come alive, and apart from I Love You in Season 4, nothing can be worse than this. Jasmine is a very strong girl and has a bit of dark humor (this is reflected in many episodes, such as the joke she made on Christmas to comfort Mrs. Hudson's hip pain, and the joke she made with Lestrade using someone's brain when she was worried about Sherlock's best man's speech in the third season - but I haven't seen her dark humor in any Chinese fanfics, and it seems that only a few English fanfics have shown it). By the third season, her relationship with Sherlock had actually entered old friend mode. When Sherlock asked her to test his alcohol level, she choked him to the point of embarrassment, and the two joked about each other very well. And this season, Jasmine slapped Sherlock three times, doing something that everyone in the show wanted to do but few actually did (Watson slapped Sherlock a few times, but no one else). Of course, this has changed slightly in this article: Jasmine has a crush on Sherlock because of Katie's incident. Moreover, she merged the personalities of those girls, and was essentially no longer the original Jasmine Amber. I just think she could be more confident when facing Sherlock. After all, while she had learned about Sherlock that she could tell he was sad in his normal face, the young Sherlock had no idea what she knew. But it's actually understandable. After all, Jasmine used to have no secrets to hide, but now she is full of secrets, and her behavior patterns are so predictable... Well, it is actually quite reasonable to feel guilty in front of Sherlock. But I always feel that Jessica's attitude towards Sherlock seems to lack something compared to Jasmine in the original play... Maybe it's the feeling of "familiarity"? Many times Jessica feels to me like an ordinary time traveler who has a crush on Sherlock, rather than Jasmine Amber, who has been with Sherlock at close range for many years, knows his secrets, helped him fake his own death, and was friends with him, and has seen through him. But the author has really written it very well. Jasmine is just a little transparent. She is like this in the play, and she is like this outside the play. Very few people study her character. Even fans who like Jasmine mostly do it because of Fumo's CP, or because Jasmine is ordinary and resonates well with fans. She is one of those ordinary characters but has her own characteristics, so she is particularly difficult to grasp. If you write it in a normal way, it will become popular, if you write it in a special way, it will not be Jasmine. The number of appearances in the special drama is pitifully small, and there is not much material to study her character traits. I have to admit, I was actually a drama fan + Sherlock fan at first. Because I don't like Danmei at all, I would add the filter condition of Fu Mo when searching for articles on the Internet, knowing that the one that came out must be BG (but I still got a lot of surprises. Once I was almost finished watching it and suddenly realized that the deputy CP was Lei Hua...?!)... And then I gradually fell in love with Jasmine. So I actually don't do much research on Jasmine, because it always takes me a long time to understand a character. My understanding of Sherlock has changed several times, and now I can finally get a handle on it. Jasmine started late and had little information, making it even more confusing to interpret. Because of this, I generally don't dare to write fanfics. Because when I read it some time after I finished writing it, I realized that it was all black history... = = I am probably the kind of person who doesn't know where to start when writing, but is very good at provoking thorns. Anyway, uh, despite the nitpicking, I still loved this article. Today happens to be Christmas Eve. Wish the author a happy Christmas Eve ~

This is probably the least OOC Sherlock fanfic I have ever read. There is no Sherlock who keeps calling people goldfish, there is no British government with exaggerated powers, there is no Mycroft who is overly loving, there is no Sherlock who is not financially independent and spends Mycroft's money every day, and there is no Jasmine Amber who likes Sherlock to the point of completely losing herself. When I watched the original show, my first favorite character was Sherlock, followed by Jasmine. In the play, their feelings haven't reached that point yet, but when it comes to anyone in the original play who may end up with Sherlock, the only one who seems possible to me right now is actually Jasmine. So I was really surprised to see this article - I have read some Fu Mo articles in Jinjiang, but there are basically none that are not OOC, and most of the authors use Jasmine's identity while looking down on her character. They find someone to time-travel her, or change her into a noble and cool character who looks down on everyone, and then hook up with Moriarty (sometimes with Irene), and play a dog-blooded polyamorous relationship with two or three boats. But I don't like Jasmine like this. I feel that if you want to write such a story about the heroine and Sherlock, it would be better to create an original one instead of borrowing Jasmine's leather suit and other unknown wines. Jasmine is just an ordinary girl who is very good at reading. She likes Sherlock so she is willing to accommodate him. But she would not shake her head like a soft bag and say "No, it doesn't matter" after Sherlock said something terrible. Instead, she would tell him in her own way, "You did a terrible job and I was hurt." She is a person with a temper. Although she behaves in a very gentle way, sometimes it is this kind of gentle person who pokes the most holes in the heart of people like Sherlock. And Jasmine is not stupid - anyone who can become a pathologist and not be ridiculed by Sherlock at a professional level cannot be a fool no matter how you think about it. It's just that she's only smart in her own profession, and she can't tell what you were up to last night just by looking at you like Sherlock. If Jasmine is smart and good at dancing, then she is not Jasmine. This is why I accepted the original heroine well, but I couldn't accept the changed Jasmine. Of course, originality also depends on whether the character is OOC... OOC is really so serious these days, I almost want to cry when I look at it. In fact, when I first started searching for fanfiction, I was very tolerant towards OOC, because among fanfics, there must be some OOC in them. But when some common fan fiction began to flood the screen, my endurance was infinitely reduced. For example, the word "goldfish", now I will definitely abandon the article whenever I see Sherlock say "goldfish" or use "goldfish" in my mind to evaluate others. I really can't stand it after reading too much. It was obviously just the words used by Mycroft to explain his view of this worldview to Sherlock once in a while. Probably because he was too arrogant, most people ignored the scenes in the original play and blamed Sherlock for this. Maybe the "mature and stable" Mycroft in their hearts would not have such a middle-aged world view anyway (however, I think Mycroft is actually super arrogant, he just hides it better). The key is that after acquiring the distinctive signature word "goldfish", many authors have confidently reduced their vocabulary and written Sherlock as if he would not be ridiculed without the goldfish. In the original drama, he was clearly a charming character who made jokes and occasionally had a sense of humor. However, he was written as a childish child who liked to chew "goldfish!" And exchange comments with the heroine. Well, yes, another common OOC is Xia Sansui, who is often overly childish. Sherlock can be very naive sometimes, but no matter how naive he is, it is only for his age. The people in his play are all in their 30s, and Mycroft is about 40 or 50. The interaction between the two brothers is still full of the sense of sight of male peacocks trying to suppress each other, which makes people laugh. Their behavior is indeed childish for their age, but no matter how childish they appear on the surface, these two are also real adults. Bickering is bickering, they know what they are doing. The other three fan fictions that I have always wanted to complain about are "The adult Sherlock swipes Mycroft's card every day" and "Sherlock is actually super rich and living with John just out of boredom/impulsivity/pity/whim/bank card being frozen by Mycroft (I'm confused) Well, is it a special national condition of country E that the government can freeze the bank card of an adult citizen for bullshit reasons like "he's too fussy" or "he's disobedient"?)" And "Mycroft installed surveillance in Sherlock's house and Sherlock knew about it and was used to it." I think this is one of the biggest conflicts between the two brothers. Sherlock knew that his brother would definitely spy on him, and he couldn't completely escape his surveillance, but he would never let him put things into his home. That would be a bit too much. Therefore, after this article learned about the surveillance, he had a big fight with Brother Mai, which really fits the reaction that Sherlock would have in my heart. I would like to express my love to the author and Wenwen~ And spending other people's money as an adult is also a second-hand concept that I can't complain about. Children in European and American countries basically leave their parents' houses as soon as they reach adulthood. They earn their own bread and milk, rent their own houses, and live with whomever they like. Unless there is some kind of family foundation or they are born with a silver spoon in their mouth, ordinary people will work while going to school to save their tuition fees, and will not ask for money from their families anymore. In such an environment, it is really a shame to swipe your brother's card when you are over 30. It is impossible for someone as proud as Sherlock to do it. His spirit of "what's yours is mine" is usually related to solving crimes, such as stealing a handful of potentially useful documents, hiding important evidence, etc. - And the fact that he occasionally uses Jasmine's bedroom as his safe house revealed in the third season really shocked me - but outside of solving cases, he is not really that outrageous, which means he looks a little scary when he talks and makes people want to shut up and goes crazy out of boredom. How can I put it this way? A native Englishman still uses his brother's card as an adult. If the relationship between the brothers is particularly good and the brother really has needs... It may be possible. But that's not the case with the Holmes brothers. Moreover, the original Fu had to live with Watson because he had no money. Both he and Maggie belonged to the middle class in the Victorian era who needed to work to support their families - yes, government employees were also middle class, the kind who relied on their wages to live. Unless you are a noble yourself, it is another matter for nobles to enter politics. The original Fu was very poor at the beginning. After all, freelancing is not as stable as the income of a small civil servant. It was later that Watson published his short stories about solving crimes, which gave him some fame. Later, the clients who came to him became richer and richer, and the rewards became more and more generous, and he began to become rich. I don't really like fanfics where the Holmes family is set up as a noble family. Originally I just wanted to read a romance novel about falling in love with a detective, but when I read it this way, it felt like I was reading "The surprise of life flies on a branch and turns into a phoenix", and the feeling suddenly changed. If the heroine's family background is average, then it's about how Cinderella will marry into a wealthy family. If the heroine's family background is also rich and powerful, then it becomes a marriage of wealthy families. The male and female protagonists use money, power, family background (and IQ bonus) to easily reach the top, which seems particularly boring. But this article is different. This article is simply a breath of fresh air among many Sherlock fans. Not only does it not have those common ambiguities, but it is probably the most accurate and convincing way of restoring Sherlock and Jasmine that I have ever seen. The author captures the characteristics of European and American characters very accurately, and it feels like a youth campus version of Sherlock. Here Sherlock is just a minor, he is immature and will fail. However, unlike many adult Sherlocks who are portrayed as unreasonable childish ghosts, this tender version of Sherlock has his precocious and reliable side. Precocious children generally mature early, and school bullying and Sherlock are also very interesting topics. I think someone like him who was so unsociable must have been bullied when he was a child. The question is how he would react - the answer given in this article is really unexpected. In the end, he turned into a campus star... But it is quite normal. He is a smart person after all. I have always felt that Sherlock is not completely ignorant of people. You can see that he can act believably when he wants to act. The reason why I am usually so KY is because I let myself go. I know social etiquette but am too lazy to follow the rules. Of course, he does have a low emotional intelligence and can't quite understand why he would hurt other people's feelings. I think this started to change a little bit from the third season. He started to try to understand it, but he didn't fully understand it yet. Even if you really understand it by the fourth quarter, there is still a lot of room for tutoring. Jasmine also surprised me very much. The jasmine in this article is really very restored. I didn't expect to see such restored jasmine in Jinjiang. In fact, even Jasmine on the external network has a lot of OOC. Everyone seems to have the impression of her as a shy, weak girl who has no bottom line for Sherlock, but in fact, she has been secretly in love with Sherlock for so many years despite everyone's attention, and she knows very well that this secret love will not be fruitful (that's why she has a normal boyfriend - because she knows very well that Sherlock is a bastard and will not give her any response). I think she actually has a very tough side in her character. Generally speaking, if you are a mentally fragile person, you may not be able to bear the situation of "I love him but he treats me like nothing" and run away. Only warriors who can truly withstand the blow can silently stay by the side of an arrogant man and treat me like nothing for so many years. When I watch dramas, I rarely side with the CP (strictly speaking, I don't side with Fu Mo, after all, as long as the original heroine is well-written, I'm fine with it). I also know that Shenxia is not a romantic drama, and it is unlikely to give a particularly clear result to a certain CP. But as for Fu Mo, I just hope that the screenwriters don't kill this possibility, just let them keep this openness, and don't be too cruel to them. But to be honest, it doesn't matter how they write it (I don't dare to have any expectations for those two guys = = I feel that Shenxia's scripts are getting tired every season, and I very much suspect that this drama has become some kind of burden on the screenwriters and actors, and they continue to film it just to respond to the enthusiasm of the fans). As long as there are conscientious works like this article, I can probably eat a few fanfictions every year.

Really, I feel like this is the real Sherlock, not like the cool and domineering ones in other fandoms, but the real Sherlock, an extraordinary and ordinary person.

I have to be there. For an ending that didn't work out in the movie, I got everything I wanted here and I couldn't think of a better ending, thank you, thank you sincerely again

I stayed up all night and read it. It was really well written. I really liked Jasmine and Juan Fu. Although farming is quite the same thing, I just want to see you sprinkle some sugar. Can there be a side story? PS: When will the new article be released?

Tian cried... I was really hit by these two sentences from Sherlock. I have read at least more than 20 of his fan stories in the past two or three years. Only these two sentences are the most simple and unpretentious, but the most touching and the most consistent with him.

Looks good, is there any follow-up?

Really great story, thank you so much