Twins in Turmoil

New article, please encourage me. I happened to comment on the beginning, and this article is only the beginning. The thunderstorm at the beginning and the fast-moving carriage in the desolation created a good atmosphere, and there was a feeling that a storm was about to come. The scene in the palace and the activities of the people in the carriage are not well intertwined, making it easy for people to be confused. The transition of scenes and plots needs to be expressed clearly but not rigidly, so that the connection is smooth, natural, and clear. Author's reply: Thanks I'm looking for improvements in this area

= =Then what. . .

Haha is it a magical story?

Tears, stepmother's new carrot pit, accidentally stepped on the air and fell down...

I climbed into the pit without fear of abuse. . . Waiting eagerly for stepmother's update. . .

Ah! ! So few words! ! I just watched it and it's gone, no! !

Sofa, my sofa, my twins are in chaos ah ah ah ah