No Marriage Before Ascension

It's very well written. The data will definitely get better and better in the future. Come on [come on]

Wow, congratulations on finishing the first part. I want to say that I really enjoyed watching the first part! I have been following it since it was published. To be honest, this book really surprised me, because I really didn't expect it to develop like this. In the first volume, I wrote about the plot of the mortal world and the past life of Qingcang Continent. Because I always recalled the past life, the plot was slow. I always thought that what you were going to write was the kind of power struggle in the mortal world that turns into a royal cultivating immortality. After all, after the heroine enters the book, the plot of the original male protagonist in this life is not small, and it is mentioned many times. Unexpectedly, after entering the Nine Nether Purgatory in the second volume, the heroine actually has a brand new body, and it is also revealed that this world is essentially a world created by a closed world, and immortal cultivators also rely on absorbing human cultivators to practice! At that time, I thought that the author was going to crusade the immortal cultivator, and then write about overthrowing the immortal cultivator. It turned out that I was wrong again. In the third volume of The Secret of the Sea, I have to say that the emotional scenes between the heroine Mo Xuan and the male protagonist Mu Chengyan were really written in a very touching way, which greatly made up for the lack of emotional rivalry scenes between the male and female protagonists in the previous two volumes. From this volume, I also felt the painful, refreshing and sweet feeling of being sober and sinking between Mo Xuan and Mu Chengyan. It has to be said that Mo Xuan is really brave. After she suspected that Mu Chengyan was a brand new soul that was only temporarily suppressed by Demon Lord Jing Yuan, she has been planning to extract Mu Chengyan's soul. Even if she offends the entire demon cultivator, even if she knows that doing so will harm Demon Lord Jing Yuan's inability to break through the Void Transformation Stage in the future, she has no hesitation! She even felt that as long as she was stronger, Demon Lord Jin Yuan would only suffer this loss! Mo Xuan and Mu Chengyan kissed, but after Demon Lord Jin Yuan realized it, he pushed Mo Xuan away and angrily said that Mo Xuan was frivolous towards him, and even scolded Mo Xuan for green tea. To be honest, I was laughed at again! Later, Mo Xuan asked him to come back because he was frivolous. He obviously wanted to kiss her, but he didn't dare to do it. He even made excuses for himself. He thought that Mo Xuan was deliberately seducing him, and at the same time, he heard Mo Xuan say that she had a sweetheart and was furious at the same time. This kind of reaction really struck a chord with me! To be honest, I really prefer the feeling that when the male protagonist is the Demon Lord of Ember Abyss, he is so arrogant and loving without knowing it when he is with the female protagonist, but he also cares about her crazily. What touched me the most was when Mo Xuan was clearly told by Mo Li at the end that Mu Chengyan and Demon Lord Jin Yuan were definitely the same person, and it was impossible for them to be reincarnated and become independent. It can be seen that Mo Xuan is really conflicted. I think she is really unwilling to admit that Mu Chengyan is the Demon Lord of Ember Abyss, so she really can't accept Mu Chengyan becoming the Demon Lord of Ember Abyss. Actually, thinking about it, after all, whether it was in the past life or this life, it was Mu Chengyan who unswervingly chose Mo Xuan, not Jin Yuan, and Dada is also good at writing. I can feel that Dada actually thinks so in his heart, so when I saw Mo Xuan finally decided to give up on extracting Mu Chengyan from Jin Yuan's body, I felt that it was really Mo Xuan and Mu Chengyan who were the best. I guess you think so too, so from then on, the male protagonist's name in big letters has always been Jin Yuan. Although Jin Yuan always felt that Mu Chengyan was him, he tried hard to prove this to Mo Xuan, but he himself felt unconvincing, and when he fully possessed all the memories, his actions actually made me feel that he was really not Mu Chengyan. The emotional drama is basically over in the third volume. I really like Nine Nether Purgatory in the fourth volume! I really love Zhaoxuan Tianzun in this volume! It really made me feel the strength of the strongest person in the Origin Main Realm. He directly cultivated the power to obliterate the Void Refining Stage, the Void Formation Stage and even the Void Transformation Stage. Even the highest rules could not do anything to her. I dare not think about how much fun Mo Xuan and Mo Li would have had in the Origin Main Realm if Zhaoxuan Tianzun had not ascended! But it is true that Zhaoxuan Tianzun is too strong so he must ascend, which sublimates the whole story. It also makes me look forward to whether Mo Xuan and Mo Li will grow as powerful as Zhaoxuan Tianzun in the end! The author said in his words that the novel was originally going to be finished when I wrote it here. I actually feel that it would be good to end it at this chapter, but I will be very curious about what the original main world is like, so keep up the good work! ! Looking forward to the new world you write!

Great writing, great work, come on [come on]

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