The martial world is full of storms, and flying knives are everywhere.
How could you turn down a job? If you do, you'll definitely get stabbed.
That was the sage advice my senior sister gave me when I joined the sect, and it became my first rule for surviving in the martial world.
Unfortunately, when it comes to me, this rule seems to have the opposite effect.
My ultimate goals in life:
1. Become the greatest thief alive and bring glory to my sect, even though there are only four of us.
2. Marry my dream lover, my senior brother, even though I've never met him.
I ran into a scheming man, and through a twist of fate we got engaged. You have your first love, and I have my dream lover. We can each pursue our own person, so why are you looking at me?
There are no coincidences in this world. Why is everyone around me such a conniving piece of work? I can't live like this anymore.
Theme:
Enmmmmm, I have a question. The author doesn't need to pay attention to me.
Because it is written in the first person, the heroine cannot see or know the master and senior sister, so she does not even know their dialogue. It would be very confusing to write it so directly, and it is easy to mislead the heroine into knowing the meaning of the master and senior sister.
It can be written from the side or by accident.
I only looked at my collection last year this year. .
I'm so sorry to the author. I regret it so much. It's so late to meet you.
Love it, love it, I'm a little curious about the male protagonist who is able to tease the curve of Bai Chi's hair.
You and I are not meant to be together, it's all because of the similarity in book titles, I'm just kidding, Sister Ha.
Planning to watch it again from the beginning
In fact, the author doesn't have to insist that every character get married one by one. It's almost enough to know who Li Yanzhi and the senior brother like. Basically, the hint is enough without having to forcefully write about marriage. There is no need to force the pairing of the master, senior sister, and senior brother Lin! This ending is probably an unprecedented HE, pulling an N man to match, pulling an N girl to match, and one person is sweating. How much do you want to get married? Are you crazy because your family is forcing you to get married? (Hey)
After reading the whole book, I would like to thank the author for giving me a pleasant evening. Keep up the hard work!
Brother Lu's setting is a bit abrupt. He only appears a few times and is unimpressed. It seems that this character was created just to use him as a human shield. For the sake of the plot, the setting and thinking of the characters have become unreasonable. This shortcoming must be corrected, dear.
Hmm, I don't understand when the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist. Maybe it's because the two of them didn't talk to each other often and normally, but they mostly just stared at each other and made trouble (wry smile)
Li Yushu shouldn't have so many thoughts. It's impossible to be sad because of Xiaobai. Xiaobai hasn't seen him many times. In his mind, he is at most an interesting passerby who calls him his senior brother. In addition, Li Yushu was too stupid. Seeing that the two senior masters were there, there was no reason for anyone to challenge him.
The story and character settings are actually very good, but the character descriptions are not in-depth enough, especially in terms of character interaction, which leads to the above impression. Many times it felt unnatural and I couldn't say anything. Now I finally understand what the problem is. The author thinks that a certain character will think this way, and the reader sees that it is impossible for the character to think this way. There is a gap.
So far, the best description is Brother Chu, it's so vivid.
The writing and story are both good, but the God's perspective is used incorrectly, and everything "I" don't know is written out one by one.
I want to see Shen Junlin's, and senior sister's, and preferably senior brother's...(*σ′∀`)σ
Enmmmmm, I have a question. The author doesn't need to pay attention to me. Because it is written in the first person, the heroine cannot see or know the master and senior sister, so she does not even know their dialogue. It would be very confusing to write it so directly, and it is easy to mislead the heroine into knowing the meaning of the master and senior sister. It can be written from the side or by accident. I only looked at my collection last year this year. . I'm so sorry to the author. I regret it so much. It's so late to meet you.
Love it, love it, I'm a little curious about the male protagonist who is able to tease the curve of Bai Chi's hair.
You and I are not meant to be together, it's all because of the similarity in book titles, I'm just kidding, Sister Ha.
Planning to watch it again from the beginning
In fact, the author doesn't have to insist that every character get married one by one. It's almost enough to know who Li Yanzhi and the senior brother like. Basically, the hint is enough without having to forcefully write about marriage. There is no need to force the pairing of the master, senior sister, and senior brother Lin! This ending is probably an unprecedented HE, pulling an N man to match, pulling an N girl to match, and one person is sweating. How much do you want to get married? Are you crazy because your family is forcing you to get married? (Hey)
After reading the whole book, I would like to thank the author for giving me a pleasant evening. Keep up the hard work!
Brother Lu's setting is a bit abrupt. He only appears a few times and is unimpressed. It seems that this character was created just to use him as a human shield. For the sake of the plot, the setting and thinking of the characters have become unreasonable. This shortcoming must be corrected, dear.
Hmm, I don't understand when the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist. Maybe it's because the two of them didn't talk to each other often and normally, but they mostly just stared at each other and made trouble (wry smile) Li Yushu shouldn't have so many thoughts. It's impossible to be sad because of Xiaobai. Xiaobai hasn't seen him many times. In his mind, he is at most an interesting passerby who calls him his senior brother. In addition, Li Yushu was too stupid. Seeing that the two senior masters were there, there was no reason for anyone to challenge him. The story and character settings are actually very good, but the character descriptions are not in-depth enough, especially in terms of character interaction, which leads to the above impression. Many times it felt unnatural and I couldn't say anything. Now I finally understand what the problem is. The author thinks that a certain character will think this way, and the reader sees that it is impossible for the character to think this way. There is a gap. So far, the best description is Brother Chu, it's so vivid.
The writing and story are both good, but the God's perspective is used incorrectly, and everything "I" don't know is written out one by one.
I want to see Shen Junlin's, and senior sister's, and preferably senior brother's...(*σ′∀`)σ