On the Downfall of a Transmigrator

After chasing it, talk about your thoughts. This is a typical atypical novel. If you tell it well, the story is novel, and if you tell it poorly, it means the writing is arbitrary. After Yunxiu was sent away, the first half of the novel was written smoothly and smoothly. Some of the plots and the author's writing were refreshing to me. I read the first half with great pleasure. However, starting from the second half, although I can't tell exactly where it started, I felt that the story moved too fast... Many things could be explained in more detail but were just passed over in one stroke. The disappearance of Shi Qi has no beginning or tail, King Jing's sudden change of character, Yun Xiu has no sense of existence, as if he has changed from the protagonist to the background of a master. Board, the novel seems to have turned into a lengthy confession of Fourteen, with a sloppy ending (although the unfinished ending seems very meaningful, but in my opinion, among the unfinished novels I have read, except for Gone with the Wind, the ending is just right, most authors have compromised the completion of the novel in pursuit of the so-called meaning). I think a reader's comment on the first chapter is quite right. People who like this novel like it very much, but people who don't like it can't stand it at all, because the shortcomings and advantages are very obvious. I prefer the side I like. No matter how many flaws it has, this story is quite unique and touches me more than the same story.

Sorry, I have to answer the question. King Xue said that Shi Shi's mother would give birth to an "unspeakable son", which meant that Shi Shi would become the emperor. He should marry Yun Lan twice. King Jing also said that if he married Yun Lan, he would not be able to marry again unless the person was the emperor again. Only by marrying Yun Lan could he find out who was going to be the emperor. The next emperor, so in the end 14 and Yun Lan were a couple; and when Yunxiu said when she would become an immortal in the hot spring, it was just a moment of false sleep for 17, which proved that her own thoughts were the same. 14'S life was just a period of time during her exam, not a life-or-death promise. 14 Was silent at that time, and he must have realized that he and Yun Xiu were different. Yun Xiu and 17 had endless years of companionship; Yun Xiu needed to experience the pain of love and separation to realize the truth. Finally, she said that she took a shortcut, which proved that the relationship between the two was already indifferent. The road to accompany 14 was coming to an end. 14 Would forget her and marry Yun Lan subconsciously. And if Yunxiu became an immortal in this way, she would probably go back to do other tasks after passing the exam. According to the agreement, 17, who also became an immortal, would have contact with her again. After Yunxiu loses his identity as a candidate, he and 17 are no longer cousins. They have no close relationship and can be together again... Well, the case has been solved. The male protagonist of this article is 17, and 14 is just Yunxiu's "person who should be robbed."

After reading it, I still have a very deep affection for this article. Even though the author has retreated for a long time, I couldn't control my emotions and babbled nonsense in the middle. Maybe I said something that would offend her, but I still kept a shy face. Comment again, I love this article! Just like the author said that after he finished writing the plot between A Qi and Feng An Guan and Yun Xiu's revenge and revealing his inner demons, he felt tired and didn't know how to deal with the rest of the plot. I was also a little uneasy after reading Feng An Guan, not as passionate as before. But on the contrary, I really like the author's handling and description of Taoist Chiying, the Feng'anguan incident, and Yunxiu's demons appearing and killing people in revenge. I stayed up all night to read this part... I have already written about it before, I was very moved and shocked. I think the author's mentality and emotions can very profoundly and truly guide the presentation and evaluation inside and outside the book. I feel that the author's affection for Qi can be seen in the words and phrases of the novel, which is why he is so vivid and vivid on the page, and the reader deeply misses him who barely appears in the second half. Almost half of the story is about him, not the heroine Yunxiu, which is also predictable. So even though I don't like men with this kind of personality, and almost every time he appears, I deepen my prejudice and dislike for him, but I also feel that he bears a lot of the author's love and readers' preference, and he is really lively and bright. I really like this open ending, it's almost one of the best ways to end a novel that I can accept. I am a person who is very easily influenced. Every time I read a touching novel, especially a slightly longer one, I am often attracted by the characters and plot. If the author plays with the story a little, I can be moved to tears, my heart is broken, and my emotions are overflowing... But this article The article, the author gently let me go... Thank you... For me, it is a perfect ending, containing infinite possibilities, sad but also free and easy. After a rugged and full journey, it ends under the swaying flower tree, either together or parting. Very nice. Because we had been so close to each other, warmed each other like two little birds soaked in the rain, and walked through many mountains, rivers, lakes and seas together, even if we were parting, I didn't even feel heartache.

No wonder after reading the second half, I just felt that it was tasteless and a pity to throw away. After reading the comments below, I realized that it was because the protagonist of the story gradually moved from Yunxiu to Shi Shi, and the female-oriented one became a male memoir...

I was really caught off guard. But it's quite reasonable. The prince died before he succeeded to the throne, and Yun Laner married Shi Shi and became the queen. It was in line with the prince's prediction. The Fourteenth always couldn't remember it after he became the emperor. What's wrong is that the Fourteenth took power before he became the emperor, so he started to forget Yunxiu. Woo hoo hoo, mom's stamina is coming up

There is no need to be too entangled with Linghu Shiqi, there is no breakup of friendship at all, the heroine and Shiqi have been separated from the world of mortals, and they have been with Shiqi all the time and occasionally visited, but how can I put it, it is a friendship, a brother-sister relationship. There is no love between a man and a woman that Shi Qi wants. Seventeen After Aqi's death and his father's death, he saw through the immortality. It wasn't that he didn't see it, but that there was no need to fight for this day and night.

I couldn't understand what the story was for a while.

The more involved with the world of mortals, the harder it was to remember Yunxiu, so Xiaosi kept forgetting things, so in the end he forgot about Yunxiu and married Yunlan

What is Xiaoyao Dao? Will Yunxiu be free in the end, or will she become a concubine and a fairy? Where did Linghu Shiqi go? Will Shiro Shiro marry Yun Lan again in the end? I think many readers and even the author himself feel that the book is "wrong", probably because of these unanswered questions. I started to get tired of all types of online novels two years ago, because no matter what the theme, no matter what the direction, the story must eventually have an ending, and most of them will be successful and everyone will be happy. This feeling of inescapable fate makes me feel exhausted. This time I have been on vacation for too long and was very bored. I thought about Ah Li and Xie Lian who were always stuck in my throat. When I came back and took a look, I found that there was another update that seemed to be from the same series... To be honest, although I also felt a little disappointed, I didn't feel that the writing was broken, and I even felt vaguely surprised to a certain extent - this is the kind of ending I have been waiting for. It is not an ending according to the traditional definition, because it does not seem to have any clues about the future of the protagonists. He did not make any explicit arrangements for his fate, and did not complete the task from beginning to end. He even missed a suspected male lead candidate... (I am a little bit resentful about this! This time I really like the cute and cute type of Linghu Shiqi! The result... Hum) There is no arrangement, no perfunctory, and there is no such explanation as "breaking up as we go". There seems to be too much blank space. For readers who are accustomed to the author explaining everything at the end, if it is not fully explained, he will write more extra chapters to explain it clearly. It is really not easy to accept. The two male lead candidates confirmed that they were attracted, but Yun Xiu didn't seem to be interested. She seemed to be just dropping in with someone and accompanying him for a journey. She didn't care how long the journey would take. It might only be determined by the distance of the journey. She deviated from the exam syllabus of the Zhai Dou Division from the very beginning, but the unfettered Taoist heart she cultivated may make her an outstanding graduate of the Fantasy Division. (Besides, it's a bit far away. For example, if Yunxiu becomes an immortal, will there be a chance to become an immortal after leaving the examination room... But this is just my own random imagination) Life moves forward smoothly, and the story does not have to have an ending. It is not a bad thing to leave some blank space and let Yunxiu write it by herself. It is also a kind of faint relief for me who is trapped in a small space outside the book, unable to escape from the mortal world, and unable to glimpse the future. Also, although I know that he is wandering around to cultivate immortality, I really want to know the whereabouts of Linghu Shiqi! It's not impossible to have a side story to talk about it a little bit : D

Suddenly I thought of Yunxiu saying to Li Yuan, I can teach you these things, and you can learn them, but you will forget them all after you become the prince and emperor. So, this is why Fourteen gradually forgets?