The greatest pain in life lies in clinging to what we stand to gain or lose.
An ordinary man blessed with talent that makes the heavens jealous, yet ignorant of the Dao;
A celestial immortal who has already survived the tribulation and ascended, yet insists on remaining in the mortal world;
A monster who has cultivated for a thousand years, yet falls into a tribulation of love;
A lonely ghost who can always predict everything, yet spends a lifetime seeking revenge.
He, she, it, and they together lift the curtain on the modern cultivation world...
Theme:
Modern cultivation is interesting, fattening up
The article is very novel and the story is very interesting.
I thought I would survive the tribulation, fail, and be wiped out.
I feel like if you don't read the author's previous articles, you won't be able to understand some of them.
What I thought was a rebellious girl suddenly turned into a law enforcement girl in the world of cultivation.
When I was reviewing the article, I was attracted by the author's writing style and came here specifically. The writing style is really great. If it can rely on the current red stalks, red elements, red themes, etc., It will definitely become popular! Come on ↖(^ω^)↗
The large copywriting and content summary are very literary and rhyme, and the writing skills and writing attitude are commendable. The beginning is very distinctive. Nowadays, there are many articles that like to start with an OOXX to attract readers' interest. At first glance At first, I thought they were also using this technique to gain attention, but after looking at the writing style, it didn't look like vulgarity. Pen. Sure enough, it was actually just a small kiss, so I was relieved. In addition to the plot, it also gave me another suspense, which was about the naming. When I heard the name Jinzhong, I started to I thought it was a boy, but found out it was a girl. The name Feng Quan is also very powerful, and apart from the plot, I can't help but wonder, who is the female pig? The sentence "big shot" will make readers guess that Feng Quan should It's a female pig. At the same time, it also reminds me of Zhao Mosheng. However, the great article is presented from the perspective of teacher Jin Zhong. Yes, then, could Jin Zhong be a real female pig? Teacher-student love? Sibling love? Ok please forgive me YY. Okay, YY went too far and followed the general novel pattern. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be a cultivation article. It's so powerful. It is rare to start with such an opening. The style of writing changed, and it had the charm of ancient prose, mixed with The joyful words in modern literature are quite innovative. The heroine is indeed quite naughty, showing weakness but fearlessness in the face of the threat from the Golden Bell, but she doesn't feel sorry for her when she looks at her. She was worried, she should have been prepared, right? Most of the names are also subversive. Some names are very down-to-earth, and they immediately bring the novel and life closer. Distance. I took it out to read this article at night when I was about to go to bed. After reading a little bit, I felt that the text was fresh and very readable. Especially in the current era where online articles have become fast-moving consumer goods. But when Xiaoquan took away the golden bell, he opened the next chapter , the whole person was confused. The long description only made me want to jump over and scan it quickly. So I read a few chapters at once, and suddenly realized that I didn't understand anything. Helpless, sleepy, sleeping, midnight I woke up and continued reading, forcing myself to start reading from the second chapter. Then, slowly taste each word in me Under the premise, I finally understood it, and I also praised the writing style of Dada. It is really good. Not only the writing style, but also the ancient style in the writing. The funny and interesting words hidden in modern literature and some hidden lines are highlights. The novel is used in ancient cultivation The words are appropriate, and there is also humor in modern literature. It can be seen that Da Da has worked hard in these two aspects, and the literature Good handwriting skills. But it is also a fatal flaw. Many readers just like one style, and some like modern literature. , Just focus on fresh and easy-to-read writing. Some people like ancient styles and will choose more elegant writing. Your two writing styles are the same. It often appears in an article. If it is handled well, it will be original. If it is not handled properly, it will make readers I'm losing my patience and can't stand it anymore. Moreover, wherever cultivation is involved in the article, there will be lengthy descriptions. These are not only It's a description of scenery. If you skip past it, you won't understand the plot. I tried to skip these descriptions the first time I read it. Later I found that I couldn't understand the text, so I read it again from the beginning. There are also some interspersed in between Clues and modern funny clips, they are the highlights of the article, but they are hidden in the long cultivation narrative. , Easily missed by readers. It was only after I read it carefully the second time that I saw the beauty of the article, but I guess there may not be many readers as dedicated as me. . . I'm narcissistic, sorry. Maybe I can carry that big piece on my back The scene narration is presented in a humorous and ridiculing way, making it more readable for readers. I remember the time before Sansheng III This seems to be the method used. After reading Dada's words, I know that Dada has good writing skills and I believe he has the ability to drive Control your words well to create that kind of effect. As I write this, I have to defend my rich YY abilities. Why did the beginning of the chapter give me those and the sequel to the novel? The development of the plot is extremely biased? I feel that Da Da's idea is very strange. If I simply start with this, it would be really weird. It felt like making a fuss out of a molehill, so why did you make a joke about kissing in class? Is it necessary? Of course, If this is a matter of thousands of miles, it is a different matter. However, generally speaking, "Weiyangzhi" is a rare article that excels in both writing style and plot.
To be honest, this is the first time I read a Cultivation article, and I don't know what the routine of Cultivation is, but after reading the author's article, I have a general understanding of Cultivation. The copywriting is very simple and clear, and it also let me know who the main characters are. Luo Fan is so jealous that it is Gong Shuping who is forced to stay in the world. And it can be seen from the beginning that the author's writing style is excellent, very good, and the words are very grand. In my heart, people who can write cultivation texts, ancient vocabulary, dialogue descriptions, etc. Have profound skills. Including a summary of the subtitles is like watching the Romance of the Three Kingdoms when I was a child. When I opened the table of contents, the chapters were followed by subtitles that contrasted with each other and were very ups and downs. It turns out that my favorite character is Mo Xichi. Maybe it's because the name is really nice. Throughout the whole story, there was suspense everywhere. At first I thought Xia Yuanyuan and Shuping were the protagonists, but later I realized that I had made a complete mistake, and then I had to accept the new protagonist with a new name. This feeling was a bit disappointing, because I quite like Xia Yuan. Yuan's, although she has only a few words, I think she is cute and wise. For example, the description of Xia Yuanyuan starts with her doing so-and-so with her man, and then her mind goes on doing so-and-so. I feel that this episode gives Xia Yuanyuan extra points! As for the beautiful Gong Shuping, from the moment she appeared with the young master, I felt that she was also a scheming bitch (I don't know if she is a good guy or a bad guy...), But later I felt that she was a good person. However, her following the young master who had everything planned was particularly puzzling and made people want to read on. And my favorite paragraph is not a description of characters or scenes, but an explanation of Tongyou: What is Tongyou? The ancients said that winding paths lead to secluded areas, and only those with paths can lead to secluded areas. All members of our sect must first learn to find paths, and then learn to navigate secluded areas. Holding the tube that leads to the secluded world, using the art of secluded secluded areas, one can turn rugged areas into flat areas and turn flat areas back into rugged areas. If you are proficient in this method, you can travel through the reincarnations of thousands of worlds. Luo Fan quickly understood this section. The pyretic tube is just a medium, which is the force that folds the "paper". The paper here can be understood as the reincarnation of thousands of worlds in the book, or the parallel universe in physics. So what is folded at this time is not paper, but space. Because it reminds me of that sentence, the mysteries are mystical, the door to all mysteries, this is the door to the world. There is also Mo Mo, who has the aura of a protagonist. Although I know that he is probably not the protagonist, but he is born with the blessing of God, and he has the abilities that I usually daydream about! This kind of person is so lovable! But I wonder if he is also related to Mr. Mo and those named Mo! And whether Ning Tian and Ning Yu are related in any way, the main reason is that I felt that Ning Yu was extraordinary from the beginning. He may not be good at cultivation, but I guess he can be regarded as Zhuge Liang. In Chapter 18, I completely changed my view on Ning Tian, but it was too sudden. But it's already Chapter 18, so it's not too sudden~ but I think it's better to have some foreshadowing. I don't know what the difference is between cultivators and those Taoist priests in Taoist temples who wear Taoist robes, haha. But for Feng Quan, I think this girl is like a cheater. She looked like a cheater when she first appeared, which is a bit weird, so I still side with Luo Fan, no, no, no, no, I'll take Mo Mo. All in all, I have to give the author a big thumbs up. There is writing style and suspense. Constructing a grand world of cultivation really requires brain cells and skill, so my admiration is like the Yellow River and the sea. It is hard to express in words! Come on!!!! Bihart (
The copywriting is good, and the beautiful font makes people feel very literary, and it also has the beauty of Tang poetry and Song lyrics.
It's not easy to write words, scatter flowers to refresh your mind ~ la la la la la ~ (jumping around)