Mo Ran's Smile

Mo Mo here is so mature! Having just graduated from the senior year of high school, I suddenly felt that Xiao Mozi had grown up, which was a bit of a shock.

It's a bit complicated…but it's really annoying to see the "third party"!!!

But this is actually a 12-year-old article. It's hard to imagine that the author has been writing for such a long time. It's amazing! Admire! But the author must have been very young when he wrote this article, right? (Nothing else, I'm just surprised that young boys can write romance novels!) Stop it first!

Wow, first person Xiao Mozi, it turns out that Mo Mo is the protagonist of the author's first article. Collect Collection!

I saw that Xiaoxiao and Ruoyan have achieved positive results. Let me spread some flowers.

When I was reading the author's article, I happened to be watching a TV series starring Song Jia, titled "Such Fragrance". There was also a man named Lin Yue inside, but he was a man. Haha, two people always get confused accidentally. Copywriting It would be better if the author could place the cover of Zhang's representative article. In Jinjiang, it seems that there are very few books without covers. There will be a large or small cover image in the copywriting area of ​​each article. Will it be more artistic if it is paired with text? Text introduction, concise and clear. Word count Regarding the narration and development of the plot in each chapter, if the number of words is too small, it will not be spread out, and the description will not be natural and appropriate; if the number of words is too many, if the arrangement is not good, it will become too procrastinating and cumbersome, which is quite boring to put it bluntly. The optimal word count is over 3,000, which is just right for the plot, character description, story development and twists, and it will also help with the click-through rate. Plot The background of the male protagonist's love-break is in the New Year, which is a very touching background. New Year, as the name suggests, not only does each unit give a few days off, but it is also an opportunity for family reunions. Even if an organization does not give employees holidays, people who work overtime will still have unstable feelings in their hearts. The male protagonist's lovelorn happened in this context, and it had an indescribable atmosphere rendering effect. The parents were afraid that their son would have random thoughts because of a broken relationship, and they were worried that the son would not be able to think straight. Therefore, the old couple probably discussed it and decided to send their son back to the work unit in the middle of the year. They also hoped that the son could forget everything in the busy work and start over. It was at this moment that Wen began the ascetic life of the male protagonist. After returning to work, I found that everyone in the same department as me had their significant other. This clue is undoubtedly too exciting and torturous for the male protagonist who has just lost his love. The male protagonist had just broken up in love and was ruthlessly kicked out of the house by his parents. He thought that he could fill his lovelorn state through work when he returned to the workplace, but he didn't want to, which only made matters worse and added fuel to the fire. That feeling was undoubtedly as uncomfortable as being stripped naked and thrown into the ice and snow. These should all be the penance of the male protagonist after falling out of love, right? Especially at the end of the article, I watched others enter the palace of love-wedding. Lost, confused, feeling like an abandoned child. The description is delicate and beautiful. It is worth recalling and tasting. Moreover, after something happens, the male protagonist will realize some truth from it, or the philosophy of life. I can't do this. In the article, the gift that Brother Liang gave to his girlfriend Dong Xue is quite unique, very thoughtful and bold. Rushing to the text After reading the whole story, I thought that the male protagonist would accidentally fall in love again at the end, but he didn't. This is a bit disappointing. It would be better if a good ending can be arranged for the male protagonist! After all, it is the male protagonist who is suffering throughout the whole story. He watches what happens to the people around him and it has nothing to do with him. Is this a too big a blow? Another point is, is the development of the story too short? The plot did not fully express the emptiness of the male protagonist after falling out of love. I hope the author can revise the article a bit, add some plot, and improve the readability of the article. Haha, the article is really too short.

I am an editor and want to contact you, but QQ is easily blocked.

Judging from the setting of the protagonist, the psychological description, and the delicacy of the writing, the author should be a man. This is a disadvantage among similar novels, very disadvantageous, quite disadvantageous. Because most of the readers of this website are women, it is difficult for men to write works that resonate with female readers. I read a few chapters and it's true! But this novel seems to be pretty good. The author is even better at grasping the plot and being realistic. It's not YY, ridiculous, or bloody. It's very unlike something written by a new author. But this sentence is definitely not a compliment to you, because as a newcomer, it is definitely not a good thing to write something that does not look like a newcomer. Without further ado, I wish you a bright future and that this novel will be as successful as a newcomer.

I just forgot to rate...

Well written, keep up the good work