Harry Potter: Alchemy and Love

The heroine's career line is very good, and she also confiscated a lot of lunch boxes. The only flaw is that her emotional line is more similar to that of the original work. Lupine always refuses to dodge and passively accepts it. It would be better if the female votes were bolder.

It's so touching to see both Harry's parents grow into a brave little naughty bag.

The emotional line is too peaceful. Remus's character should be tortured hard. I'm good or bad hahahahaha, but this is a very exciting story!

It's quite good, the writing is smooth and not dramatic, and the heroine comes together with Lupine peacefully and naturally. If I have to find fault, the only flaw might be that it's too peaceful and not exciting enough hahahaha

This is the most fluent book I have read recently, and the reading experience is great! Because the heroine has a few tricks up her sleeve in alchemy, but in order to avoid being too abrupt, the author's wife's foreshadowing and description of the actual use of alchemy are very reasonable and won't make you feel OOC, and the character's personality is also very consistent with the original work! The only shortcoming is that it is not too long (less than 200,000 words). It would be better to expand on the emotional pull between the male and female protagonists ~

I didn't watch enough sweet love. I cried all the way through it. I didn't understand why the barrier between them disappeared. Remus was always worried about future generations and werewolf identity. I think it will take a lot of time to get rid of this thorn after the war, but there is no more description. This is my question about the relationship between the two. I think the highlight of this book is the author's detailed description of alchemy. It can be seen from between the lines that the author has seriously conducted a very systematic investigation of alchemy and modern technology in the wizarding and Muggle worlds, and has really thought a lot about Horcruxes and life-saving tools. It is worth mentioning the acceleration of gravity. This was really a shortcoming of my high school. It is really cute that the author incorporated this into it. All in all, this is an article worth reading

When reading Rowling's Harry Potter, it was really sad to see everyone sacrifice one by one, but seeing this perfect ending, I saw a completely new Harry. All the plots have been rewritten. It feels inexplicably boring or a little regretful. It's entirely my fault, but it is a dream come true. The author has done a good job in shaping the article. I really like it! This is a relatively high-quality HP article that I have read recently. Some of the descriptions of alchemy really amazed me.

Has it been this long since the book was written? I feel that time flies by so fast, and it is a pity that I came across this book so late. My favorite person in HP besides Snape is Lupine. How can I put it, both of them are very unfortunate in my opinion. But in misfortune, there was a light that redeemed himself. Lupine met James, Sirius, and Peter. They were not afraid of him because of his werewolf identity. He studied for Animagus who was not so studious. But in the end, those who gave him happiness when he was a student left him one by one. He also lost his friends because of graduation and lived a life of exile. We have no way of knowing those. How he lived his life during the 1990s, but we know that he is still gentle and kind with some harmless humor, as if the unsatisfactory life has not made him so unrecognizable. Dumbledore tells us that it is not ability that determines what kind of person we become, but our own choice. Lupine chose to reconcile with life, and although life was unfair to him, he was still tenacious and kind to the world. The final sacrifice and the sacrifice of Severus are the ones I find most difficult to accept. A potions professor who I thought had never lived for myself, and a Remus Lupine who was about to have a good life but was short of victory in the final battle, but both he and his wife passed away. Their son was just one month old. Big This article makes me feel that Lupine is reborn again. I like fan fiction very much. Although I know it is impossible, the world of fan fiction makes me feel that the people I like are alive again and have not left. Not many people write about Remus, thank you so much

Overall, the plot is engaging and smooth. However, it focuses too much on the struggle against Voldemort and does not mention much about Lupine's love life. Moreover, the relationship between the heroine and Lupine did not come at a time that I clearly understood. There were several reconciliations between the heroine and Lupine that were not clearly written.

It feels so fast. It's over now, but it's indeed a short story. It's the first time I've read Remus's novel, hahaha. But it would be great if Harry's parents really weren't dead. Wow, it makes me sad just thinking about it.