The Empire's Male God Gets Remarried

Do you want to make a CP extra for Zuo Qi? The child is so miserable

After reading the entire article, my thoughts are as follows: First of all, the initial settings are great. Time travel, male gods, dissolution of engagement, cat transformation... Chu Nan started from food videos, and gradually embarked on the road of making money. After a certain economic foundation is established, the mecha plot is also interspersed in time. I personally think that the plot of the spicy chicken shredded battle is the most exciting in the entire novel! Secondly, the entire plot arrangement is reasonable and there are no major logical problems. However, throughout the entire article, Gongjun Ye Chen's presence is too low. Whether it's the ragdoll cat period or the human period. Personally, I think that since it is a beautiful novel, the attack and the end should go hand in hand, so that the development can be balanced. However, Ye Chen not only played less, but also performed poorly (even more bleak in comparison with Chu Nan). In this way, I feel that the article is lame. Also, the system sent by the Lord God is useless, and its presence or absence does not affect the development of the plot at all... Finally, the writing style needs to be honed (remember to catch bugs if you make typos), the rhythm in some places (especially the parts that promote the development of the plot in the second half) is too tight, and the description of some plots (such as some of Chu Nan's personal plots) is too detailed, so the writing feels not refined enough. Finally, I hope you will work hard! Future articles will definitely be more exciting!

Emmmm, did I miss something in the last paragraph? Feel like it's over all at once? Although it is not a bad ending, the ending still feels a bit rushed, especially the extra part. It can be said that the extra parts are all based on chapter outlines 2333 But I still have to finish and spread the flowers. How hard is it for your wife to produce food?

Um? Looks good, come on, do you have any more?

The flowers are sprinkled at the end, although the middle is a bit baffling, but it's sweet enough

I thought it was a mecha article, and then the first half was full of food anchors. I thought it was a food article, and then it was a game competition. His sense of presence is relatively weak, he didn't make good use of his pet period, and his performance after recovering from his injury was mediocre. Then he became a campus youth novel by studying together? The character settings in the early stages are pretty good, but I get a little tired later on. Keep up the good work, big time.

It's really sweet. Call my wife!

So beautiful and so sweet!

Finished with flowers? Super awesome!

Celebrate with flowers after finishing! !