I Have a Zombie Little Brother
我有个丧尸弟弟
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Emmm, let me just say this objectively. There are many plots in it that are useless or even counterproductive. For example, when you first wrote about the heroine's parents, you wrote that they beat the heroine for her brother. This will only make the readers hate the brother before they understand the story. And the heroine still does nothing when she encounters this kind of treatment, which makes the heroine's character appear indecisive. And there are a lot of plots in the back where the heroine is helpless when encountering things. If you are not writing a story about abuse of the heroine [simply torturing the heroine and making her super miserable before bursting into seed], you should try to write as few of these plots as possible. Or if you just want to write about the heroine changing after going through hardships, try to describe the things around her. People who are related to the heroine should not die. Even if they are saved by the heroine before they die, it will be no problem. This is the correct way to open the drama. Just like that little girl, you wrote that her mother entrusted her to the heroine, but then she died??? Does it make any sense? And to say the least, this kind of plot with a dead person can really bring about great changes to the heroine, but the reaction of the heroine you described is really not big and too bland. [Also, these are just suggestions. If your wife feels uncomfortable seeing what I wrote, you can ask me to delete the comment anytime, anywhere.
I should probably take him for experiments...
Dad did a good job. I think the heroine is too sane and cold-blooded.
The turtle is slow and has no younger brother yet
Wow... I really like this article
Wow wow wow, big update~
I want to know who the male protagonist is... I hope the female protagonist can get rid of her inferiority complex and grow up quickly.
Urgent update!!!!!
Her brother needs to eat, how can he eat if he doesn't let him out?