Shushan University Report on Immortal Cultivation Practice

You are so diligent, and your writing has improved (but it is still a bit student-like, I don't know if the adjectives are used correctly), come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Although the subject matter, setting, writing style and description are a bit cliché, it is unexpectedly very good. Kudos to the author.

(๑°3°๑) Oh my god, are you mainly attacking?