He Is a Feast for the Eyes

I didn't expect it was a few years ago.

I bought the physical book and read it. It's really great. I didn't expect to find it in Jinjiang. It's written in big letters. Why isn't it popular?

You must learn how to love yourself and how to love others. It's really warm

I came across this article by chance today. Although it was written three years ago, some of the details may not be very good, but I was really healed!

The article was finished a bit too hastily. The first one is that Shi Wei's family situation was not explained clearly, such as what happened to her uncle, aunt and family in the end; Second, regarding Si Qiong, his ex-girlfriend can actually be expanded and written. Except for one chapter that introduces Si Qiong's past ten years, the lack of other descriptions cannot make Si Qiong's character more brilliant, and the story of Si Qiong and his ex-girlfriend is not written. In fact, a jealous plot can be set up here to deepen Si Qiong's character. Just passing it through like this will actually make people feel like they are not connected; Third, and most importantly, there are some problems with the connection between each chapter of the entire article. This gave me a feeling that the article was intermittent and the chapters were not connected. I just finished reading the previous chapter and suddenly turned to the next chapter. There was an inexplicable turn that made people a little confused. The above are some of my personal opinions. Next, I will talk about the outstanding aspects of this article. First, the beginning is well written. Once you read it, you will find it interesting and want to continue reading; Second, the details are handled well, although the emotional description is not deep enough. For example, why the heroine suddenly confessed her love, and the place where the feelings occurred was not well prepared, so that it made me feel that the heroine suddenly fell in love with the hero for no reason, which made me feel a little strange; Third, every small interaction between the male and female protagonists at the beginning was well written. Every small collision between them could see traces of love, which attracted me to continue watching. This is my personal opinion on this article. I apologize for any offence. Finally, I wish you to write better and better as your writing continues to flourish.

The title of the novel is very good and the content is very heart-warming. Although the length is very short, the plot of the story is quite smooth. Thank you so much, author.

The author has indeed neglected the family aspect of the heroine, but the story of Chen Deng and Director Jiang can be written in a separate article. The two have been in love for a long time, how did Director Jiang break up with his girlfriend, and why did Chen Deng almost miss Pipa? Don't hug her. Ah, it feels very interesting. Also, I really like the author's naming of the characters. It's not pretentious, come on!

In fact, it felt a bit contradictory in the end. Didn't Jiang Heyuan have a girlfriend at the beginning? Why did he get involved with Chen Deng in the end? It seems that some things about Shi Wei were not explained clearly, such as the aunt's family, and some changes in ideas (for example, at first she said Si Qiong was an elder, but later said that the change of liking was a bit inexplicable), the same goes for Chen Deng. When he first participated in the finals, the image he created was a bit bad, but later he met a trafficked woman and was very kind and had a sense of justice. Of course, these may also be because I didn't read the article carefully. The story is very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard. Writing these is just my personal doubts. It is wrong. I hope the author will not take it to heart and just keep working hard. Sorry to bother you

Well, we have to work hard to make life what we want it to be! They are all fulfilled! Very nice! Every ending is a beginning.

Yes, spring is here and everything is slowly getting better. Let's work hard together!