Eyes

What a sad story ≥≤

The writing style is great, but to be honest, this article is quite average. Maybe it's because I've been reading science fiction for a long time and I'm a bit picky, haha. The subject matter is very good, but as a short story, using so many words to explain the background at the beginning is a bit more than worth the gain. In fact, it can be infiltrated bit by bit into the narrative of the story, and readers will not feel bored by the strong metallic taste when reading. Furthermore, the ending of the story is already obvious in the middle, and apart from Jimmy seeing his mother's eyes, there is nothing more exciting later on, which is a pity. These are all personal opinions. If there is anything I said that is wrong, I hope you will forgive me~

So sad... I feel so sad.

A very good science fiction article, so touching

Mom can do anything for her kids

… It's so sad to see it

A loving mother is a great mother at any time!

I pity the hearts of parents in the world.

Mother, child, feel sad, but can't shed tears

Oh my gosh, it's so touching. How can Jimmy's mother live without eyes?