
The Vampire Knight's First Love: A Millennium-Old Familiar
吸血鬼骑士之千年使魔的初恋
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 60k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
25Chapters
106Favorites
2.3kClicks per chapter
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Come on! Rush, rush, rush
I hope you can add symbols when speaking to make it easier to read (?`????)
Very well written, Big cheers for the author
Pay attention to the use of punctuation marks, and add "" to the dialogue. Is it a supplement? "I can't help but feel a little bored when I hear it." To make a long story short, "The punctuation mark after the word "ben" should not be better. "[Every vampire knows that angel vampires and demon vampires are old enemies, and the struggle between the two has never stopped.]" Would it be better to change this sentence to "[Every vampire knows that angel vampires and demon vampires are old enemies, and the struggle between the two has never stopped.]". "Even Tianshi sometimes rescues the devil." Did "Tianshi" fight too much? I'm just an ordinary reader. My opinions may not be correct, so come on.