A Hundred Paths to a Comeback

Happy New Year, Big. The writing style is good, and the plot is quite interesting. From the writing, you can see that the writing skills have grown a little, and the sweet Mimosa protagonist is also very likable. I don't know Da Da Da's age and experience, but Da Da Da Da still has some training in controlling the plot. Some characters are not controlled enough, and avoiding the important and trivializing is too clever, which makes the whole book slightly lacking in the subsequent plot. I think this is probably related to the fact that the protagonist's golden finger is too wide open, and it is too easy to achieve things, which makes some plots seem a bit monotonous and weak. In addition, the foreshadowing in the book has not yet been revealed, such as why the Northern Dragon King went back in time for Han Xiu, the relationship between Tongtian and the system, and looking back on previous grievances, etc. These are all what I am curious about. The portrayal of Han Xiu is much more realistic than that of the Dragon King. I also like Han Xiu very much. I am secretly glad that someone is accompanying Han Xiu. I also feel that the image of the North Dragon King is too thin and not worthy of the little Han Xiu that I miss so much. Han Xiu's vividness makes the other characters in the article inadequate. Because of the existence of the Dragon King, the system and tasks became more and more insignificant later on. In the end, I even suspected that I had forgotten about the system and points if I let myself go. However, I still really like the frank, cute and intelligent little Han Xiu. I just love the North Dragon King who has given me a lot of cabbage, and I welcome little Han Xiu to fall into my arms at any time! ! ! Finally, congratulations on the completion and looking forward to the new quick release.

Shi Ning reincarnated? ? What do you mean, this is Shi'er reincarnating tens of millions of years after he transformed into a dragon?

Ah, this series is interesting.

It's the end, do you still abuse a scumbag or a dog?

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Brush it all at once! Happy!

Still want to eat sweets?(●??`●)??(●??`●)?

This outfit was all swept away... I finally regained my memory...

It's the end, hahahahahahahahaha

Finished spreading flowers! Great new article