I'm no good at writing summaries, so here's the opening instead. This is a Shikamaru/Ino romance, and it's a short story.
“Shikamaru and Ino were childhood friends. They knew each other when they were both still babies, and when they were little, they even slept in the same cradle.”
“Oh, right, they even took a bath together once!”
Her words caused quite a stir. Sakura's mouth fell open, while Naruto simply spat out his tea.
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I suddenly realized that this article was written in 2008 OTZ
Six years ago, Sakura had not married Sasuke, Naruto had not married Hinata, Ino had not married Sai, Shikamaru had not married Temari...
Nima suddenly felt so sad! ! ! ! ! !
Marrying the daughter of a ramen restaurant owner...23333333333
Hahahahahaha XDDDDD
It feels a lot like what Shikamaru would do (laughs)
A very warm, cute and funny article XD
This is the blue ocean of honey, the mint candy lawn covered with frosting and white snow, and the big marshmallow clouds... This is the happy ending in the fairy tale world, so sweet and bright that it makes people heartache.
Long blond hair and long brown-black hair, short blond hair and short pink hair, short black hair and... The nameless girl wrapped in a white scarf, a carrot and a pit, this world is too beautiful to be true.
There are some people with whom we want to seize every second. Because the air begins to be rich and fragrant, the sun shines brightly, the birds sing softly, and it is like a love poem filled with a suspicious crimson aura, although the protagonist is not aware of it yet.
He was about to turn around and leave, leaving behind a silhouette. Before the long blue shadow disappeared, we began to regret not holding on to him and catching the trembling aftertaste of happiness. Happiness, can you stay a little longer for me?
Perhaps since the beginning of that ominous shogi game, we have understood that the fate revealed by the awe-inspiring God of Fate will approach mercilessly step by step, becoming the guardian of the Sixth Generation, the cornerstone of a powerful country, and a cold tombstone that must not be violated and cannot be reversed.
Look, who is the protagonist of this story? The God of Creation who looks down on all living beings from above, the annoying AB loser, he designated the person destined for this world. He is the universe, Naruto is the sun, and we are all planets surrounding him. The light is strong or weak, and some people become meteors. The light lasts for a while, and then returns to silence.
Flash after flash, dragging out a long beautiful tail, one by one, they disappeared.
This time it was Asuma, and I knew that moment was not far away. Mr. Iruka's class can't wait for the next group photo.
So thank you for being so sweet at this moment. This is the sweet love poem you sang for him, unreal, but beautiful.
PS: A few comments:
Of course, a masterpiece may be written overnight without modification, but I still discussed it in a very serious tone:
It can also be written more concisely and delicately. The choice of words and sentences and the structure of the writing are all worthy of discussion.
Speaking of Japanese literary styles, there are youth diaries like Lily Zhou's, ukiyo-e depicting scenes like Izu, and mood sketches like Kafka's On the Shore, each of which is very unique. I don't know why, but I feel that it's a pity that such a loving story should be told in a straightforward style. Maybe it would be better if it had a little sweetness? It doesn't matter whether it is thick ink or light color.
In any case, short stories test the author's talent more than his skill. If there is no shortage of people, it depends on how good he is.
Life is short, and every time I brew it, I hope it will be a good cup of tea.
Sakura has given up on marrying Naruto and becoming the sixth wife, so don't be stubborn.
I think some modifications can be considered here to make it easier for ambiguity to arise.
Sakura gave up marrying Naruto blabla...
Standing on the roof of the Uchiha family's ancestral home, watching the twenty-four virtuous husband supporting his wife - please forgive me for not imagining... Who is this guy matched with? Don't understand...
It's actually a very interesting article...
But I still have to sigh... Poor Shikamaru...
I suddenly realized that this article was written in 2008 OTZ Six years ago, Sakura had not married Sasuke, Naruto had not married Hinata, Ino had not married Sai, Shikamaru had not married Temari... Nima suddenly felt so sad! ! ! ! ! !
Marrying the daughter of a ramen restaurant owner...23333333333
Hahahahahaha XDDDDD It feels a lot like what Shikamaru would do (laughs) A very warm, cute and funny article XD
This is the blue ocean of honey, the mint candy lawn covered with frosting and white snow, and the big marshmallow clouds... This is the happy ending in the fairy tale world, so sweet and bright that it makes people heartache. Long blond hair and long brown-black hair, short blond hair and short pink hair, short black hair and... The nameless girl wrapped in a white scarf, a carrot and a pit, this world is too beautiful to be true. There are some people with whom we want to seize every second. Because the air begins to be rich and fragrant, the sun shines brightly, the birds sing softly, and it is like a love poem filled with a suspicious crimson aura, although the protagonist is not aware of it yet. He was about to turn around and leave, leaving behind a silhouette. Before the long blue shadow disappeared, we began to regret not holding on to him and catching the trembling aftertaste of happiness. Happiness, can you stay a little longer for me? Perhaps since the beginning of that ominous shogi game, we have understood that the fate revealed by the awe-inspiring God of Fate will approach mercilessly step by step, becoming the guardian of the Sixth Generation, the cornerstone of a powerful country, and a cold tombstone that must not be violated and cannot be reversed. Look, who is the protagonist of this story? The God of Creation who looks down on all living beings from above, the annoying AB loser, he designated the person destined for this world. He is the universe, Naruto is the sun, and we are all planets surrounding him. The light is strong or weak, and some people become meteors. The light lasts for a while, and then returns to silence. Flash after flash, dragging out a long beautiful tail, one by one, they disappeared. This time it was Asuma, and I knew that moment was not far away. Mr. Iruka's class can't wait for the next group photo. So thank you for being so sweet at this moment. This is the sweet love poem you sang for him, unreal, but beautiful. PS: A few comments: Of course, a masterpiece may be written overnight without modification, but I still discussed it in a very serious tone: It can also be written more concisely and delicately. The choice of words and sentences and the structure of the writing are all worthy of discussion. Speaking of Japanese literary styles, there are youth diaries like Lily Zhou's, ukiyo-e depicting scenes like Izu, and mood sketches like Kafka's On the Shore, each of which is very unique. I don't know why, but I feel that it's a pity that such a loving story should be told in a straightforward style. Maybe it would be better if it had a little sweetness? It doesn't matter whether it is thick ink or light color. In any case, short stories test the author's talent more than his skill. If there is no shortage of people, it depends on how good he is. Life is short, and every time I brew it, I hope it will be a good cup of tea.
Sakura has given up on marrying Naruto and becoming the sixth wife, so don't be stubborn. I think some modifications can be considered here to make it easier for ambiguity to arise. Sakura gave up marrying Naruto blabla...
Standing on the roof of the Uchiha family's ancestral home, watching the twenty-four virtuous husband supporting his wife - please forgive me for not imagining... Who is this guy matched with? Don't understand... It's actually a very interesting article... But I still have to sigh... Poor Shikamaru...