The Swan Kingdom

Sigh, two people are supposed to support each other, but He Xu always wants her to give up. He says "I'll accommodate you," but in reality, he's not necessarily willing to accommodate you; his first thought is always himself.

He Xu is suffocating me. Why should Chu give up her career? Why doesn't he give it up himself? He just wants Chu to "serve" him one last time, in the name of love. And that talk about "leftover women" is so annoying, as if men are all eligible bachelors. It's like they can't live without marriage, and that marriage means giving up their careers.

I haven't read *La Bayadère*, but I was deeply moved by Xia Tong's unwavering dedication to dance, burning the candle at both ends. Everyone is the protagonist of their own life. Although Chu Qiao isn't as skilled as Xia Tong in dance, she feels more relatable, like you, like me, like him. Thank you to the author for creating such well-rounded characters, giving me a small understanding of ballet, and I look forward to the future chapters.

Although the locked chapters slightly affected the reading experience, I was deeply moved. Dancers have it so tough. Thank you, author!

The writing is so vivid and evocative, it really brings to mind the scene.

It would be great if you could remove the "" (yes).

Beautiful, so beautiful! Looking forward to your new work!

Dress rehearsal - semantic redundancy

I don't think Chu Qiao will be happy as a retired housewife. In the daily toil and housework, she will constantly think about her dance career and be unwilling to accept that she gave it up.

Thank you so much, author. I'm incredibly touched.