I Became an Immortal in Place of the Villain

It's okay. It's obvious that the author has an outline. The main storyline talks about the secret layout of the Gods. However, the branch dungeons are not very attractive. I didn't read all the way to the middle and went straight to the ending, because I felt that the middle part and some branch lines were full of nonsense. The plot of the dungeon was not very attractive. I skipped a lot. The author's plot is relatively compact at the beginning. First, the time travel, then the mystery of the body seizure, and then the use of the devil are all attractive. Later, the journey to the Heaven Staircase is like a blockbuster, one mystery after another, plus the mirror of reincarnation, and the Dayan Soul Ladder when entering the sect really whetted my appetite, but then it is very ordinary or even nonsense. And the protagonist has indeed shaped the image of the copywriter, but he lacks growth and will not think twice before acting without caution. This is what makes me most uncomfortable. Moreover, the author's literary talent is slightly lacking but his writing style is very good. He wanted to write at a high level and introduce philosophical ideas, but his literary talent was limited and he could not describe the style of the cultivation world. The characters were described by the number of words. I may have finished reading it like this, but it is worth mentioning that it is much better than the previous elementary school student's writing style, which to me is almost deformed. No matter what, this article is at least worth reading and thinking about carefully. The flaws are always not hidden. The first, second and third pages are written by a few big guys. I rejected other articles after reading the copy. I found that the good articles were all at the back, which really surprised me. Personal evaluation, don't start a fight, don't rise to the author's level. I'm just talking about my personal opinion, thank you.

After rewatching it for the past two days, I still burst into tears. The middle and latter parts were so cruel. Seeing Hu Tian struggling hard for Pangpang in a certain death situation, who could bear to leave the little fur ball alone! I wrote a tweet to a friend today that must have at least 1,000 words. I don't know if it was successfully promoted. In short, it is my No. 1 Sweet article on cultivating immortality. Although it is bitter most of the time, it still feels very sweet. It would be great if one day it could be animated, whether it's 2D or 3D, or comics, it doesn't matter. It's a pity that it's not even a book yet, blah blah blah. Why is it so cold? This is unscientific! I think it's because I didn't come up with a good name () It was said that I became an immortal for the villain. At first glance, I thought it was through the book. In fact, in order to become an immortal, the villain used evil magic to nail the protagonist's soul in his own shell to carry the thunder for himself, and pulled the protagonist into the world of immortal cultivation. Hu Tian was the one who was taken advantage of.

I've been waiting for days and finally finished reading it! It is really rare to have a hearty reading experience, and now my heart is surging and it is difficult to calm down for a while. I have fallen in love with the plots and characterizations you wrote since the beginning of He Yi Feifan. I also admire your writing skills and accumulation of literary knowledge. The story of Xiao Guiyan and Hu Tian is ups and downs but unconventional. It really makes me not want to stop at the ending - I am willing to read another 500 chapters of their happy life? Please forgive me for the semantically unclear comment I typed in the middle of the night. Thank you again for writing this novel??

How could it be gone? Extra! (Slaps on the table) Give me a side story! (Snaps the desktop wildly) Give me Sister Hu's extra story! ! !

I, I want a hundred extra chapters! ! ! ! Woo woo woo woo

The green onions were finally delivered. Here's my sister's soup!

In fact, when I first read this article, I had no feelings for Gui Yan, but later on, I suddenly fell in love with Gui Yan and even more with Hu Tian. (///▽///) It's so cute that my heart trembles.

Dad, come back soon, I miss you

Dad, when will you continue the story of Tianyan Mountain?

Woo woo woo, I burst into tears after reading this