Awakening

The story ended all of a sudden, and I felt a little strangely disappointed. Awakening is definitely a hack (at least in the works I've read), but it's also really well written. The character portrayal, the plot design, and the cross-conversion of story lines are all great. (But there is only one sentence left in the introduction below) I read the first two volumes during the winter vacation. Although you keep saying that the first volume of Awakening is hopelessly bad, I think it's okay (maybe it's because I didn't use my brain when I read it ×). I have been reading the last two volumes in the past two days. The plot is very compact and exciting. The conflicts and conflicts are climaxed one after another. Mog appears and lets Chang Sheng and Jiang Zheng know that the Black Dragon has been planning for resurrection for a long time. It is destined that the war between the five tribes and the Black Dragon will be a bloody one. Then Irene was accused, the Eggert royal family was destroyed, Mog ended his immortal reincarnation in the furnace of hell, Jiang Zheng stole the dragon bone and the Black Flame Stone and embarked on the road to escape, Baozi pretended to surrender to the enemy, and blew himself up to cover Chang Sheng Jiang Zheng's departure from Eggert. Later, after blindly dying in battle, Chang Sheng transformed into a dragon to break the situation, but fell into the black dragon's hands, fell into a deep sleep, and was bewitched by the black dragon step by step. (You are so good at knives. Not to mention the main cast with many roles, Irene, Mog, Baldur, Rey... And the spirit beings on the sea floor of the giant race in the second volume (forgot their names). They are long or short, and everyone has a knife hanging on their body. After Tafel broke away from the black dragon's brainwashing, he continued to secretly interfere with Lurek (suddenly he felt that Lurek was so useless. He was cheated and captured by Chang Sheng Jiang Zheng at the beginning, and was deceived by Tafel again. No wonder he was abandoned by the black dragon in the end), and won the black dragon. Qianye Liusha used Feng Ling's body to awaken Chang Sheng (the method was really simple and crude, and Feng Ling was beaten inexplicably). Frange persuaded Commander Bader to let the Far Eastern Army revolt. Only then did the situation begin to turn towards Chang Sheng. Chang Sheng led the rebel army to attack Talan. When the Far Eastern Army retreated steadily in the decisive battle of Talan, Ming Luo led the Southwest Army to defeat the Guards and reverse the situation. When I was watching this paragraph, I thought of the plot in The Twelve Kingdoms in which Yoko hides his identity as King Jing and joins the rebel army. When the rebel army is in trouble and confronts the imperial army, Jing Lin flies over to save the situation. However, it is far less tragic than the tragic feeling of Chang Sheng leading the Far East Army in a last-ditch battle and suffering heavy casualties. After the civil war ended, when I went to Wodo, I guessed that Chang Sheng might surrender to the enemy, but seeing the black dragon resurrected, Wodo falling overnight, and Chang Sheng becoming cold-blooded and ruthless was still a bit unacceptable. Later, during the battle in the Imperial Capital of Kenosus, Netherworld transformed into a dragon to fight but was expelled. I think it was not just because humans were afraid of the power of the dragons. The dragon-slaying war a thousand years ago has been forgotten by people. Except for a few insiders, ordinary people should not have strong hatred for the dragon clan. However, in order to prevent the black dragon from resurrecting, Chang Sheng made many warriors realize that the black dragon is the enemy. In addition, Chang Sheng once transformed into a dragon (white dragon) and fought against Ainota's army, which also affected the residents of Warwicks. After the black dragon resurrected, he captured Waldo and Egot, which made people think that the dragons are all evil existences. (I thought it was a bit outrageous that Chang Sheng was able to fight the Black Dragon in the last chapter and both sides were injured. After all, the Black Dragon was written to be so strong.) The hatred of aliens, the separation of lovers, the pain of eternal life, the obsession of thousands of years, the choice between true love and righteousness, everyone carries a tragic past and longs to change the tragic fate. After being cut to pieces by thousands of knives, this thorny novel finally comes to an end. The beautiful longing for the ending makes readers no longer care about the pain caused by the flying knives in the article, as if it is a bitter sugar that will eventually be rewarded. The ending... Is he! Although Waldo and Eggert no longer exist, although no one in the supporting role survives, and although the two protagonists are separated by yin and yang, it is still he!!! (It doesn't count as be anyway) By the way, are Lishi's demons and Elho's demons from the same clan? I feel that Lishi's demons are so strong and can push Mog to a narrow escape. Judging from the performance, Mog should be considered a strong player in T2 and T3 on Elhe's side. Finally, I want to complain, the black dragon is resurrected, five tribes are in danger, but only one tribe is in danger, the orcs (if the elves hadn't moved there in the end, I almost forgot about this tribe) and the giants were fishing all the time. The dwarves voted for the black dragon, and the elves came out of Qianye Quicksand, Blind and Wind Chimes. When it comes to fighting, the human race is in front, no wonder the demons are killing each other. (This is my first time writing a long review, and I feel like it's so messy...)

This article is the author's early work, and it is unavoidably immature in many places. However, the reading experience is like eating sugar cane - the more you read, the sweeter it becomes, and it gradually gets better. After reading the ending and looking back, I felt like I had long admired the name and downloaded it and tried to watch the Lord of the Rings movie in one sitting: In a different world, a group of people of all kinds met for various reasons and formed a team to embark on a journey. Their adventure is to protect and save this already scarred world. This is indeed the standard configuration of heroic epics, but compared to the common trend of heroism and epicness, the trend of this group portrait story is more realistic, because whether everyone is devoting all their strength to fight against the villains, or setting off a frenzy to destroy the world, the starting point and efforts are basically to ensure that the people around them who they cherish can live in peace and joy. Cherishing everything you care about may not seem righteous enough or macro-historical enough, and the protagonists who stumble and stumble along the way, covered in blood and scarred hearts, may not be so happy, but how can this not be considered a hero? Let's talk about the shortcomings of this article first. There are a lot of things to criticize in the full text, especially in the early stages, but compared to the sense of dislocation caused by the simple line description and the mixed-style world setting, the biggest feeling I got from the beginning is that the author hopes to lay out the entire world as soon as possible, and is very eager to share the complete story in his mind with the readers. This urgency seems to affect the pace of the article and the reading experience to a certain extent. Perhaps I am used to the fact that the world settings are gradually refreshed from near to far like game scenes. Under the impact of a large amount of setting information and the rapidly unfolding plot, I feel dazzled and overwhelmed. In the early stage, the customs and customs of this world were relatively weak. For example, the territory of the elves and giants is closer to a setting than a real-life land. However, after all, this has little to do with the main line. Moreover, if you want to list the authenticity of the fictional world and the adventure journey, the first reaction is also a world famous book such as The Lord of the Rings, which is also personally demanding. Let's talk about the advantages. The strong pressure of "dark clouds are pressing down on the city and is about to destroy it" is well created throughout the whole process. The sense of oppression and crisis brought by the black dragon is full, the hope of reversing the established fate is slim, and the atmosphere of the adventure is always shrouded in the shadow of despair is also well rendered. Although the atmosphere is relaxed and loving when the protagonists are fighting and falling in love, you don't know when the main plot will advance. Then the plot will turn sharply and twists and turns like a roller coaster, rushing all the way to a desperate fate line. It is very heart-wrenching and can't help but read on. Because of this, every time I see the protagonist group still able to make jokes (even if they are pretending to be light-hearted), it is really a relief, just like seeing that in the house that was almost bombed into ruins in the war zone, there are still people who don't forget to pick a wild flower and put it on the window sill. Because the desperate and heavy atmosphere was well created, I slowly became numb to the knife (no) (that is) (The author, how come everyone dares to knife) (How can he still be connected with the knife) (How can a pair be knifed twice) (Who can escape the knife in the protagonist, supporting role and background) (He died a great and heroic death, but why did he die) (None Liaodao Emperor really dares to write)... The author is really hard-working and pen-writing, creating characters one by one, becoming more vivid and three-dimensional little by little, and then letting them die generously one by one... What is terrible is that the readability and excitement in the middle and later stages have been greatly improved because of this, just like filling the flesh and blood under the skin and skeleton of the story. I dare not recall or list the various but tragic endings of the characters here, but when I read the ending of the full text, I even felt that it was okay and not too brutal - maybe because no matter how tragic the process was and how desperate the atmosphere was, the Black Dragon was indeed solved, and the huge price paid was not in vain after all. Because when so many people give up too much and pay too much for the same goal, the only thing that can comfort them is that they successfully achieve this goal. All other endings are failures, wasted efforts, and unacceptable. So, luckily it worked. Although the world is devastated and broken, and the damage caused will last for a long time, at least there is a future, and there is still hope. Finally, I want to say to the author, listen to me, thank you for not writing the ending as total annihilation!

Which comment deceived me into saying this was a sweet article? I can't accept it.

Where is the happy end? I am not happy at all.

Reading the author's article hurts my eyes so much that I can't stop crying. It's so cruel.

It's so well written, but it's so sad. Why isn't there a sweet side story to heal my wounded heart? T_T

I basically finished reading a novel with tears in my eyes "Awakening of Rebirth" What a coincidence, it happened to be the end, and my tears just fell. Watching Chang Sheng grow up little by little, but losing herself more and more, Jiang Zheng stayed with her and worked hard to bring her back to the right path. Originally Jiang Zheng was the one in the dark, but now they have become dependent on each other In this novel, many people died The righteous second brother (forgot his name) who once made a deal with the devil, divided himself into two personalities in order to keep his true heart. Mingluo's dazed determination In order for them to escape successfully when being hunted, Bao Zi (whose real name I forgot) would rather let Chang Sheng misunderstand him and hate him when he died than sacrifice himself. Qianye Xi, who was blind, died fighting to protect their safety, and she didn't know it until she died. Yun Tong wanted to tell her, stop torturing yourself, I will wait for you. Qianye Liusha has lived for more than two thousand years, guarding Waldo, but will never know the words that her beloved Phoenix asked Jiang Zheng to tell her, that she had forgiven her and asked her to let him go. Qianye Xi and Qianye Liusha have lived in regret and inability to forgive themselves for most of their lives. Baozi escaped after he and his sister fell into a trap, but later had to cut off his sister's limbs with his own hands. He watched the villagers kill all the "monsters" in the cave. In order to atone for his sins and save his sister, he learned alchemy. But there was still nothing I could do until death, the cries of my parents and my sister. Princess of the dwarf kingdom, innocent, died young by the demons The king of the dwarf country is pitiful. He took away his brother's love, made a deal with the demons, and abandoned everything just to be able to hold his lover when the end came. But the beauty has passed away, and the same goes for protecting himself and her children. The emotional line between Jiang Zheng and Chang Sheng is not abrupt, but natural and natural. Been separated, despaired, misunderstood, not understood, distrusted Chang Sheng lived for three hundred years in a world where Jiang Zheng was not around Fortunately, I am still at your side Arriving at the world and era where Jiang Zheng lived It's a pity that she originally promised to build a tower for Jiang Zheng, but she couldn't build it. It's okay, as long as we're still by each other's side ——"I'm here, but I have nothing. Will you leave?" ——"Never." As a result, I have been sad for a night, and my heart is broken into pieces? I still love Lao Jie's "Toxic Roommates" and "The Strongest Taunt". Drink some water slowly.

After Xiao Sheng turned black, I always thought that in the end, Xiao Zheng would reverse time and space and go back to before Xiao Sheng turned black to stop her and eavesdrop on the priest. But I can't help but wonder that it takes one life to reverse something, and it also takes one to tear open the cracks. How can one life do two things? In the end, no, time continues to flow in a world without hope, and those who have lost Chang Sheng are still fighting for survival and for their own protection. "In the face of difficulties and obstacles, he worked hard to win. If you sacrifice others for perfection, you are also inhuman. You are evil and others are good." Chang Sheng finally defeated the inner demon and fought with his partners to the end. Without relying on the reversal of time and space, the united people defeated the black dragon and the demons. A tragic story and a beautiful world. It would definitely look great if it were made into a series. It is also one of my favorite books with similar themes, and I will definitely come back to it in the future.

It's so cruel, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

I don't understand whether the ending is HE or BE.