Cultivating Immortality in the Countryside: The Brush Immortal

I originally thought it would be a long story There's a lot I haven't written yet. The connection between Tianyuan and Tianyuan The demon side The entanglement between the Gu King Dragon King and Long Shao and Li Changan The master's sect has been in seclusion for three hundred years. There was also a time when the brothers and sisters were all in the master's sect, but there was no writing. The destruction of the Nalan family, Luohualou, the Ax Gang, etc. Melancholy

It really ended in a hurry, the matter of the demon world was not mentioned, and the matter of the eldest brother was not explained. The eldest brother is truly amazing and talented. Even if so many people are involved now, and Gongyi Lin is involved, the game cannot be broken. We have to wait for another hundred years to continue this reincarnation. It ended too hastily, which is a pity

Even if we don't say it's unfinished, it's still a piece of cake! Many of the foreshadowings are not explained, they are just completed for the sake of completion. According to this ending, is it necessary to lay out the affairs of the Nalan family, Tianyuan and Tianyuan, Gu King Long Wang and Long Shao for so long in advance? ! Just deleting their storylines wouldn't have any impact on the plot, right? ! I can only say very disappointed. Judging from the comments, the author may have been delayed by other things in the middle of the process, causing the later stage to be unable to keep up with the previous arrangements, but it is undeniable that in my opinion it was a mess! !

Looking back now, it was not easy for the author to finish writing this book, and he felt tired just reading and speaking. I feel that the foreshadowing and main and sub-plots have actually been written very well, maybe there are still some unfinished ideas. If you have to pick it clearly, it will lose its flavor. Whether the senior brother's body is gone or whether he returns to another world, Xiao Linzi may have been relieved a long time ago. He should have guessed it and thought it through. As for the new painting keeper, the world is always full of dangers, let alone the world of cultivation where the strong are respected. There are also those old monsters hiding in the dark. Let's leave it in suspense whether it will ascend or not. The book is very good, both in the past and now.

I finally finished reading it. Generally speaking, it was very difficult for Yaoyao to write this article. The ending is indeed not good, which is a pity. First, let's talk about the senior brother line. This main plot is undoubtedly complete. We know from the previous warnings left by Master Wen and the senior brothers that they are all true. The new painting guardian will definitely fight again in the next hundred years. Is the plan to mend the sky feasible or not? We know, but even if the spiritual energy gushes out again, with the number of people ascending, the spiritual energy will return to its original point sooner or later. Therefore, it can be seen that this is not the fundamental method. I wonder how they will face this problem in the future, and whether they will also face the situation in "Peak". As for the eldest brother himself, we only know that he wears books, and we don't even know his real name. This part is also a pity. Next comes the other branches, the dual cultivation of Buddhism and Taoism that Lin Lin obtained earlier - it seems to be useful, but it seems not! And the immortal saint said that Lin Lin would disrupt the overall situation of the world, but after reading the full text, we know that Lin Lin is the decryptor passing by. The relationship between Tianyuan and Tianyuan has remained a mystery to this day, and the setting that was supposed to be a turning point in their relationship has also been left unresolved. Bai Bian is quite complete but there is no follow-up, and the Gu King and his new love Dragon King beat the scumbag Jing only appear in a fantasy world, and are willing to give Long Shaoyi the title of "the man who is full of falgs but lives to the end", and it is not said whether Nalan's family has been eliminated. Rewriting is so unrealistic, it can only be said to be a pity. After finishing this article, let's move on to the TV set.

I'm considering a second part, regardless of the outcome, but I hope they can shine in places I can't see.

I feel like the amount of information is enough for another side story or prequel or something like that.

I've finished reading it, I've finished it, woo woo woo, I feel like there's still a lot that hasn't been explained

In fact, there are still holes that have not been filled in, which makes me feel that their story is still going on.

Can you rewrite T T