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- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 169k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
Tags
60Chapters
1.1kFavorites
6.0Score
99Nutrient gifts
6.3kClicks per chapter
238Comments
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Reader comments 49
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The title of the book is confusing, and I was confused when I read it.
I like strong Chinese literature. I like everyone who praises our country ~ without any reason. Of course, some TV dramas that are too exaggerated are just too embarrassing. . .
After reading it, I felt a little strange, stumbled, and some things didn't make sense. The main line was clear, but the emotional line was unclear. Other characters, mainly the protagonist's character, are said to have lost their soul, but the division is very strange. I don't know what it is that I want to show is missing. There is a bit of infantilization on all sides. From the beginning, it is quite attractive. However, the subsequent portrayal of the protagonist does not reflect his special characteristics that can attract readers to like him, and it feels silly and unclear. The process is scattered and not connected, and the characters are unknown at the end. The appearance of Mr. Hu and the introduction of Jun Xiao were not well prepared, and the corresponding plot was too brief. The ending was too rushed and unclear. Finally, for Shi Tianyin, it just feels dull and too one-sided. After all, as the head of the monks, he should have corresponding characteristics in his dealings. Personally, I think it can be written longer and at the same time enhance the before and after reference. I hope you can continue to work hard!
Very nice But I don't know if I didn't read it carefully enough or the author really forgot to write it. It seems that the flower petal that can help the school girl who was killed to survive the disaster has never been sent?
I was also confused when I watched the ending. The ending, which had been on and off for so long, finally ended, but it was too sudden. It felt like the person I had been chasing for a long time suddenly disappeared, then appeared and quickly agreed to date, but at this time the relationship lost the original feeling. At first I thought the copywriting was pretty good and the body of the text developed just right, but then the development became weird. Although I understood that the plot development would be unusual, the last few chapters were unexpected. Wu Qing learned part of the truth and ran away, the roles of Uncle Hu and Jun Xiao, Shi Tianyin's character design was perfected, more introductions and interesting things about the inn... It felt like there should be a lot of development, but it was gone in the end. Anyway, everything happened too fast, and I didn't have time to make any other expression other than a confused look (눈_눈)
Wu Qing can control the 'prehistoric power' in his body, right⊂((x))⊃
WeChat red envelope~Boss Shi is still very smart. (/ω\)
Jun Xiao's story is "The domineering president fell in love with me"? There is no update today. . .
Ah! The psychic is called Junxiao ~ I suddenly thought of the word Bojunyixiao
? ? ? (ΘˍΘ=)Why hasn't it been updated for a long time?